I love it so much right now. Truly it is great start. please update soon ^^

Wow, I am amazed. Your style of writing is very good.. this is the sort of story I have been searching for! Please continue.. It is great!!!!

update

awww! cute Tanshin! i absolutly love him!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz update again soon, i just gotta know what happens! plus,  i really cant wait till inuyasha gets what he deserves, what a bastard

YAY :D You updated! Great chapter, can't wait for more!

just an fyi really good story hope u continue to update looking forward to it

i can see this story becoming one of my favorite stories to read. please keep writing and updating.

This is pretty good, but i am kinda confused with Miroku. I had to read it a few times to understand what you meant. THe idea is good and i look forward to what you will add.

WHAT THE HELL?!!!!! The only reason why Kikyo's telling that puppy-eared do-do these things is just so that he'd end up beating her to death so she could get the rest of KAGOME'S soul. *gets poker out, wanting to beat Kikyo with it and stoke the fire r0o set on Inuyasha* LET ME AT HER! LET ME AT HER!!!! Thankfully, Kagome's now under Sesshomaru's protection. That Tanshin is too cute. Geez, what a do-do. He'd believe anything that other do-do Kikyo says. Looking forward to the next chapter.

today i'm bitter, and very upset... so i'll just lash out on inu (though i have the whole lot of chibi inuyasha pic pic in my laptop!), serve him right, he shouldn't have left them at all, and listening from kikyou??? huh, yeah, thats really gonna help him get his straight As in any Exam.... perhaps he should go for PhD instead? ha ha ha....

Awesome!!!! This story is really coming along, i like EVERYTHING about it. mostly because i like puppies, but we'll ignore that for now. oh ya inuyasha is a douche.

Update soon!!!

lmao! tanshin's so adorable with kirara! he's all O_O *is pounced!* I love this chapter, and i still want to set inuyasha on fire, but NOW, i want to break kikyo in the process >:3 that WHO-AH!

nooo! i was engrossed with this second chapter i didnt even notice the end was coming up! wow that sucks, i really reall REALLY hope you update soon!!!!! this is by far a favorite fanfic of mine, its perfectly written, sesshoumaru is in character, rin is adorable-as always- shippos pretty damn cute, and i just love your versoin of kagome!! she wasnt too 'rebel' , though i do like thoes versoins of her sometimes, or to submissive, thoes types of kagomes just piss me off, but your kagome was exactly what ive been wanting for a looong time, i can never find stories that have her so ..so..so, i dont know, perfect? thats the only word i can think of to describe it, i absolutly LOVE this!!! i cant wait till your next chapter!!

Another exciting chapter!  I just love Sesshoumaru's character and his thoughts.  Kagome will believe herself to be in paradise with the way she will be treated and protected now along with her 'son'.  I hope you let their love for each other grow slowly in bits and pieces.  It's more realistic and interesting that way.  Also, so much more can be added to the story and their characters as their awareness of their feelings for each other slowly come to light. 

I can hardly wait for the confrontation between them and Inuyasha when he realizes he's lost her for good and that she's where he can't touch her anymore.  Also, it will be interesting what the reaction will be from Sango and Miroku.  Will they leave Inuyasha, too?  I hope so and will Sesshoumaru let them join him?   I don't expect Sesshoumaru to mark them as part of his pact but to accept them as allies traveling with him.

I haven't been this excited about a new story in a long time.

i really really love it

thank you for write this story

I am really enjoying this story so far! i can't wait to read more!

I love this so much so far, I love the way you have written Sesshomaru, this is really well written and super interesting! Inuyasha is horrible! I love how awful you have written him and the things he was done to Kagome!!! Keep up the good work, I really really am looking forward to reading more of this!! So update super soon! :)

oh this is good i can't wait for the next update. please please beat the crap out of inuyasha and kikyo.

urgh.... btw, inuyasha is going to shit brick when he found kag's gone! well, tough luck inu!!!!

there are a lot of fiction with similar plot, however it is always great and unique in its own storyline, and i never get bored reading them all, especially when i manage to find a great fic written by awesome author, just like this one... it's entertaining! however, the spelling Tai should be change to Dai (Tai actually mean fish)... can't wait for an update!