So sad her family is all having to die like that. Interesting look into Sesshoumaru's mind at the end there... good work!
So sad aboit Kagome's mother, I like how her brother wanted to stay. Interesting bit at the end involving Rin.
Wispr
(Chapter 14) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
The scene with Kagome putting the rosery's on the little one was bloody cute. Also his qeustion about his father was so sad.
Great work!
Wispr
(Chapter 13) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Bloody cute baby... I like how Kagome is planning on raising the tyke and love his name.
Wispr
(Chapter 12) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Simply wonderful work in how people, especially Kagome and Sesshoumaru's reactions. Also happy how you are doing Inuyasha being mature about the whole thing.
Wispr
(Chapter 11) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Was wondering if that was going to happen... I like the effect it had on Kagome's ability to time travel. Nice work on Inuyasha's reaction.
Wispr
(Chapter 10) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Love the imagery you used in describing their escape. Have to wonder if Inuyasha will smell what has been going on between those two!
Wispr
(Chapter 9) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Awesome chapter... the scene between Kagome and Sesshoumaru was very tastefully done.
Also great work on her developing feelings for him... coming across as very believable in a twisted short of way... ;)
Wispr
(Chapter 8) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
You had me wondering who it was talking to Sango... good work. Like how you are writing the groups on going reaction to the deaths.
Wispr
(Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Lovely work on how you write Kagome's thoughts and feelings within the void... also wondering if what happened ot the Monk is the real cause of the shardes getting closer.
Wispr
(Chapter 6) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
Wonderful work on Kagome's mindset and the ending was truly chilling. Great chapter!
Wispr
(Chapter 5) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
You got a real talent for capturing the odd effects existing in a void can have on a person... love how you are doing Kagome's perspective on these effects. Love the ending!!
Wispr
NtvHawnGrl (Chapter 19) - Fri 30 Oct 2009
I Loved this story and I can't wait the the sequel. As for a possible title how about A Journey of Redemption since Seshoumaru is seeking to right his mistakes hence Redemption and the story seems to be about the steps along the way to his gaining that. :) Hope all is well and that we see the first chap up soon!! :D
~NtvHawnGrl
(Chapter 4) - Fri 30 Oct 2009
Another great chapter, love how you did the rest of the gangs reactions to what is going on.
Great story and I'll be back later for more!
Wispr
(Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Oct 2009
Awesome work with how you wrote Kagome inner thoughts about her and Sesshoumaru's time in the void. Love how you had them interacting in this chapter... so very in character.
Also like how she figured to find a way out... realistic and believable.
Wispr
(Chapter 2) - Fri 30 Oct 2009
Interesting enough you did great work on describing "nothingness"... I like the interplay between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.
Wispr
autumngold (Chapter 19) - Fri 30 Oct 2009
This has been a totally heartbreaking story. I like that Kagome never blamed Sesshoumaru for his actions, but took responsibility for her own. Very unusual. It makes me sad that she, except for her son, never had any happiness. I'm also sad that Sesshoumaru, in the years since her death, never tried to get to know his son. Why? Was he still ashamed of Kagome or was he just ashamed of himself? Thank you for writing this story. I can't wait for the sequel.
Yay a sequel! I so enjoyed reading this story and can't wait to read the next. Bravo!
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