Great chapter; great story! I would love to see Sesshoumaru laughing--great mental visual. You are doing a great job with characterizations.. Update soon.
Aww, poor Kagome! I almost cried. I really like how you write for Sesshoumaru! Please update soon ^o^
thats freakign AWESOME! i love this! more please! and seriously someone's got to kick kouga's arse when this is over!
Darcy (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Jan 2011
Great start!I really like how this differs from what i've read.Please please update soon! :D
Mina (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Jan 2011
I love where this is going! Its slightly different then the usual hormone induced situation and I love the addition of Shoki!!! Very original!
I look forward to reading more of this delectable story.
Meara (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Jan 2011
This is refreshingly original, I love it! Keep it coming ;-)
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