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SesshyUchiha (Chapter 22) - Wed 16 Nov 2016

OMG you need to update this I love this story so much!!


Christine (Chapter 22) - Tue 15 Nov 2016

This is a wonderful story to read. Very happy to read new ones as they come. 


Lady T (Chapter 22) - Thu 10 Nov 2016

I really liked the way you began fixing this issue between Kagome and Shippo. It was really powerful and sweet but I'm excited for the next update. I'm curious to what his secret is and how it impacts the group and especially Kagome.

That also brings up the question how long ago did Shippo learn about inuyasha and kikyo and not say anything? I wonder is that why he feels guilty. 

Update soon please and thank you!


Nyuka (Chapter 22) - Wed 09 Nov 2016

I love your story... and I admire your ability to come back to it even after long breaks... your characters have great deapth and you have taken care to let their personality florish as apposed to them becoming puppets to the authors power.  I find the reawakening of Shippo to be heart warming and makes me curious to see how their relationship dinamic will change... speaking of relationships I love how Inuyasha was given a chance to make up a little good faith... I would like to see more of the relationship development between Kagome and Sesshomaru... she still knows little about him while he knows her favorite food... is the cool Sesshomaru gone for good? Does he get to play a part the is bigger then the mate of the personified yinyang?  To be honest befor you let it out that Kagome would be absorbing the darkness, I some how thought that would be Sesshomaru's role... I was wrong and I'm cool with that... I await to see the story unfold.

-Nyuka


Shae_Nichole (Chapter 22) - Tue 08 Nov 2016

This is so beautifully written... I ended up falling in love with your character and storyline development. I eagerly wait to read more


Deana (Chapter 22) - Mon 07 Nov 2016

Awesome chapter! I'm glad she was able to bring him out of his grieve.


teresa daniel (Chapter 22) - Mon 07 Nov 2016

HI ,  I LOVE YOUR FANFIC......BUT COULD YOU UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY.......ITS TAKING FOREVER TO FINISH THIS FANFIC...........................................TDANIEL


Serena530 (Chapter 22) - Mon 07 Nov 2016

I think you did good with this chapter.  I never thought of how she was going to get through to him, but this was a good way.  He needed to understand her thoughts and feelings to understand why she left and that it wasn't a rejection of him.  I especially like how Shippo confronted Inuyasha.  That was a nice touch.

I don't know if I'm remembering right, but didn't Shippo have a secret?  It wasn't his confrontation with Inuyasha right?  That wouldn't be much of a secret?

Can't wait for your next chapter. :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 22) - Sun 06 Nov 2016

This was an excellent chapter. It gave us a look into Shippou's mind and memories. It was very sad but I love how Kagome finally reached him to bring him back to himself. It is a turning point but I am still wondering about Kilala's fate or did I miss something? Iamsolooking forward to future chapters and to find out what Shippou's secret is. Fantastic writing and very touching job you accomplished.


wiccawoman (Chapter 22) - Sun 06 Nov 2016

Very awesome chapter, it had me in tears, it was very touching! I can't wait for the next chapter.   :)


sesshykagslvr (Chapter 22) - Sun 06 Nov 2016

This was a BEAUTIFUL chapter!! Kudos to you. You had me almost in tears it was very emotional. I loved how you descirbed Shippo's father and how such a strong being could be killed so easily. I know nothing of kitsune lore but the way you portrayed him was well done. I also enjoyed Kagome finally being able to share her heart with Shippo...you have no reason to be nervous. Very well done. Looking forward to more.


Nilee1 (Chapter 22) - Sun 06 Nov 2016

This is a wonderfully moving chapter. I have to admit to being tear-eyed as I read. This is some of your best work

Thank you!

 


Leahchan13 (Chapter 21) - Sat 15 Oct 2016

Oh I do hope she gets threw to Shippo! I think this chapter was wonderfully done! I can't wait to see what happens next :D


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 21) - Mon 19 Sep 2016

I had to read this whole story over again because I had to bring myself up to speed and I love this story. It is sad and dark but beautifully written but I have a question, where is Kilala? I only heard her mentioned maybe once and that was at the beginning of the story when she had to subdue Shippou when he went feral.

I am so looking forward to more chapters and then the ending of this lovely story. You have a great imagination. Excellent piece of writing.


Renata Higurashi (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Sep 2016

Love this story..

More apdet please and sesshyKag romance so much more..

I'll be waiting 


mangageek (Chapter 21) - Sun 18 Sep 2016

I think your story is going pretty fantastic! And I love it dearly, so far each one of your updates have been well worth the wait~ ^^


Deana (Chapter 21) - Sun 18 Sep 2016

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what Kagome shows Shippo and what Shippo's dark secret is. I'm so glad that you didn't abandoned this story/ I'ts one of my favorites. Please update soon.


Lady T (Chapter 21) - Sun 18 Sep 2016

Omg! I NEED THIS STORY FINISHED!!!! I'M AT WORK SCREAMING CAUSE I, WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

 

NEED UPDATE!

 

on a calmer note, love the story and plot. Love the character development and I like the pace of the story not to slow but not to fast 


Silverblossom (Chapter 21) - Fri 16 Sep 2016

I wonder what the hell Shippo is hiding..


Silverblossom (Chapter 18) - Fri 16 Sep 2016

I honestly cried in this chapter. Bokusenou's death literally made my heart clench and the tears to start falling. I am with the twist..that it's Kagome who has such a deep commection with the tree not the inus.


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