Reviews for A Curse of Lust by Squash

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treavellergirl (Chapter 6) - Thu 03 Feb 2011

Damn that was hot :O


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Feb 2011

Wonderful work! Great job and thank you for updating.... Please update again real soon this fanfiction is sooooooooooooo addicting lol :) u write wonderful stoies


lara (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Feb 2011

you can't leave it like this ....what will happen with the 2 of them  now???? He didn't set out to rut or mate her as if the she & the smell had no affect on him & it only affected him personally after a night of inhaling it as he watched over her.Then as the smell started to affect him slightly he became more aware of her breathing & her movement while she slept & he found himself having to fight it as he became more aware of it & even aware of it & fighting it he still seemed to have a strong rational desire to not touch her in anyway....until he started to relax,heard her moan of need in her sleep,smelled the scent of her heat spike,then noticed many weak yoaki readying to try again by coming close & so  he let out his aura powerfully as a warning to keep them away &  until  they noticed it & left . Just as he was beginning to fall into a state of complete meditation, the sound of the miko's breathing quickened.

Training his attention onto her form, he found her heart rate had risen again, bringing with it that delicious spike in her scent. Her toes were curled tight, her hands balled into fists. She whimpered and then moaned outright, the sound like a desperate cry torn from her throat. At that sound, Sesshomaru found himself...tempted. Right on the edge of making a decision, she cried out again, only this time, she whispered, 'Please...Sesshoma-maru!'

Amber eyes widened in astonishment. He felt his jaw literally fall open at the sound of his name on her cherry-colored lips. As she continued to mewl incoherently, the sound driving him mad, his felt himself come to a decision.

Rising, he stood next to the barrier and barked, "Miko, remove the barrier."

I don't know what happened after that as your description was so very confusing ....it was almost as if in your description he thru her over his shoulder & she felt the wind blowing her air all over as if they were flying & this went on for quite a while as he seemed to be fighting himself inside saying 'die,die,die,die,die...' while his hands & fingers were moving higher up her thighs & playing with the elastic of her panties making her heat more intense for her just thinking of him,his strength,his warmth & her need. She had already accepted the fact that she would submit to him as ....the curse wouldn't allow her to submit to a weak male & here was Sessh, the strongest one...& as she awoke to fact that the strength of the heat had brought her to her knees & Sessh's deep baritone with his intense,strong being saying' Miko, remove the barrier' ..she looked at him & got the visual of his strong body relieving hers of this need,she instantly gave in....

but how had did they come from what seemed to be flying in the air to landing back in the very cave she'd been hiding in on a bed of furs???? & then after having their way with each other & from your description it didn't sound like a regular rut...unless even in a regular rut just to ease the need to get a release a male youkai releases that much seed???? if they did that everytime they took a female wouldn't Sessh have many pups by now from everyone he'd rutted with in his life???

I'm confused about this. It seemed he didn't want or care for her in the least & it seemed that when he finally decided to rut her it was simply as if he took her but,only  just for a rut along & posssibly to rid himself finally of the scent of her heat  & the obvious trouble that tons of weak yokai being drawn to the scent of her into his land while they attempted to fight for the right to rut her (against her will).Other then that from your description he has no desire to touch her nor rut with her again & that he'll awaken angry with himself & possibly her.Which I really hope isn't what happens. Although in your description of them during sex it read as if Kagome were following a feeling of instinct & it seemed the way Sessh filled her with his seed as if he too was following instinct possibly brought on by the scent of her heat or I don't know but even filling her with so much seed he didn't mark her as a Mate so he must have had his wits about him I can only imagine.I only hope that when he wakes as it is he's aware this was a curse placed on her against her will & then she was placed magically in his domain also against her will so I hope he's doesnt' awaken to find himself angry with her. If he wakes with regret for even touching her because of his disgust of her humanity & who she is, that alone would hurt her.The last sentence of this chapter you wrote-

He felt the magic of the curse fading even as a twinkle of life began to grow in its place.

