i like the story thus far but please update it soon i sure your most likely busy but still would like more chapters.
Near the beging when Sesshoumaru's beast spoke, (He is an insult to male inu the world over.) did you wish to write it like, "He is an insult to the male inu around the world." or, "He is an insult to male inu around the world." well there is another way of writing that to but I'm just not up to writing that much this morning.
lol This chapters funny. You could elaborate it more to make it longer and add all sorts of tid bits. -shrugs- If your up for a long run anyway. It was funny and cute. ^-^
Oh, so far in the middle somewhere, you wrote.
(The rest of the tachi rushed over and all gave a cry of utter surprise at waht they saw.)
You got 'waht' mixed with 'what'. Other than that I wanted to ask. Did the Tachi actually just shrug the encounter off so easily? It's like "Were going to kill you." Mode to. "What?"
Eh... maybe that's just my weird question. -shrugs- Well your plots pretty good. lol I'll read whats next.
Update soon!
Demonic Vampriss (Chapter 2) - Fri 24 Aug 2012
Did Kagome get turned into a youkai? Do i get cake now??? And a cookie????
Keep it coming.
Suka25 (Chapter 2) - Fri 24 Aug 2012
More!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!
~*Dragon*~
Nyx (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Aug 2012
I like it. Please update whenever.
This is great!!! Please update soon!! I was so into this storY
uh oh.. this is just a litte weird.. I wonder what will happen adn who is Inupapa? I have only heard the term being given to Inutaisho in other fanfics. GREAT CHAPTER
Sena (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Aug 2012
I LOVE IT, that was sooooo cute, I can't wait for more ^_^ I think i have a slight idea what might be happening but im not sure, i can't wait to find out! and Thank you For the dedication!
I will definately be anxiously awaiting the next chapter! It's so refreshing to read something that doesn't resemble anything i have read before.
This story is just too cute! Update soon!
This is absolutely adorable. I wonder... Sesshy is going to fall in love with the mini Kagome and want one just like her, so when he finally opens his big cold heart, she gets reverted back to her proper self, falling in love for the Youkai as well, or something like that. Wild guess!
Raven (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Aug 2012
| This is such a cute and well written story. I love Kagome's personality and giving Inuyasha a dog treat:):)priceless. If I had to guess I think Kagome has both Miko and Youkai powers that's why Seshomaru could not find her. Maybe she was blessed by an Inu Kami?
Keep it coming.
AWWWWWW!!! that's so cute. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
marci (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Aug 2012
Such a cute and funny story, can't wait to see how the story goes.
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