OK...more confusion...first, you said the "snake was long gone", when they found Rin. Then, you have "as the healer took Rin and the dead snake with her to her chambers". So, which is it????
I'm confused....I thought the girls found Kirara in a village. Now, you have Miroku calling her and Hachi. Wasn't Kirara still with the girls???
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I hope Kagame and Kikyo notice that there necklaces are glowing, please update the next chapters quick. Keep it coming.
Katie (Chapter 28) - Sun 09 Jun 2013
so is this the Kirara they came along earlier? I was wondering if they set her free or she started traveling with the group...
I hope Rin is ok, keep it coming.
Please update the next chapter quick, keep it coming.
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Keep it coming, Happy Belated Mother's Day!
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All three chapters are great, keep it coming.
Both chapters are great. Happy Easter, Keep it coming!
Aww I was really getting into it lol! I really like it keep up the good work!
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Keep it coming, Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
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