OMG...... i am in need of a cold shower. I bow before you. I love this story and the rest of them =D Please more?
Sorry, I can't seem to long into my account, but the above is my real user name. I don't think this is really a submissive at play. This feels very, very much like rape. And although I enjoyed the beginning of your story a little too much, towards the end, it just leaves me with a really sickened feeling. You're a wonderful writer, but I don't know how much of this you should rationalize as "coaxing". This feels exactly like coersion. I understand sometimes a writer likes to imagine happy endings for their couples, but as much as I wish I could read this fic, it's just too much.
lashon (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
i love! bj's are great and im so excited you included that in your story!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
Hi, I think you superb writing skills and I have seen a few minor mistakes that were very posably made by your spell check.
I probably shouldn't even write this, but I'm sorry to say that I can't continue reading this. Normally I'm fairly okay with a servent/lord relationship in a dokuga story, but this time I find that for my taste this was less an 'unwilling but at least it gets better' fic and more just humiliation and rape account. If that's your thing, then by all means continue as you have amazing writing prowess, but maybe for the more squicked readers like me you could throw in a bit more, I don't know, understanding? Like maybe Sesshomaru and Aimaru at one point feel bad or at least sympathetic for Kagome. Maybe just Kagome's disgust. I just think the canon Kagome wouldn't ever find this okay.
What ever you do, please don't take this as anything but constructive critism. And continue writing what you like.
Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
That was so hot. I'm kind of jealous that I'm not kagome.
I realy really really love this story.... i was all giggly when i saw it was updated!!!!! =D
catrice (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
I agree with Ashleysama, I am in need of a very cold shower.. wow.. umm..ya that was HOT! Keep it up!
>_> Sesscat
Ashley (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
Uh hum....yeah so...I think that...yeah....and then that part....you know....where they...hum....I need another chapter, then a cold shower...
-Ashleysama
Wow...just wow..0.o, I think...welll...ummm...yeah...that part with the...ummm...yeah, ok, just update!
Whoo, that was a little, damn, can't find the right words. I know i liked it though, a very interesting chapter to say the least.
Ashley (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Dec 2011
Have I told you how much I love you...you are inspiring to write my next chapter right now. Keep writing.
updae soon
o.o i'm really torn on this fiction. Like i love it, and i hate it, b/c i can't stand the humiliation she's going through for them. like i hope she gets a sword and kills herself jsut to be free of them. i dunno. i'm happy and upset? :\ this one's not as easy a read b/c it's kidna bordering on unconsentual sex which is kinda .... i dunno... i just can't really swing with this one as well. I feel too much for kagome, and i think if i were her i would have commited seppuku.
and then be a vengful spirit that no one can get rid of.
Update soon, I'm curious to see what is gonna happen next.
*lurks*
oooooo this looks like this is going to be very intersting. I can't wait for more =)
I hope Kikyo finds Inuyasha and they kick her ass out, that would be justice. Hm, can't wait for the next chapter, though I'm sure school will distract me from it eventually thinking of it. Loved this chapter though, it was nice getting some more backstory.
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