So sometimes i re-read a chapter or two not really b/c i have forgotten the story but to once again get the feel for where i'm picking it back up since the last time. I read so much that sometimes coming into one of the fics cold will make it lost with many of the other's i read, so i started here again, and this bit:
It irked him that he knew she was right – this would please his father's spirit... but at the same time, he was well aware that the miko was managing him – and the only thing that would save her from a bloody end for it was her status, given by him, as his pack's alpha female.
I had forgotten what having an alpha female would mean, he thought, disgruntled. She is only fulfilling her position, and I cannot punish her for that.
:Had me in giggles. Sesshomaru seems so scathingly annoyed at this, that i can totally see him, if this were a modern setting, shredding a pillow cushin to nothing but feathers in a small temper tantrum. it's rather awesome. i just wanted to let you know ^_^ ~r0o
*giggles* I think Naraku is gobsmaked over Sesshomaru's reaction almost as much as Sesshomaru is over having his world turned upside down.
I like how this is progressing.
Thanks for writing!
Loveyaa (Chapter 22) - Wed 12 Jan 2011
I don't think that I have reviewed for this story yet which is a shame cuz I have really enjoyed it so far. The ever growing and changing dynamic between Sesshouamru and Kagome is fascinating. Naraku just sealed the deal when it comes to him being ended. I can't wait for Sesshoumaru to have more of his emotions and feelings come maybe not pouring out, but def coming out. I can't wait til next time when we see where their adventure through time takes us next :)
lol i love this chapter. please continue! and can i make a suggestion? can you have Sesshoumaru start to train Kagome so that she doesn't die again! i mean after all, the Tensaiga can only revive a person once, unless you take artistic rights and change that of course. well, it's only a suggestion. Please continue, your awesome and this story has been great so far.
Ashes (Chapter 22) - Tue 11 Jan 2011
Absolutely wonderful.
Gobsmacked, YES!!!!!!! And dumbfounded, stunned, overwhelmed... and probably a bunch more adjectives that I can't think of right now. EXCELLENT chapter. Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, waiting with bated (not to be confused with 'baited') breath to see if he really would revive her. Gah, I soooooo love this story, but then, I love all your stuff!! Thank you for the perfect end to my long day of reading. I have no doubt that, as I drop off to sleep, I will see Sesshoumaru's expression!
:D
~~me~~
Tilayha (Chapter 22) - Tue 11 Jan 2011
This is by far the best chapter in this story to date. A lesson learned and everyone still in character. You did not compromise any integrity with how it was put together. Well done.
GOBSMACKED! Poor big guy, probably doesn't even know what to do with himself right now.
Hooray for updates, and boo-urns on Naraku for trying to kill Kagome. Stupid villains... ah well, at least he - in a round-about way - made Sesshaomru realize that he does care for something... and that that something happens to be Kagome. 8O
Good stuff, I'm excited for more!
skitchell (Chapter 22) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! I've been reading your entire story and this is the first time I've reviewed but your story is so endearing, real, and believable that I am a hooked reader. I can't wait until you update again, and I sincerely hope that it is soon!
kissthehentai (Chapter 22) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
LOVE IT!!! Every chapter I love how Sesshomaru learns a little about himself. I love how you incorporated all the beliefs that I see Sesshoumaru with and then explaining caring and love and altruism and respect for all creatures. When explained so that a character like Sesshoumaru can realize it, is very beautiful. I appreciate your story and please update soon!!! =)
You know, Kagome is confusing so many men (humans and demons)... it's really very funny. I feel like she just smack Fuzzy on the back of the head... like "I can't believe you didn't realize that" :)
Does that make sense? It's late, I'm tired, but couldn't sleep til I got to this point.
Update soon!
Does it hurt really badly when you are basically turned on your ear? What was that Sess...crickets?
He had that one coming. :) Great chapter!
wooooo!!!! Go kagome!!!! Thankyou for updating!
oh that poor confused puppy. i feel bad for him a bit, and naraku.. oh my.. he's probably signed his death warrent with that little stunt. oh well >:3 makes r0o pleased he's going to die as such.
Beautiful. Just... Beautiful. I love the imagery and the discussions and the potential shifting of one man's stubborn beliefs and the whole thing with the Inu no Taisho's spirit and Sesshomaru claiming Kagome... *happy sighs* Just beautiful.
Thanks so much for writing!
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