Oh gahd. 'Play dead'. I'd type in all the different sniggering/chortling noises here, but it'd take awhile. However, I am making them. Very awesome!

ohhh if that was during a different time, Kagome would be in big big trouble! lol XD haha "play dead" i like it - that's funny! XD and idk how dumb this sounds - by my tired mind actually thought of something - Kagome sits Inuyasha - and that's a command for a dog. omg how many years did it take for me to figure that out?!? XD ahahahaah wow... he doesn't really sit though so maybe that's why... he goes face first in dirt O.o lol eh sorry... my brain is becoming fried from studying! back on target here: i like the story so far and i can't wait to read more! i love stories that are just for humor purposes! :) i need humor in my life lol XD ja ne! :) and happy writing! :)

Good! I'm very curious what word Kagome is going to use? Here are a few: freeze, calm, sneeze. Or the word sleep, so he could be carried back to the well. But I suppose Stop! makes the best sense, since it would help with many situations. I like your story, so please keep writing. Thank You.

I think the writing came out smoothly. I would also like to know if he changes his mind and his reaction to her time.