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Frontalis (Chapter 22) - Fri 17 Sep 2010

After reading until chapter 21, I was really pissed 'cause I thought you just left it there. I usually copy the fics I read to my ebook reader so them can read it anywhere. When I went online to leave a review, I noticed that I actually haven't read the LAST chapter yet! OMG. I was probably in a hurry to DL and read your fic last time that I didn't notice it's until chapter 22. 

Anyway, I loved it. It's now included in my list of favorite stories. I really wanted to cry while reading chapter 21, but everything just happened so fast I couldn't get over the shock. While I was reading chapter 22, I was seriously bawling, and I was crying mostly for Kagome. I know Sessh had to do that for himself, but Kagome was in pain too. Your Kagome, of course, understood and accepted the situation, but if I were her, I'd kill Sessh myself. LOL 

Again, that was amazing. I hope you write more chapter stories. I'm not really into one-shots, but if I get in the mood, I'll probably read some of yours. 


Fane Eirdorne (Chapter 22) - Wed 08 Sep 2010

Oh. My. Kami. This story has made me smile SO many times. I have to admit that I almost cried when I thought Sesshoumaru was really dead (which for me is saying something; I never cry while reading) but then I laughed when it became clear that he wasn't dead after all. I absolutely ADORE this story! You characterized all the characters so well, and it was like I could see everything happening as I read it. Love it! ^^


MomoiroOhiOni (Chapter 22) - Tue 07 Sep 2010

i just died then came back read the last chapter and cried ;D this was AMAZING the absolute best im thinking about never reading another fanfic cuz they wont compare to this!


Arctic (Chapter 22) - Mon 06 Sep 2010

Omg I ABSOLUTELY love/hate your WTF chapter! You totally brought me to tears and I totally saw it coming!! I was like "Ha she's gonna kill off sesshou and bring him back" but the way you did it made me doubt my conclusion and think he was not coming back. Amazing story and the song at the end fits 100%. You're an awesome writer, great work.


Caitriona (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

I'm only just finished chapter 2 and this is breaking my heart.  I'm a CMA and have worked with these kinds of people.  Even reading about it or something like this happening to a person/character that I've read about for years makes me a little uncomfortable.  This means you're doing a good job!

 

Thanks for writing for us.  Onto chapter 3!


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 22) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

Aah... This is a really lovely story. :) I just spent all evening reading. And I don't regret it in the slightest. I'm so glad that they got together in the end and were able to be together without hurting. You've really done a brilliant job with this, and the song that you've linked is pretty much perfect. Great job with this. You definitely deserve the award you won for it. I love how you tied everything in. The bit about Rumiko Takahashi was really great... haha, using them as real beings from which she would create her manga. :) Great job!


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 21) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

Ah, I knew it!!!! I knew he couldn't be dead! I bawled all the same, however... Hard-core. But I'm glad that he's apparently alive??!?!?!?


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 16) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

Dear goodness... Reading about Rin's death was the worst--I pretty much bawled. (For some reason, her death always makes me cry) And then Inu Yasha's death.


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 15) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

Wow. Really. The complexities of what's going on here--how the audience finds out little by little it tantalising. I can't wait to find out more about what's really going on. The end of this chapter was particularly hard to read. Seeing one that is usually so proud become so terrified, wishing death is really hard. Had me crying a couple times. But I definitely love how you've written the characters. Everything seems to come together with purpose. Lovely writing.


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 8) - Sun 29 Aug 2010

Chapter 8 is lovely. It's beautiful because just about every woman has insecurities about her body, and seeing a man take that away--give a woman confidence about her body and the way she looks is fantastic. I'm glad that you included that and showed Kagome and Sesshoumaru together like that. They both have insecurities and while some of hers may have been eliminated, Sesshoumaru's present themselves more glaringly. You've done a great job writing these two characters, and I can't wait (more like anticipate) what he's been through in the past. I can't wait to read it so I have the complete picture in my head. This is fantastic. 


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Aug 2010

I found chapter four hauntingly beautiful. You've done a lovely job rendering Sesshoumaru's thoughts and 'speech' here. Fantastsic job, really. 


Misaki Kaito (Chapter 22) - Sat 28 Aug 2010

I loved this sooo much! Thank you for writing this!


marissa (Chapter 22) - Thu 26 Aug 2010

Wow.

this story is amazing.

i just read all night for hours even though i have physics class in a few hours..

i cried at the end becuase i was soo happy.

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Discord-Maru (Chapter 22) - Mon 23 Aug 2010

Ok there have been very ,very few fic's that had me tearing up like this one has. All I can say is thank you for sharing with us a truly great work of art .


Dana Daidouji (Chapter 22) - Sun 22 Aug 2010

I'm rather speechless.

This is one amazing, breathtaking story to read. I do not mind the lost sleep at all having read it through the night, early morning and the following day. I must say you are clearly gifted with words in a way that allow the readers to see everything as if it were a movie playing in front of their eyes, and feel everything as if they are the characters themselves. 

I must also commend you on the ease which with you use the medical lingo as it flowed seamlessly within the scenes, making them even more real.

I'm so voting for you in the Dokuga Awards.

Keep up the excellent work!


mandy26 (Chapter 22) - Sun 15 Aug 2010

yep...not gona lie. I boo-hooed the last two chapters. And wen i say boo-hooed, i mean my nose is red, my eyes are swollen and tears are streaming. Great story, i loved it; couldnt stop reading it. I found it yesterday and finished it today. It was amazing. Awsome job with the emotions, i felt it all, throught out the whole story; it was almost like i was there feeling it all first hand and not just reading it. Final words "WOW".


hkyadte (Chapter 22) - Sat 14 Aug 2010

I must say this story is so good! Its so touching! ...Made me cry...Great job!


Kiyanae (Chapter 22) - Wed 04 Aug 2010

All i have to say is...Wow.

That was beautiful. 

at first it was just, hey u must be in the medical field 'cuz u know your stuff. but then the story line shifted slightly...

the last couple chapters had me in tears, especially the epilogue. i read it with the music. 

your a very talented writer, keep doing what your doing, its working. And i hope you continue to get better with every word you write.


charlie (Chapter 22) - Sat 24 Jul 2010

omg whoever wrote this has a gift i found my self crying.(and i never cry) It showed me a side sesshoumaru i never knew a gentle still loving sesshomaru instead of the sesshomaru that is about to rip your head of one. All your facts were right on and him at disney land was rotflol and your explanation for his "Fluffy" was priceless i loved it from start to fiinish and i hope you continue to write more stories like that and maybe even publish this one i know one person who would buy it.

sincerely CHARLIE


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 22) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

Oh my God! This is such an amazing story! I am having a hard time finding the right words to describe just how good. It is just, AMAZING. I even cried a little when he died, and I NEVER cry. Ever. And the ending was beautiful! Romantic, poetic and heartbreaking at the same time.  This is one of the very best stories I have ever had the pleasure to read. I hope you continue to write, your talent is phenomenal. Thank you for the great read.

CoS


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