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lara (Chapter 15) - Tue 22 Feb 2011

I'm kinda hoping that when Sessh leaves the next time that Jaken gets annoyed with Kagome & tells her not to talk to him  because he can't wait till his Master (Sessh) exchanges her for the sword & that she's nothing more than a worthless human that his Masters is using as a pet whore till the half breed trades the sword for her & then when Kagome asks what he's talking about Jaken tells her didn't she notice she was a pet whore & how could she not know since the entire castle knows & didn't she know why everyone at the castle hates her & that while he is surprised that even though having a human whore dress like a pet was in he didn't expect his Lord to get a lowly human pet whore but since she'll only be around till his Lord gets the sword from the half breed or till his Lord is tired of her it doesn't mean anything to Jaken as long as his Lord is happy for the moment but she should know her place & not talk to him (meaning himself, Jaken).

I would love to see Sessh come back & see Kagome's upset,hurt aura & her asking to be taken to the well & when he tries to get her to play with him thinking that will make her happy & waits for Jaken to fall asleep,puts up his barrier & tries to get Kagome to put on the cat costume & when she refuses to wear it or let him touch her ,it would be great to see him feel physical pain in his chest & anger from his beast for being responsible for her hurt...& when he tries to calm her,touch her & talk to her, asking what is wrong... she can ask him...is it true & him asking is what true & her saying that you manipulated my feelings into thinking you cared for me just so you could take my virginity & use me as a pet whore till you can trade me for the sword or till you get tired of my body & that everyone in the castle knew this & that was why she was treated that way by everyone there?? I would love to see him have to look at , smell & feel the pain in her aura & start having to deal with what he's feeling ......& what he's going to do or say,how to answer.

Of course this would be a perfect story for her to really end up being some sort of rare Miko/Inu youkai that are revered in youkai society & that the reason she could pick up the sword was because his father & her father were close & together when they found out what his pup was to be born as had decided to hide her in the future under a spell as a human miko & that she'd be pulled into the well & the seer had told them that Inu no Taisho sons would bring her to his tomb & that............being as hurt & upset as she is it triggers her transformation into the Miko/Inu Youkai & Sessh knowing how rare it is takes her back to his castle & finds all kinds of info about her in his dad's journal & how she's the only Miko-Inu Taiyoukai ever & will be the most powerful & birth the most powerful pups & that since the 2 dads knew Sessh would be a powerful tai youkai so, the 2 dads made a blood bond that would bring Kagome & Sessh together & that Sessh would feel terrible pain if he hurt her & if he broke the blood bond to keep her safe till she reached full power &/or Mated her, then Sessh would keep feeling pain & being drawn to her as she'd be the only one his inner beast recognizes as Mate & while reading finds out that his dad was so proud of him & had such high hopes & knew he'd mate the rarest,most powerful miko inu youkai & have the most powerful pups that he knew he'd never have to worry cause with her Sessh would have a great & powerful destiny & then he adds in his journal just in case Sessh doesn't realize this or something goes awry he hopes his son reads this & knows to find her as her pain could be his pain & her death would mean Sessh would  never Mate or have pups & live a life of loneliness & hopelessness that would lead to complete weakness..... & after reading this Sessh would be have to realize how badly he messed up & how much more important she is than a sword & understands now why he wasn't feeling right & how when Jaken said what he did to her,how much it must have hurt & realizes he's only feeling the tip of the ice berg & with more tormenting from his beast,,,Sessh realizes if she leaves him...it's his fault because of his greed & his selfish & harsh actions he may have done something that will ruin his life,his future & he'll suffer this pain that will only get worse & now he has to find a way to fix this...Sorry I don't know why I went off on that idea but boy did I run with it... huh???

Well I look forward to the next update

 


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 15) - Mon 21 Feb 2011

Oh my, Inuyasha's having a tizzy and Sesshomaru has blue balls because he's starting to care more for Kagome than the sex. YAY Drama! XD I think it's sweet he didn't push her into a rut session when he knew she didn't feel like it. Sesshomaru is starting to be a little less of a douchebag. Yus! Can't wait for the next chapter! <3


smcandy (Chapter 15) - Sun 20 Feb 2011

Not much sexual action in this chapter I’m semi disappointed. I look forward to another chapter hopefully more foreplay and what not with the mokomoko-sama will be introduced sometime in the story.


Sala (Chapter 15) - Sun 20 Feb 2011

After all the time he has invested with Kagome, I wouldn't think that Sesshoumaru would give her up for a sword he doesn't need.  But then again, he is a total douche in this fic...


smcandy (Chapter 14) - Wed 09 Feb 2011

All I can say is more update. I hope to see more of Sesshaomru jerk off with his Mokomoko and pump himself. Gotta admit it was a bit f turn on. Good work update again please.


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 14) - Fri 04 Feb 2011

I just realized I haven't reviewed this chapter yet. >.<  I r a bad Shadow. But, I liked the slow pace at which this is moving. Nice gradual ease into the weirdness that's to come. And it looks like she's going to befriend Jaken too, though if he gets invovled with the @_@ I don't know what I'm gonna do. No amount of bleach will destroy that. But yeah,  see you next update!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 14) - Mon 31 Jan 2011

gah stupid evil dog >:l JERKFACESESSHOMARU!!!!


