Reviews for The Flower Girl by Kanna37

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Ashley (Chapter 18) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

I love this story, i did by the first chapter! I look foward to more.


autumngold (Chapter 18) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

I'm so glad that Kagome realizes that she won't hurt forever.  Inuyasha's betrayal and actions will soon be easier for her to handle.  Thank you so much for the update!  I love Sesshoumaru's message to Kagome with the flowers.  Hopefully she will find a way to save them so she never forgets.  Please post more soon!


Dani (Chapter 18) - Fri 11 Dec 2009

I absolutely love this story! It is very unique and it makes me smile! Thanks for sharing such a great stroy!


autumngold (Chapter 17) - Thu 10 Dec 2009

Yes!  Kagome is finally growing up, realizing that Inuyasha will never care for her the way she needs him to.  Thank you for having Sesshoumaru show the rest of the pack how he respects her.  I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru was traveling with Inuyasha.  If he hadn't been, Kagome would be dead.  Beautiful update!  I love this story!


Inumaru_Rapture (Chapter 16) - Wed 09 Dec 2009

aww. What shall happen next!?  Damn Inuyasha... trying to kill Sesshoumaru for bringing Kagome back!  Ugh! -glares at his face as she types in his name...- asshole...


autumngold (Chapter 16) - Wed 09 Dec 2009

I am so, so glad that Sesshoumaru saved Kagome.  Inuyasha was crazy to defend Kikyo after her actions.  Thank you for letting Sesshoumaru care enough about her to take care of her!  Now he just needs to take her away from Inuyasha!  I just hope that Sango tells Kagome about how Inuyasha acted, how he tried to harm Sesshoumaru after he brought her back to life.  Thank you so much for the update!  I really love this story!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 16) - Wed 09 Dec 2009

0o0o0o0o0o KIKYO MUST DIE CLUB!!! i have a tee-shirt for that! great update :3


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Dec 2009

hey this is a pretty neat story, i can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work and good luck with moving!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Dec 2009

yanno you always make such interesting fics! :3


autumngold (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Dec 2009

Thank you for another fabulous chapter!  I'm so glad that Kagome and Sesshoumaru didn't tell the others about Kikyo and her plans.  It's good that at least they can see that she's up to no good.  I just hope that Inuyasha doesn't let his jealousy get out of control.  Why should he get jealous of Kagome's interest in Sesshoumaru when all he seems to care about is Kikyo?  What an silly, foolish little boy.  He seems to think of Kagome as his toy, one only he can play with.  I wish he would grow up and think of what is best for her!  Can't wait for more!


AccidentalGoddess (Chapter 14) - Mon 07 Dec 2009

Oh Thank You! I love it when Kikyou's ridiculousness gets pointed out! The original my tukus. I really like how you had Sesshomaru interact with her as well. "Tell me, undead one..." Many people have taken Sesshomaru's tendancy from both the anime and manga to address people by their title instead of their name (yes, a cultural thing, I know) and used it really well in fics to show in a somewhat subtle way just what sort of estimation he holds the person in. The fact that he won't even call Kikyou "miko" or even "woman" but instead calls her "undead one" is not only telling...but absolutely hilarious! I'm loving it and definately looking forward to more!


knifethrower (Chapter 14) - Mon 07 Dec 2009

Awesome, Amber.  I kind of suspected you wouldn't be able to resist making this story into something more complicated.  You have such a byzantine imagination...


autumngold (Chapter 14) - Mon 07 Dec 2009

Wonderful update!  I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru called Kikyo out about her bitterness and lies.  I hope that the group doesn't head east, it just sounds like Kikyo is trying to trick them.  I really like your new chapter!  I just hope that Kagome stops feeling less than Kikyo now!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 13) - Sun 06 Dec 2009

A lovely story. I love the sweet smell and beauty of flowers but never took the time to look up the meaning of each one; I've learned something here and thanks for the little lesson.  I wish you and your husband luck in the upcoming future. My younger son will be deploying to Afganistan this summer, this will be his 6th deployment and he's been in for 17 years, so I know how it feels to be military. Hugs and many smiles to you and yours...have a nice upcoming holiday, if you can :)


Daryl (Chapter 13) - Sun 06 Dec 2009

Tell your husband Thank You for serving for our country and that i hope that things will work out

Awesome chapter as usuall hehehe a cute little sessh/kag moment of alone time excellent; i cant wait for the next chapter, and take your time. Family is more important than us reviewers ^_^


DocBevCulver (Chapter 13) - Sun 06 Dec 2009

Hey Amber, sorry I've been slacking on reviewing. Been enjoying your stories and wanted to wish you much luck with your move and such. I know how much it sucks to move in the winter or just to move period. Hope all goes well!


autumngold (Chapter 13) - Sun 06 Dec 2009

I really love this chapter!  What a wonderful, true thing for Sesshoumaru to tell Kagome.  I just hope that she is able to believe him!  Thank you for the new update!  Hope you can update again soon!  Thank you also for your husband being in the army!  I just hope that everything goes better for him and you in the future!


GreyEcho (Chapter 12) - Sun 06 Dec 2009

Probably better he didn't continue. He was liable to get himself sat. Or maybe not, dgood thing  Rin showed up.... though I worry he'll snap at Rin if she keeps up her observations.


autumngold (Chapter 12) - Sat 05 Dec 2009

Inuyasha is so silly thinking that Sesshoumaru is making Rin say what she does.  He should realize that Sesshoumaru has been shocked about what Rin is saying too.  Nice update!  Can't wait for more!


YoukaiLady (Chapter 12) - Sat 05 Dec 2009

Keep up the good work! Your fic is very entertaining and I like how you make Rin very intelligent like she is in the anime and manga though I don't understand where you and most other authors got the idea of Rin speaking in 3rd person monologue since I've never heard her speak that way anywhere. Sure, Sess tends to talk in such a manner but, even though the little girl is practically being raised by the cold youkai, she's never picked up that form of speaking; at least you don't make her sound retarded like the rest. Is bad enough to have her speak this way and be a dumb kid. Anyway, other than that, I have enjoyed reading your story.

 


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