I only hope that in this story Sessh liked her but thought of her as unavailable or hopefull in this story Miko's can birth full bred youkai or full bred youkai with either Miko abilities or an immunity to Miko powers. I just really want to see Kagome & Sessh together & happy. I hate stories where Kagome has to suffer. I would really like to see the 2 together & happy & it would be great or even better if they awoke together & they both admit to having been attracted to each other & that they both felt they'd it would never be possible due to Kagome thinking Sessh didn't like her for her humanity,being Miko & her friendship with his bro,Inuyasha who loves Kikyo & that Kagome gave up on him long ago & fell for Sessh but tried to smother those feelings & Sessh could say he'd wanted her but didn't think she'd see him that way or something. He obviously respects her or he'd not of stayed to see what happened once he realized what was wrong & stayed to help even after she got rid of them & then to offer to protect her when he realized she was tired but afraid to sleep.    Well, your next chapter will give some answers so I hope it comes sooooon. 

 

 


NightQueen (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Feb 2011

OMG! Terrific chapter!  Now that the curse is complete will Sesshoumaru want to stay with Kagome and claim what is now his.  I certainly hope so that was a very hot chapter! But it felt like more than the curse was at work! I can't wait for the next chapter! Excellent!


Sesshoumarus Girl (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Feb 2011

I love your story, it's the best!! I can't wait to see what happens next! And I really can't wait until you update again, so please please PLEASEEEE UPDATE SOON!!


Sandreline Moon (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Feb 2011

Whew! Talk about hot and heavy - sign me up please!!!!!  I can't wait to see how the two of them react come morning! Haha.  Please update SOON!

~Sandreline


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 6) - Wed 02 Feb 2011

well this was rather awesome! i wonder whats going to happen now! even if Sess doesnt want a hanyou kid or a pup with a miko i can totally see him being all >:l MINE! abut them both, as 1. he was Kagome's first, and 2. The pup is his! thusly so is it's mother

I cant wait to see what happens next and inuyasha >:l all his fault to begin with, though this does raise the question, if the curse only ends when the female gets preggy Sango will be preggy to?


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 5) - Sat 29 Jan 2011

Update again real soon PLEASE i'm interested to find out what sesshomaru and kagome are going to do next hehe (hentai smile) hehe I LOVE YOUR WORK


lara (Chapter 5) - Sun 23 Jan 2011

yes & then????


Smittee (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

*wiggles brow* Intersting. Very interesting.


Sesshoumarus Girl (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

You are Evil so very evil how could you stop it there?! Please Please Please please Pleaseeee UPDATE Please very soon!! I need more, I need to read more of your amusing story!!


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

I Can Not Believe You Stopped There!!!!!!!!!!! You must continue soon pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase please please i love it this is wonderful! update again soon pretty please with a cherry on top! I will love you forever !!!!!!!!!! and i will give you cookies !!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Erica (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

I will say this only once human. More.


Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

THAT WAS EVIL!

Arg :/ PLEASE update soon!!!

I beg of you :D


FayeMegan (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

Wahhh so short! Looking forward to some yummy smuttiness. *leaves a plate of bribery cookies* :3


lara (Chapter 4) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

I really hope this isn't over & it ends with more than a bond forged between Sessh & Kagome. This is Dokuga & it is rated MA so hopefully he'll help relieve her of the feeling of intense desire & arousal.....I mean is there a way to get stop the curse & give her a repreive from the feeling of intense need & a way to stop the intense scent of her arousal that will continue to attract demons or what did he say when  he cursed her about strong demons or only the strongest  of demons.....he said he was doing it....


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

OMFG TEASE! updates! more please! *wiggles bribery c0okies at you*


luv u so much (Chapter 5) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

mooooooaaaaarrrr pls! holy moly this is good!


Fuel (Chapter 4) - Tue 18 Jan 2011

Four and a half gallons, premium writer's fuel. 

Added bonus includes one pint of McLargy's Anti-carpotunnel serum. Use sparingly. 


Hoshi Phoenix (Chapter 4) - Tue 18 Jan 2011

Great start to a amazing story! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Hope you update soon! :)


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