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randomfan17 (Chapter 34) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Where's Sesshomaru, i'm gonna drag Nah Ra ku out by whatever means necessary and kick his ass! Sorry for my language but he's nearly ruined a perfect relationship with his jealousy and he needs to go, kicking and screaming with bruises everywhere visible. Poor Sesshomaru and Kagome, i feel worse for Sesshomaru right now though, he doesn't have any idea of what happened and now he's just assuming she doesn't want to see him. I just want to hug him, but only after Naraku loses function between his legs.


MoxyMikki (Chapter 34) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Meager Length? Posh! This chapter was just jam packed with the important stuff... I mean honestly, we don't need to hear her repeat to Sango what happened the night before, nee chapter before. Its unnecessarily redundant, which in a novel is perhaps just fine, and can garner a new understanding and awareness through revisiting, but for the purposes of a FANFICTION its not always necessary. Personally I rather a shorter chapter where MORE happens than a longer chapter filled with unnecessary fluff just to stretch out the word count.

Poor Taisho. He's so confused and stressed. I feel horrible for him. He's truly the only innocent party.

Kagome sometimes just irritates the hell out of me. She is so smart but does some of the dumbest things! Which when you think about it, is pretty typical of "smart" people. They are so focused on books and learning that when it comes to "reality" they are sometimes out of touch with what others would rationalize as common sense "no-no's." Plus those idiot moves just show how unexperienced she is in romance.

I hope Taisho understands that. In his shoes I would feel betrayed but conflicted because she's made HUGE sacrifices to protect his career and reputation by giving Nah Rah Ku what he's been asking for. Its not like she asked for or wanted these things to involve her. And the fact that she was romantically involved with him proves the depth of her love for him.

Loved the update sweety. Can't wait for the rest! :)


Saraniya (Chapter 34) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Thanks for the update!


Lady Lyris (Chapter 34) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Oh... poor Sesshomaru. Kagome unthinkingly hurt him. I feel like somehow finding the dimension that he's in and hugging him. lol jk 

anyways. I really liked these past few chapters. Some parts of them have been sweet, and others have been complete drama. Or well, how I perceive it. :D Thank you for the great chapters, and hopefully you update soon!


Paige (Chapter 34) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Aw. Poor Sesshomaru and Kagome. :(

I hope you update again soon!

 


Paradise_Kiss (Chapter 34) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Oh gosh sorry 4 my English in last review but please understand I'm trying to memorize these stupid road signs(I'm gonna have driving license exam LOL *facepalm* This is gonna be the most humiliating moment in my life.... I just KNOW XD And I have a feeling that mini skirt won't help me T^T)


Paradise_Kiss (Chapter 34) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Oh well I guess it can't be helped *shrugs* BUT, I think we all deserve some reward for patience and faith lol... XD Of course only when you have dealt with your problems!! ^^ No one's a virgin, life screws us all, that's the truth, unfortunally so... Wish u luck with life(it must be really persistent when it comes to you, muhahahaha)

Ohhhh! T^T Poor Kags POOR SESSHOU! He has NO idea what's going on and he's worrying sooo much, makes me wanna hug him!


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 34) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Yes! I can leave you a review today because I'm finally on an actual computer, not a stinkin' iPod. LOL.

Well... what to say, what to say... Freya, you are horrible! Hurting Sesshoumaru even more after what happened by making him think Kagome just might completely hate his guts! lol. I'm a little worried though that Sesshoumaru will not take it so well when Kagome tells him what has really been happening. D= I feel like there's gonna be a whole lot more drama, tears, and heartbreak before they get together again. I'm going to cry for them when that happens. Seriously.

AND... Poor Sango. She just got a promise ring, which is practically the same thing as an engagement ring, but she didn't even get to share the good news with Kagome since Kagome was too heartbroken! I hope Sango gets her moment REAL soon! She definitely deserves it for being such a fantastic friend towards Kagome.

Lastly... that poor, poor pillow. You're such a pillow killer, Freya. XD lol.

Anyway, I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter. I want to see what happens when Kagome and gang goes to Myoga for assistance. And to see how long Sesshoumaru will continue to beat himself up for what he did, but technically didn't do, to Kagome.

