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Last Laugh (Chapter 13) - Fri 12 Nov 2010

It's because this fic is so amazing~!

I couldn't believe what Miroku said! It wasn't what I was expecting at all (or him apparently). I wonder what will happen if he decides to let the professor in on his newfound information. If Naraku shows the trysts to Sesshoumaru as good dreams, what about the first one? Wasn't she crying? Or did he skip over that one? Damn I wish I could see into the professor's confused brain....

Lyka...vexes me. It's like the Inuyasha episodes with Kikyo all over again-Agravatting! But I supose the annoying bint has some purpose yet to fulfill. I just hope the crockety old man Sesshoumaru wanted her to see when they got back to the city can help her excorsize the hell out of that bitch.

The scene with the coffee was adorable. I felt like I was drowning in warm fuzzies. I can't wait for the next  chapter to come out!

Thankyou for the read! Until next time~


anonnie mouse (Chapter 12) - Mon 08 Nov 2010

hm...lemme see...Sango would be PO'ed at him if he tattled.

methinks Kagome and Sango need to let Miroku into the fold or else he'll mention something to Sesshomaru...that'd be BAD!


Kamille (Chapter 12) - Sun 07 Nov 2010

Keep writing I LOVE This fic!!!!


LunaGirl (Chapter 12) - Sun 07 Nov 2010

An amazing chapter! I can't believe the professor is almost as naughty as the demon! Thas is just too good! Every time they get together things get HOT! Nothing like a good lemon to get your blood pumping! Please update soon, this story just keeps getting better!


love u so much (Chapter 12) - Sun 07 Nov 2010

NICE and..... AHAHAHAHAHAHA, Miroku!!! :D


Hoshiakari Kokoro (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

hee hee miroku is soooooo ebil!    this was a really good chapter! i like imagining kagome mentally slapping the spirit! XD


88pieces (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

uh oh!! Miroku has to be told now lol or something esle that is just at akward


Feminafures (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

I'm very happy you updated and what a chapter this was.  Miroku finding out will really complicate things now.  I wonder what he will want from her...can't wait until the next chapter.   


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

love the little scene between them, and more of an insight to the Thief's thoughts  *^_^*

and I'm wondering just how bad Miroku will be...  o.0  or maybe someone will get him in order?


MoxyMikki (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

I love your attention to details! I absolutely savored the destription of the school, and the Dr's office. Those little descriptive measures really help to bring a story to life. Oh and total giggles when Kagome checked out Miroku! "Way to go, Sango" ...I agree. lol ugh and the gum scene!!!! ROFL I laugh now just thinking about it! My gosh... a pouty Sesshomaru/Naraku how CUTE and so totally out of character in a completely charming and believable way!

Also, the further explanation Nah Rah Ku gave about his sharing of the professors mind, was insightful in helping explain exactly how they have merged and where one ends and begins. That clarity was very helpful. You didn't spend too much time on it, a brief explanation was all it needed, and it fit perfectly with the story.

And sooo smokin'! The offering scene, as every single one before absolutely took my breath away. I was literally chewing my nails. At times I can actualyl see Naraku in the scenes, and others I'm able to see the Inu Sesshomaru. Its amazing how you've worked that. I dont know if you have managed to pull that off intentionally, or if its happenstance, but my goodness, it SO works for this story. Its amazing.

Your limes really build up the suspence for the lemon which I assume is enevitable at some point. It gives the reader a "fix" without ruining the anticipation. And as always, it was so beautifully crafted and tastefully done. Once again the dialogue and internal monologue really added to the depth of the scenes.

I also really appreciated the clarity and attention you gave to body possitioning during "action" scenes.... particularly the lime. In a forum post I made about help from lemon authors, Sugar0o had brought up how important proper and CLEAR body possitioning details are to her... I didn't realize just how important it was to me TOO until I read this. Reading a good lime/lemon or just love scene in general really puts into perspective how I want to go about it myself as an author. Reading your story has helped me already in so many ways.

Oh my gosh. I really love this story, and the more I get to know YOU I find myself more and more in admiration of both story and author. Thanks for the update, and I am as always in high anticipation of the next! <3

 


Zyren (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

i love love love this story. when Kagome got possessed by Lyka I wondered if she would have to fight Lyka to keep from jumping Sesshoumaru/Na Ra Ku's bones but its interesting that she seems to fear him and it makes me wonder why, considering the legend said she loved him. but i do quite enjoy the tension between Kagome and Na Ra Ku. I certainly hope Miroku wont do something terrible. your characters are extremely accurate so i dont think he would do more that ask that she take on more of Sango's work so that he could see his girl more, at least thats what im hoping. 

but anyway i look forward to the next chapter. Happy Writing!!!

Zyren


Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

I'm just being a lazy ho-ho and not logging in. I just caught on the chapters -eeep...I was out of town and away from all the wonderfulness of your writing, toture!!- These are getting a lot more intense, especially with Taisho getting more possessive. I think love this everytie you post. These are so amazing!!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

Wait a second! Miroku asked Kagome that at the end of this chapter?! What a douchebag!

>:I

Amazing chapter, nonetheless. Gah! Poor Kagome, caught in between.

Keep up the beautiful work.

<3


Chii (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

Phenomenal!

This is so captivating, I just want to keep reading.

I can't wait for the next update! But, you always update rather quickly. Thank you so much for doing so :)


Kazanova (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

Wow, SUSPENSE! I imagine what Miroku's offering is in order to keep it a secret.

:) Maan, you already have me wishing for the next chapter.

I'm spellbound!

 

I'm sure by now you know that this is the most original fiction, I've read, it's absolutely amazing! I wonder where you got your inspiration and idea.


floridfox (Chapter 12) - Sat 06 Nov 2010

I really like how you chose to set your story somewhere else besides the U.S. or Japan! I'm super drawn into it and it's currently one of my favorites! Keep going!


MoxyMikki (Chapter 11) - Fri 05 Nov 2010

Gah!!! Its taken me like a week to review :( I'm soooo sorry. Hopefully its better late than never. I thought this was a pivitol chapter, letting us get a glimpse of the evolving situation and relationships between characters. I really think you are doing a great and believable job with Kagome's own possession. Its nice to see a throwback to her "spiritual powers" from the manga, without playing to that too strongly and keeping it original. It makes it familure but keeps it suspenseful! Also enjoyed the little exchange between Kagome, the professor, and Bruckner - awesome tension and confusion. I'm so in love with this... I'm going to go back and reread it from the begining, just for the heck of it... and because I'm mildly obsessed.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 11) - Fri 29 Oct 2010

hm, I wonder if this 'Lyka' is deluded into thinking good sex = love... if so, whenever she gets the chance to speak w/ Naraku she's going to be very disappointed...  serves her right, bitch.  LOL!  X3


Terry Lynn (Chapter 11) - Thu 28 Oct 2010

Lol. Aces for Kagome's dirty thoughts! Looking forward to your next update~


Amora (Chapter 10) - Mon 25 Oct 2010

Totally awesome in spooky enough for Halloween. Keep up the great writing


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