Omgoodness, this is getting exciting again can't wait for more. Thanks for the update

Ja ne till next time and keep up the great work

Ah, a well waited twist!! Plot is still flawless and I would live to know Sess's thoughts on all that's going on, though I expect that will happen soon enough as things pan out a bit more and Kagome gets closer to her departure. I wonder what news will Shippo provide of what has happened since she escaped the village and maybe if araku has new plans for finding her? All so intriguing.

Nothing dissapoints,

tx2

Come it, keep it coming.

Major late but great chapter, keep it coming.

Awe man, a cliffy.  Really looking forward to another update, can't wait to see is kagome can fly yet or if she's gotta build those muscles up.  I'm kinda scared about this feast, surely someone with connections to Naraku will be there and all hell will break loose.

ja ne til next time and keep up the good work

Please continue this story!! I am so intrigued by it. It is a different take on the average sess and kags fanfic and I am dying to see how this progresses! I don't leave reviews much bc I am very bad with words lol but please please update soon <3 

I've read the newest chapters but I finally decided to review after having re-read this one.

I absolutely adore how you personify Sess in this story, he's just perfect. He is simple, he does as he wishes and that's so him,

And the attraction between the two is just beautiful. Kagome struggling to pull herself together because of her tramatic experiences as a rape victim and just living in that horrid village in general and Sess's obvious struggle to withhold himself from her while she's healing even though he clearly wants all of her- he does not want to be the one to damage her any further and just wants to her to see herself for the beauty she is.

This tale has so much in it and I can't wait until everything starts to come together and we get some answers revealed! But at the same time I love what the wait brings.

Keep it up!

I have no complaints.

Wanted to let you know I'm still hanging in there and adore this story

Ahaha...I don't know what I would do if he was acturly the lord of that castle Ahahahaa... Nice, what will you do now Kagome.  

So Naraku is still after her.  I wonder why, or more to the question of how, the elf village came to know of her, or that they would go so far as to help Naraku a foreigner to their lands.  Regardless to his rank, I don't think if someone came into my neighborhood who was saught by a foregn dignitary that I would know it, or do anything about it if I did.

Though Is suppose suchthing don't mater in story.  Yours I am enjoying reading btw.  Keep up that wonderful writing of your now.

Nyuka

Keep it coming.

Omg I was right!?!?! I am never right! I am glad I was though! Please update soon I can not wait for the next one! (:

Sweet baby jesus, I am so happy there was an update.  Gah what is going to happen to their relationship now that Sess has reached his home?  I am excited to see what her new wings will look like, if they changed color got some new attachments and all that?  Will she ever learn to sing to nature again?

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

OMG, this girl cannot win for loosing.  I hope Naraku doesn't catch her in this village, I was hoping that Sesshomaru was tailing her.  GAH, poor Kagome she doesn't know that Sesshomaru doesn't care about her scars and stuff he fell in love with her too.  These people and their communication skills.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

Sesshomaru for the rescue ?? Maybe ?? Please update soon!

Evovia hunter,

I appreciate your review, you are mostly correct to say that no one else has really offered criticism of my story, and I do not feel flamed by your review. What I am about to say may come off as ingrateful, but that is not the case, it is merely the truth as I see it.

This is my first ever story that I have written because I want to, and I have never written for an audience before. That being said, I have always been told that my writing organization and transitions are weak and careless, so I did not really expect that to change when I started writing this. I do have a beta reader, and she does an awesome job helping me with my story (plotting, details, how to get from one place to the next, typing errors) trust me when I say, you would be AMAZED by how much she does for me, but at the same time, she does not try and change my writing style, she doesn't say "Oh this transition was kind of weak, you should work on it" and if she did, I wouldn't know what to do with it. 

I am not the best writer, the concept of transitions seems to escape me, and for the moment there is nothing to be done for it. Maybe in a few years, as I write more and explore creative writing classes and the like in college, I will become a better writer and I will be able to go back and edit and improve this story, but for now I'm afraid you will have to forgive my transgressions and read it like it is. 

As for my first person POV character changes, I like them. I really like being able to give a glimpse of the feelings opposite Kagome's. I try and make the distinction clear when I change the POV, but sometimes I won't be able to. For example in the chapter I am currently writing, there would just be a huge empty space between scenes with out switching the POV, and while some would prefer that, I feel it would be lacking. I am insistent about details, and I want the reader to know what is happening so POV change. This is something I am not willing to negotiate on, I do not plan to change it and it will continue to happen. I can't offer you anything more than an "I'm sorry you feel that way." on this subject. 

I hope that despite this you will continue to read my story! 

Thank you again for your review!

To other recent reviewers if I have not responded to you directly already. I LOVE hearing from you, and I am glad to see that you all are still reading and enjoying the story. Look for some happy moments in the near future, but don't forget there are still some serious things Kagome will have to face, not everything will be fluffy happy-go-lucky, but then again, I don't know that the story would be any good if that was the case!

Anyway, much love to you all, and I hope to hear from you again on future chapters!

Thanks again!

~Miz

Definitely an interesting story.. I like the way you do not rush, and describe the situations so vividly.... But, I've got to say, you really do like tormenting poor Kagome (and us readers - seriously, such a cliffhanger!), as if she hasn't been through enough... And I have a feeling that it's not going to get better soon -.-

Well, I await the next chapter eagerly, good job!

~lily

Wow!! What suspense!! I REALLY hope you update soon!!! You are absolutely enthralling!! Awesome work!! Can't wait to read more!

Sorry I am too lazy to log in. I read through your reviews and saw that they are pretty much bubble gum and  cherries so I guess I shall be the rain on the parade. Normally I do not read first person stories because it is rare that an author can write a corherent story using first person. This is one of those cases. You had me up until like 9 or 10th chapter.The main thing that I want to touch on it that it is bad form to switch your first person character during the story. If you really want to tell the story in multi perspective, it is better to write in third person. The fact that you are switching who your first person character is choatic to the reader and takes away from your chapters because not only do we have to pay attention to what is happening in the story we now also got to figure how who's perspective it is coming from. I would look into rewriting some of the chapters. The story plot is there and the characters are rather interesting. I just think the style of writing needs some work especially on litarary divices and transitions. Prehaps a beta or something to help with it? Just a thought. I am in no way trying to flame you or anything and respect that every author has a unique writing style. That being said I do also think stories should be written to be read fluidly. Feel free to message me with your response to this. I would say update but I would rather you go back and edit in all honesty. This story has great potential. It just needs some touching up. 

Cheers,

Evovia hunter

Oh no... is she going to be all right? Maybe give her some shoes? -puppy dog eyes-

It's been two months since you updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapter quick and not in months. Keep it coming.