Reviews for The Void by Hairann

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anon (Chapter 7) - Wed 29 Jul 2009
I was just thinking. They are in a void for weeks, without water or light. And for no reason at all they start to "make love". I dont know, but somehow the picture I got was dirty, stinky sex. Ewww. Was Kagome a virgin? What did she drink? Humans cant go on for more than a few days without water. Otherwise good story. The rating is off though. Its T, not M. No sex and hardly any violence. I still cant figure out how Jaken managed to smother Miroku. Jaken is a toad youkai. Small. And Miroku wasn't even sleeping. Its just impossible.

snowbird (Chapter 13) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
I was just re-reading your response from June on my profile sight about my last review. I still think she should have had the pup with her when she went to speak with Sesshoumaru. Let him think whatever he wanted. My intention would be for him to carry the face of his pup with him. A pup that he would cowardly abandon before joining the ranks of all the other deadbeat dads. Harsh? Hell yes. Kagome didn't create the pup all by herself but now she's stuck with raising it without a father. A relative cannot replace a father such as Inuyasha. I guess tonight caught me in one of my moods because I grew up without a father until my mother remarried right before I entered my teens. It was rough. I guess that's one reason I like to only read stories with happy endings. Real life has too many unhappy or angst endings.

Lauren (Chapter 13) - Sun 21 Jun 2009

Yay!! she had the baby! Too bad sesshomaru is being a hard headed asshole.....he'll change right? Update soon :)


snowbird (Chapter 13) - Sun 21 Jun 2009

I'm crossing my fingers and toes that you give this story a happy ending.  I absolutely hate sad endings.  They not only leave me feeling sad but also angry.  Also, I wish that when she went to speak with Sesshoumaru, that she had taken the pup with her.  I was disappointed that she left it behind in the hut.  I would love to have known if he would have shown any reaction with his son actually in front of him where he could see and smell it.  I wish you would reveal some of his thoughts, too, and not just Kagome's.


Sess Koibito (Chapter 12) - Sat 30 May 2009

Well ... at least Sesshomaru isn't going to kill her and/or the baby ... but it's so sad that he's already acting like a dead-beat-dad!  Will Kagome be able to go through the well again or has the baby permanently stranded her in the feudal era with Sesshomaru?  Please update soon!  I can't wait to read what happens next!


Lauren (Chapter 12) - Sat 30 May 2009

Im happy that you updated and sad that sesshoumaru's such a jerk! Keep writing, I wanna know what happens next lol


Chasing Blue (Chapter 11) - Mon 18 May 2009

I hope you know that you're very good at leaving your readers wanting more, I can't wait to see how you portray Sesshoumaru's reaction to the news...it should be very interesting.


Chasing Blue (Chapter 3) - Sun 17 May 2009

hahaha..."we should walk, I have no desire to touch you." Great line, totally sesshoumaru-esque.


Chasing Blue (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 May 2009

OMG, you just put sesshoumaru and kagome into a void and severed Miroku's hand in one fell swoop...and I have to say that that is probably the most creative way ever to get sess and kag together.  Why not let them get sucked up into Miroku's hand, yea, brilliant, why didn't I think of that.  I know the title 'the void' is pretty obvious but still I was totally shocked that it was Miroku's hand. I guess I was assuming it would be something to do with Kanna. Anyway, I have devoted many hours to reading fics and yours truly was the most original idea I ever came across, excellent job! I give you an A+++, not that you care, but I give it to you anyway. :D


Lauren (Chapter 11) - Wed 13 May 2009

OMG she's pregnant and she's not going to tell him!!!!! I am so glad you finally updated, I cant wait to see what happens next! update soon :)


Ikaru (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Apr 2009
Yay...they made it out ok!!! i was kinda wondering about the whole Noh mask shard....hmmm well i really like ur expaination of it :D....well now that they are out of the void what is going to happen???? i wonder....well guess i'll have to wait and see....*huggles* later Hair-chan!!!

Walter205 (Chapter 10) - Tue 31 Mar 2009
A very interesting and original approach to the story. I like where this is going so far, and if or when (and how) Kagome and Sesshomaru end up getting back together again. Perhaps Kaggy is now carrying Sesshy's Puppys? Mmm, this story is very interesting.

sunset in love (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
that's brilliant, though i really hope you would twist it a little to have sessh chasing after kag after escaping the void... well, you know what i mean... but make sessh suffer more kay...

hikari hime (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Feb 2009

Hmmm... I don't think you can rely this much on someone and then resume the same relationship as before... Kagome seems to realise it, but I wonder if Sesshomaru is going to be able to see things as they are...

This is all very good lass. I look forward to your next chapter.

Dewa mata


GreyEcho (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
I really like you fic and can't wait to see what happens next. I was really worried there for a second that Miroku was dead. O_o`! Glade to see he survived. ^.^

MontiK (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Feb 2009

Im so happy there's another chapter up ^.^ another wonderful one too! I hope poor Kags doesn't get all hooked and Sessh really doesn't care :( it's sorta sad.. Can't wait for more though!

MontiK


Ikaru (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 Feb 2009

I got a little confuzed a time or two as to who was talking, but other than that I really like the chapter!!! i can't wait to see what you come up with next!! Much luv Hair-chan!!


LC Rose (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 Feb 2009
Oh god, Hairann. Another splendid chapter. I always look forward to seeing what Kagome has to say in the beginning and forming the picture of the flashback in my mind. I'm glad Miroku wasn't killed, too.

MontiK (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 Feb 2009

I love this, it's totally new and really unique. The format you have with the introspection before the chapter builds alot of anticipation! You make me wish I could speed read! Pls write more soon!

 

Love your writing, MontiK


Lauren (Chapter 7) - Mon 12 Jan 2009
I love this story please update soon!

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