Another story! I bow before your ability to convey so much in so little words :)

nice. its ominous but only becuase its so cheerful. I can't wait to see where this story goes :)

Im so excited!! now I can say that Ive been with this one since the beginning, and like all of your works im looking foward to seeing where this one meanders over towards.

Good luck and Happy writing!!

-Fishy!

I don't know how you do it, but you manage to convey so much in only a few words. It's really amazing, and the final line makes me smile and shiver a little since it has so many layers to it.

I really can't wait to read the chapter chapter.

oh, dear, that sounds sort of like my life - the moment everything looks like its going good... Murphy visits, and I hit the bottom of the barrel I didn't even notice I was in.  Poor Kagome...

Amber

another story to brighten my day. ^-^ looking forward to more.

Never cautious that one. Well, at least she's in a good mood, right? LOL

I can't believe you've started the next story already (yes, the drabble was posted a couple of weeks ago, but still)! Off to a great start. This one seems more bed-time story-ish. I like it already! ^o^

Good luck!
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

hahah so far, im loving it. the closing sentence is gold. 

*snicker* that never ends well... lol kinda like saying "hey y'all watch this"

I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment. ^_^

Oh Forthy~ I can't wait to see where you take this! That last line had me giggling pretty hard, by the way!

~Ava