Oh yes, congrats on the nomination too! =) It was definitely a deserving one.


vtchachi (Chapter 33) - Tue 05 Jul 2011

Great chapter.  Very shocking.  i do hope they will recover from this unexpected twist!  Thanks for sharing your great story!


randomfan17 (Chapter 33) - Tue 05 Jul 2011

Oh that! That...I want to curse so badly because that's the only way i can think of describing that despicable demon right now. I call for immediate exocism, that was too cruel! He tricked her and i felt like crying earlier when she gave into him, it should have been Sesshomaru! That jealous...I can't curse, dang it! I don't see how her seeing him being pushed away because she was a virgin and he's a little older would be a problem, dang it Kagome. I could rant on until i run out of words in here but i won't, to summarize, this was a tragic switch and bait that she should have avoided like the plague.


WildcatYST (Chapter 33) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

Kagome better be ready to get rid of Nah Ra Ku once and for all after this! Wonderful twist and I can't wait to see where this goes. 


Kazanova (Chapter 33) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

Wow, Na Rah Ku's jealousy/possessiveness. I really wish Kagome ends up with Na Rah Ku. :O

He's just so alluring. How can Kagome resist?


Saraniya (Chapter 33) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

Uh Oh...


love you so much (Chapter 33) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

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you are awesome! that was entirely unexpected!

 

I LOVE YOU!  The update wait nearly killed me! ;)


Kazanova (Chapter 33) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

Oh, woww! Nah Ra Ku must be so angry/jealous to have done that.

But I'm happy he took her virginity. >___>"


Niiroroze (Chapter 33) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

Wow, so cold hearted...I loved it though. I had my little boy by the way. I hope you are doing well in the last weeks you have. Can't wait for the next update!


MoxyMikki (Chapter 33) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

okay, seriously, I'm going to beat you with your blunnie box if you don't update this soon. You EVIL woman, leaving us off on yet another cliffy! How dare you?! GAH! I'm going crazy already!

I loved this chapter sooo much. It just amazes me how we've talked about this story probably over a dozen times and you still manage to surprise me. I had no idea Kagome was going to give in to Nah Rah Ku in this chapter. Nor did I expect him to just bail so quickly. And boy is he a piece of work - abandoning her like that. Though I suppose at least he let her finish... then again thats food to him so... not unselfish.

Now is he just possessive over her, or is he possessive over her because there is some level of admiration, or affection on his part? I just can't tell. Sometimes you think he just might have something deeper in him and then he goes and twists something which could have been lovely, into something vial.

Now poor Kagome and Sesshomaru! I guess I feel more sympathy for Sesshomaru though. He thinks he's been a prat by not remembering taking the virginity of the girl he loves, but then Kagome gave it to someone who wasn't him so I'm less likely to feel sorry for her. Not that I blame her or am villifying her. Obviously she was in an impossible situation and Naraku exploited it, but I'm a pretty hard line strictler for things like honor, morality, and virtue - which in a way she violated here by using Sesshomaru's body possessed by Naraku. I get though that it was her way of giving her first time to him and hopefully avoiding his shutting down and pushing her away. So that complicates things SO much.

Which is what I love about your story (or rather one of the millions of things that I love.) Its so twisty and nothing is black and white.

But back to Sesshomaru: I'm dying to find out if he's going to be riddled with guilt. Or if he'll just be too damn confused to focus on feeling guilty. And will he approach her about it? Will he shut her out like Naraku said he'd do? Will she try and confront him? How will he react if she does?

And when will Naraku come back? What will THAT confrontation be like? Will we learn anything new about him soon? And when is she going to start trainging more with Myoga?

OMG so many questions! PLEASE please please please update as SOON as you've got that energy kicked up and those boys give you comp time. ;)


88pieces (Chapter 33) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

what a nasty trick!!! poor sesshou.


Just me (Chapter 33) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

That was just messed up! How could that bastad do that to both Kagome & Sesshomaru? And worse yet, during their first tme? I am hating him more and more each day! It is hard to believe that he could be so low, so full of resentment and jealousy! Poor Kagome ,and Sesshomaru! 

I'm so glad to see you back!  This chapter was amaing and is hard to believe that you had a hard timewith it! Now that the angst has been raised to a full bar, I'm dying to find out what happens next! Please update soon! The wait is going to kill me!


joyouki (Chapter 33) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

OMG that is terrible! Poor Sess...their first time and Naraku does this....I hope for some goodies without Naraku!!


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