One other thing: At the beginning of Chapter 3, you might want to warn folks about the content. Even though this has the highest rating, not everyone can handle this kind of abuse.
This story has so much potential! So beautifully descriptive, but yet I'm missing what these beings are. I saw where you mentioned 'faeries' but is that what they are? And forgive me if I completely missed it. I've been known to miss the obvious... a lot.
I like how you've incorporated the characters into this tale, Inuyasha is the Prince of their little rhelm, Kikyou is his betrothed, albeit via an arranged marriage. Kaede is the healer, and of course, Naraku is the bad guy. But here, nobody knows it.
I'm dying to know where Sesshomaru comes into this tale and how he fits into hopefully her knight in shining armor?
Please thank your beta dianne for referring this lovely little tale to me. I'll be watching!
Z
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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