Wonderful, Amazing! But one thing.... MAKE MORE MY GOD!!! (really overboard with the story) This is totally going into my 'Good fanfic to read' and my 'Read the rest' lists. :D Just the way the story is inclining is wonderful :D
Update soon........thank you
HMMMMM I AM SEEING A MIX OF THE BREEDER BY TEXANLADY AND THE SENTNAL MOTHER Y DEMONLORDLOVER oops orry about the caps i must say the mix is.... nice? i shall look forward to more of this story try to add a little more depth as this is the first chapter i will wait to ee for more as for the just the story line wonderful idea and nw on to chapter two!!!!
sam (Chapter 9) - Wed 22 Aug 2012
Please update
I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
Azumii (Chapter 8) - Thu 07 Jun 2012
I do love this fanfic! Please update soon!!! xoxo
I hope Kagome and the kids make it home without a fight!
jess (Chapter 7) - Tue 29 May 2012
great story
I'm loving your story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
I really love both of your stories. Please update them as soon as you can.
seshy lover (Chapter 6) - Sun 15 Jan 2012
WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!! IM BEGGING U!!!!
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for the next installment of marked.
Venita (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 Jan 2012
This chapter was hilarious, please update soon.
sess is so mean to his pups :\
I don't think we've seen the last of that silly Inuyasha. Feed him to the wolves in the Eastern Lands? More like him ripping them apart. But I'm looking forward to seeing Sesshomaru marking kagome as his mate. Can't wait for the next chapter.
update soon please! I really enjoy your story!
So far so good i like where this story going but there are tons of mistake that need to be corrected some of these sentances doesn't make any sense at all but i believe i know where you trying to go , so if you have the time please try fixing them , if not you can always ask for a beta reader ; I really like this story so please dont be discourage by my review i just want to help you at anyway i can , :3 .
I have a bad feeling about all the commotion. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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