lara (Chapter 14) - Mon 31 Jan 2011

I hope he starts to realize soon that he's falling for her & can't imagine being without her before he does something stupid like lets another male touch her & she freaks out or he thinks it'll be fine & then finds that he was wrong he doesn't want to share her & ends up in either physical pain at another touching her or his beast lets loose attacking the other man after fighting with Sessh about abusing their Mate...I would love to see Sessh's beast get involved & possessive over Kagome ,I would love to see Sessh's beast start to terrorize him....isn't his beast supposed to be like a conscious or moral compass of sorts also coming out when his life is in danger or when they find their Mate???  That would be funny if the feelings he's getting inside are his beast trying to contact him & starting to break thru it's cage because he started to bury it deep inside at a young age when he was becoming aware of it & his father was trying to tell him he needed to listen to it that his inner beast was important & had instincts that Sessh would need but Sessh being as stubborn as he is &  cause Sessh didn't like the idea of an inner beast telling him anything & Sessh felt he'd never need the help of something so simple as an inner beast he spent the yrs he was supposed to devolop a way of communicating with it instead he worked on silencing it,restraining it & ignoring it,never taking into account that the beast is apart of him & no matter how much he may not want to deal with it......when his inner beast is needed or has something it needs to get across it can make him sick,weak or take over in any order it wants.

Oh, he's being such an insufferable ass with the plans he has for Kagome that even his oldest,closest friend the only one he'd discuss such things with was horrified & knowing that Sessh has never done such a thing & isn't willing to help,even his friend & his friend's Mate are waiting to see this backfire on him since Sessh has never had a female close,everyday & especially an intelligent ,caring one that has a powerful aura that can become habit forming as it calms & soothes & that the loss of something like that once you've had it....can be very painful....especially when the being you are dealing with is like Kagome. His friend met Kagome for a minute,saw her reading,felt her aura & spoke to her in greeting only for a minute & already knows that Sessh is going to seriously screw himself if/when he ends up hurting the innocent being & that Sessh is going to suffer terribly for this but Sessh won't listen to anyone else's opinion & didn't want to hear what his oldest/closest friend had to say. 

I can't wait for Sessh to start to realize Kagome is way more important than a Sword.Especially one that can only protect & if I remember correctly that since Kagome pulled it...she's the only one it can protect & Sessh can't even touch the sword so when/if he tries to touch it now that Kagome holds sway over it & it keeps Inuyasha's demon blood in check from overwhelming him. If Sessh touches the sword the sword itself will attack him,burning his skin & etc.


Autumn (Chapter 14) - Sun 30 Jan 2011

Update soon!


Jenniferelaine (Chapter 14) - Sat 29 Jan 2011

i hope that guilt eats the sexy beast alive DX<

 


amy (Chapter 14) - Sat 29 Jan 2011

WILL HE MARRY HER?               


lara (Chapter 13) - Sat 22 Jan 2011

It sounds like Sessh is starting to feel guilt & he doesn't seem to understand that it is guilt. I wish he didn't see her smile in his head & then feel it because he may lead him to belleive that her smile is causing it. I can only hope that when she goes to school tomorrow he starts to realize that he is not comfortable when she isn't near & then when they return he either gradually realizes that her aura & scent alone with her being near him keep him calm & then it would be even better if his beast also was attatched & attracted to her only & wants more & more of her & from her. I would love to see with all his planning & plotting thinking he's using Kagome & that when it comes down to it he'll be able to trade her for the sword he starts to realize that she is more important than the sword. He already is getting so accustomed to her presence that he looks forward to being with her he just doesn't realize it. I only hope that something happens sooner than later where she hears or overhears from a guard or someone that they think Sessh is doing the in thing with royals by getting a slave  for sex to dress like an animal & that they didn't think Sessh would do something like that but it seems to them (the guards) that he's using her as a sex pet until he can trade her for some sword his half-brother has & she overhears them saying that he heard a maid or someone say that nobody is allowed to tell the girl that is a miko why she's here or they'll be fired or killed. That way Kagome finds out & confronts him & I hope that while or before that happens his inner beast &/or his friend start bringing up how kind,intelligent & caring she is & how perfect she is that she doesn't care about Sessh's position,title or money & she only cares for Sessh & what makes him happy plus the fact that she's powerful being the Shikon Miko & she's from the future so it's not like he'll ever meet a woman like her again & that's not even including the fact she hasn't been with any man other than Sessh &  he thinks this is going to be the stupidist  thing that Sessh does ....because if he does what he plans to Kagome he's going to hurt an innocent being that is unique in every way & he hopes that Sessh is really thinks about what he's going to do before he does it & that he hopes Sessh'll be happier with a sword he may or may not get while he loses the perfect girl & has to spend the rest of his life either alone with whores & one nite stands & with some bitch who only wants to be with him for his title & will only care about herself because once he blows this that's all he'll have. Of course it would help if he found a scroll or something that says Miko's can birth pure bred youkai's & one as powerful as the Shikon Miko would birth full youkai pups with Miko powers along with youkai abilities or full youkai pups that are immune to holy power.


Autumn (Chapter 13) - Thu 20 Jan 2011

Love it so far! I wonder how things are going to play out for them.


Rowdys girl (Chapter 13) - Thu 20 Jan 2011

hmmm, could it possibly be... guilt??? he should feel guilty. she wasn't a truly willing participant to begin with - he drugged her so she would be amenable. ooh, i hope he's suffering. heh heh heh. especially when her family has treated him so courteously.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 13) - Thu 20 Jan 2011

ahh I see some growth on Sesshoumaru's side... hopefully he'll stop thinking like a stuck-up prick completely soon


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 13) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

Good! evil puppy i hope the feeling jsut gets worse!

Such a jerk!

*throws fish at him*

>:l


amy (Chapter 12) - Sat 15 Jan 2011

LET HIM FORGET ABOUT THE SWORD! AND LOVE KAGOME!


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