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Pebbles (Chapter 40) - Thu 02 Apr 2020

I have to admit, you really caught me off guard with a few story arcs. I was genuinely shocked by her going back to him, not contesting the mating as strongly as I assumed,  then the kitten transformation. Next big 'WHAT' moment for me was the KougaInu mates relationship.  It was surprising to see the drift in everyone's character really. Even with slightly different themes, it felt at times a bit all over ths place. The only one that felt the same throughout was Inuyasha. I wanted to really get behind the Sesshomaru character development, but it was washed out by the Kitten transformation. I felt that Kagome may have lost a lot of what could've been an great invitation to meld her transformation into enhancing her nature more than just as a youkai youth. She lost some of her fire. Although you took many lengths to complete the tale,  the later chapters felt very rushed. Some well timed spots, but rushed and missed opportunities for some extra fun. Would've loved to read through a battle between Toga and Sesshomaru. Overall, like for real for real, the majority of your story was a good read. Glad r0o pushed you to it.


Dryft (Chapter 37) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

i was really enjoying the story until Kagome became a neko youkai and she lost all of her personality completely. Then thrown into orgy with kouga and inuyasha just lost my complete interest. I can't keep reading sadly. Otherwise, everything before the transformation was simply stunning story telling and well thoughout. You were delightful!!


sonja hand (Chapter 40) - Tue 18 Aug 2015

Awesome


DeathDagger (Chapter 12) - Wed 21 Jan 2015

She is from the future, understands kink but hasn't figured out she's a pet yet???? 


DeathDagger (Chapter 6) - Wed 21 Jan 2015

She's gonna kick his ass...lol


Marissa (Chapter 40) - Thu 24 Jul 2014

It took me two days to finish this, but this by far my favorite story ever! I just love the kitten part, and ah everything. Really really good 


Sesshysgirl1997 (Chapter 40) - Fri 09 Aug 2013

I loved this fanfiction. I could not stop reading once I started.


Erica (Chapter 40) - Mon 29 Jul 2013

Absolutely wonderful story! I couldn't stop reading once I started!  


Cassidy (Chapter 40) - Tue 14 May 2013

Wow wow wow. I love this story. It is beautifully written and captivating.  I love it and I was engaged throughout the whole thing. Thank you sooo much for creating this story. 


zheniah (Chapter 40) - Mon 18 Mar 2013

aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i cant believe its over nnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooo T.T   T.T   super cool story ^.^ its tottally awsome.


Samara (Chapter 40) - Sun 25 Nov 2012

that was great... coulnt stop reading once i started... lol, i lost a lot of sleep over this fic... and i have an exam 2moro too... well i'm off to studying... thanks for the entertsinment... ps- the only thing i didnt like was the foursome mating... it was just weird to me... but it worked...


dianne (Chapter 40) - Sun 04 Nov 2012

Yay! I love happy endings! ^.^

I'm a little sad to see it end though.

Oh, well this is definitely going on my rereading list ^.^

Thanks for writing such an amazing story! :D


Rowdys girl (Chapter 40) - Sat 03 Nov 2012

You are brilliant and that's the truth!

 

Thank you so much for all of your hard work, girl. I cannot tell you how much I love reading your work!

 

Now, can Speedy come visit for a week or two?

 


Sarah (Chapter 40) - Sat 03 Nov 2012
Loved the story though I can't see inuyasha or koga actually ever having sex with kagome just because before coming to the palace koga never met kagome and inuyasha was just starting to be friends and civil with her when sesshomaru took her, so it was kind of hard to seem him all desperate to be with her more than friends like he was not to mention I think sesshomaru would be to jealous and possessive

sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 39) - Wed 24 Oct 2012

yanno, with papa back, papa/momma coule have another puppy as heir since kagome as a shikon changed youkai might not be able to


Diane Peter (Chapter 39) - Sun 30 Sep 2012

I'm really enjoying this. You may want to watch out for run together words though, you have at least 2 spots in this chapter where 2 or more words are run together, most notably cansenseoff instead of can sense off.


LibraCourt (Chapter 39) - Sun 30 Sep 2012

Gotta say I'm not enjoying the story anywhere near as much as I was. The first maybe 22 chapters were awesome, but lately it just seems to kinda drag and seems to be less about Kagome and Sesshoumaru and more about how to screw with Sesshoumaru and his life. Gets tiresome to read after about 10 chapters of it.


TKE (Chapter 38) - Wed 29 Aug 2012

You definitely have my attention now, this is getting very interesting!!


dianne (Chapter 38) - Wed 29 Aug 2012

darn cliffies! I hate them so much!!!

hahah, I love the chappy though


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 38) - Tue 28 Aug 2012

lmao hiss kitty hiss!


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