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Well... the sheer fact that Sessh showed up at their house in the first place is out of the blue, or rather shortly after a miko showed up and scarred them for life.

It is a bit suspicious. Not to mention, the police can't prove that the bio parents touched him first. Well maybe they can - he still walked out.

Hah! Inuyasha sucking up to Kagome and Kikyo had nothing to do with it!

Oh tell me the bio parents are Naraku and Kikyo... *evil minded*

All their limbs and their ribs... Reminds me of the often line, "I'll break every bone in your body starting from your toes up. Twice."

I suppose killing them would be a bit much for the self defense plea, though with kagome's punishment of them that'll have to do, very glad kagome is firmly on sesshomaru's good side and this was another delightful little addition to an excellent story so far, definately looking forward to when you add more

:laughs evilly:

UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!UPDATE!!!

AND that is all I need to say

:bows to audiance in head as they clap insanely:

Tally, I LIKE the way things go in your 'verse! I am deeply chuckling over this. And now he trusts her!

>:3 thats awesome!

I bet he's all like s0o0o0odevious! must have! his inner puppy is probably all " oh i LIKES her!"

You are soooo ebilly brilliant, my Tal! I wish this was the punishment for EVERY abuser! Excellent chapter!

Oh, Tal, I LOVE your twisted little mind! No, it isn't cannon and those who are hung up on that can read something else! This sweet curveball is a brilliant concept! Yeah!

lmao =x devious!

Amazingly appropriate and deliciously satisfying, loving that she gave sesshomaru an opening to take out of their hides some retribution for Rin

looking forward to what you add next

I'm loving this story Tal. Now I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru gets his revenge! >:3 Update soon. ^_^ (L)

All I could think was, And the battle lines have been drawn, sides have been given their weaponry... Oh wait, the holy folk have upgraded their side arms...

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Excellent concept there. I really like how the whole holy order has been given a much more concrete placement in the modern era - as well as an "in" secret that they are able to pass around.

For some reason that has made the story a whole lot more real rather than simply fiction. The holy people are their own group, kinda like the CIA. The fact that they have a choice about disclosing the information - that has made it modern. And for some reason has made God that much more attentive.

Well done. Thank you for the update!

Definitely enjoying the story!! I have two thank you for you: thank you for having awesome grammar, spelling, etc. and thank you for writing!! :o)

Definately looking forward to Kagome getting some payback for Rin, awesome story so far, looking forward to when you update next

more more more, please. I stumbled across this looking for goodies of drabble night, now I'm in love yaya!! More please!!

I can't wait to see what Kagome has in store for Rin's parents. I really find the concept of ki being able to be used against humans to be very new and fascinating. I wonder what the result will be when Kagome uses it in this fashion. Thank you for another great chapter! I eagerly anticipate the next.

hmm...I'm assuming she won't be teaching Rin that lesson until Rin's much more advanced and matured...I wonder if Rin will keep quiet about it or spill the beans to Sesshomaru.

anyway I can hardly wait to see the bio-donors fate! ya know...I hope the losers still live there being that we didn't hear that Kaggy got a hold of a picture of them or something to id them other than the address.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I've always felt that child and animal abusers should be shot; but that's just me. I just believe that there are SOME things that really DO deserve the death penalty... eventually. No matter how badly and adult suffered as a child, they still have a moment of choice to not abuse a child or an animal. There really is no excuse for it. *Steps off of soapbox*

Go Kagome! Let 'em have it!

I HOPES U ARE FEELING BETTER! lol loving this story! Rin is cute...and I'm wondering if Inu and Kag have a previous knowledge of one another lol

figured it was Miroku lol... Zombies are potent drinks though...yuck

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