GREAT CHAPTER!!!! I DIDN'T THINK IT COULD BE PULLED OFF BUT YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB...
I WILL ADMIT RELUCTENTLY THAT I READ THIS STORY AND WHEN I GOT TO THE THIRD CHAPTER (I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW I HAD GOTTEN THAT FAR UNTIL I LOOKED...) I STOPPED READING, THINKING TO MYSELF 'IT'S JUST NOT MY CUP OF TEA', BUT THEN I THOUGHT ABOUT IT AND CAME BACK TO IT...
I FORCED MYSELF TO GET THROUGH THE SCENE...
(YOU KNOW HOW SOME STORIES START OFF BAD BUT THEN IS AMAZINGLY GOOD AFTER???) WELL, YOURS STARTED OFF GOOD, THEN IT HIT THAT OPINT FOR ME, THEN I FORCED MYSELF TO GET THROUGH IT THINKING THAT IT HADS TO BE AMAZING... I JUST HAD TO READ FURTHER...
WELL I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOUR STORY IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I JUST HAD TO ADJUST TO THE SCENE OF THE STORY AND THE MOOD ALSO... YOU GOTTA THINK ABOUT IT... I READ YOUR OTHER TWO STORIES FORST AND THEN THIS ONE...
I HAD TO ADJUST TO THE SWITCH LOL...
WELL, I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS REVIEW!!! I DIDN'T INTEND TO WRITE THIS MUCH, BUT I FELT I NEEDED TO!!!
MOVING ON >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess
I KNOW THERE'S ANOTHER CHCAPTER AND I HOPE SESSHOMARU STOPS HIM FROM DOING WHAT HE WANTS TO TO...
AMAZINGLY VIVID AND AWESOMELY WRITTEN...
MOVING ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess
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