This was absolutely lovely. Kichiro and Yume were just the healing they needed. Thanks so much for sharing your talents with us.

What the end...wahhhh! I can't believe we've reached the end. Though I guess we have reached our happily every after. I do like that you have shown a more realistic view of bringing home a baby. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

AWWWWWWWWW HOW CUTE !!! I cracked up at Sessh saying " we are going home " lol amazing chap :)

Oh my gosh I power-read the rest of the story today....I LOVE it! I was constantly getting hyped up for the next chapter to the point that when I ran out to the store today I was itching to get back home and read more! Everything is so detailed, from the real life drama of dancers, to the awful ways of abuse that human trafficking consists of in general, to the detailed protocol of a police officer...pregnacies...EVERYTHING! This is honestly now one of my most favorites- I'm 99.9% satisfied with this...which leaves the last .1% as a question; what ever happened to Kouga in the end?? It's clear he had a hand in the media blow-out, but oddly I noticed that there wasn't much else said after Kagome's comment to the media and Sess's interview...can't wait for the closing chapter!!!

Sango's attitude here in chapter 5 actually is very understandable. I'm a burlesque dancer, and have many pole-dancing friends that also dip into burlesque that have told me similar horror stories. I really like how real this all is too- from the way girls treat eachother to what actually goes down in those clubs. I'm pretty excited to see where this story goes!

Ahhh, I was on edge waiting for you to update and when Fanfiction notified me thatthe story was updated I literally fell off my bed in happiness.

I'm so sad the next chapter is the last! It was a good ride though! 

Awww i'm having baby fever ! Amazing chap :)

in chapter 29 'The Trip' there is a slight wrong choice of wording. 

"Does father have to whole weekend planned?” Is the question asked when it really should be: "Does father have to have the whole weekend planned?"

I really enjoy this story so far keep writing!

I only have one ok two small compaints about the entire story. 1) you can't scream and still have enough omph to push. 2) the plecenta has to be birthed also, so going to sleep that quickly would be unadvisable. passed that I loved your entire story seriously I read it in a total of 6 hours I couldnt put it down so here I am at 2:20 in the morning and I have work at six lol. I absolutly love a well written story, thank you.

I m so happy they adopted shippou toooo such lovely couplesT_T haww only 2 more chapters to go hehehheh i wouldn't mind  more chappie as long as its not something sad ^_^ thank you for updating 

I loved this chapter. I know this may be a dumb question but was the baby a full youkai with pointed ears or was he a hanyou with puppy ears? I love this story. I have been reading and keeping up with each chapter but I think this is the first time I have reviewed this story. Excellent writing. Looking forward to reading more.

Ooh loom at that SSS spoiler lol but I don't care I love it! 

that was perfect:)

Baby! I think I would have liked to see Shippou and Souta's reaction when they said they were gonna adopt Shippou as well. Though nothing like adding another kid to the bunch. I can't wait to see what happens next and to see everyone goo goo over Kichirou :)

Yes so happy. I'm still curious if she is gonna have another baby cause you made it seem like she could have been pregna with twins. But so happy. 

Interesting. dealing with normal issues, like kids being picked on and making time for just the two of them. I wonder how you're gonna wrap this up. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

-_- - _- i m just mad at those two kids and their parents ~_~

that was very sweet.

LOVED this chapter! Such an important topic. I'm sad to see this story ending but also happy, you've been doing such a great job with it.