was a really interesting story til the end. you just threw everything together and said happily ever after. she has been terrified of dogs for 10 years then because some hot dog demon says i want to be your mate it goes away like magic? would be a great story if you took the end of it and extended or had some other reason for her to get over her fear. Like Sesshy saves her from getting attacked or something. i hope you keep writing though i like your style ^-^
Oh goodie! How do you dare say this isn't amazing? I loved it! I'm going to review the three chapters into this one review! In the first one, I must say the way you describe Kouga is hilarious, and although I like him, I give you thumbs up! I though it was cute/funny doing Kagome's stress level. it always seems worst when you actually have to put a number on it.
In the second chapter, I must say I understand why Kagome freaked out like that. Poor little thing! If I had a fear like that, I would have had the same reaction. I must say I'm in admiration at the way you write lemons. I don't think I do so well, which you'll probably notice if you keep following Dog Business, lol. KUDOS FOR THAT!
I'm glad they got to have a happy ending! i hope for Kagome though that one day her fear will completely go away. But, she did make progress with Sesshomaru by realizing that indeed, not all dogs are bad!
This was a great short story, I loved it!
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That was so cute and funny!
Saholia (Chapter 3) - Fri 18 Dec 2009
I LOVED this fic--it's so well written and I loved both Kagome's and Sesshomaru's characters. Awesome work Jess! :)
Lexie (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Dec 2009
it wasnt as climatic as id expected, it was kinda disappointing - good story but still disappointing.
alana (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Dec 2009
woah that was funny and sad well cant wait 4 your next chapter
Aimee Blue (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Dec 2009
Why doesn't it know who i am? anyhow, my mind just caught up with my fingers and i kinda realised that you'll probably post the link when you've finished huh? sorry if i jumped the gun *blush*
Ne, ne Jess-chan I really liked this! It's cute! Anyhow why don't you post a link back to the Cynophobia Challenge page so that everyone else knows it's here? Because i didn't see it at first! Or maybe i'm just dense? Thanks for the read.
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