Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Allyonora (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

That's it! I'm totally overhelmed! And I almost cried in the end! (oh, who am I kidding, the truth is... I really cried!!)

That's just the most amazing fic, and I'm almost sad it's close to the end, but at the same time, I'm completely happy with it. Well done!


Coastin (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

I saw that the story updated and i was thinking 'wonder if they're gonna kiss in this chapter' and then the chapter was named K-I-S-S-I-N-G so then i started to wonder if you were trying to trick me but after reading i realized you weren't

 

 

 

 

 

....teehee


Luna (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

I loooove this chapter is too amazing for words. I seriously ADORE it!! Thanks you so much for writing something so amazing!


Britt (Chapter 99) - Sat 07 May 2011

Omg! I loved it!

 

You really weren't kidding when you said romance was going to take the senic route though were you?

 

It was fantastic. I missed Bokuseno.

 

God, can't wait for the next chapter! <3


Bright Anarchy (Chapter 98) - Mon 02 May 2011

Good stuff as always.  I'm guessing the tree is next. 


Loveyaa (Chapter 98) - Mon 02 May 2011

Hmm...Kagome seems to be coming out of her shell. She is also giving everyone what they need, but I wonder if that is what she needs. I wonder if they are going to go see Boukensou the tree. I like that you have made Sesshoumaru somewhat jealous of Inuyasha for being able to have the complete life and also showing that everyone is happy to see her, including Ah and Un. I wonder what will be the purpose to visiting the old tree though. I wonder what will be next in the life of them, esp since Kagome is taking back control in her own way :)


RiniTaisho (Chapter 98) - Sun 01 May 2011

ZOMG! I Want to know!

Whom is it that Sesshy has hidden?

 

~Rini


TKE (Chapter 98) - Sat 30 Apr 2011

Out of all the amazing stories I have read, this one has tugged at my heart the most!! I would love to have seen this in a tv series!!!!!


JeniNeji (Chapter 98) - Sat 30 Apr 2011

100? That's so...sudden, I guess. I thought it was going to be longer. I'll surely miss Unspoiled's update alert :) Still, this is an amazing story and you are an amazing writer.


Synyster Star (Chapter 98) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

-Squee-!! Awww I love it :D


sammichan (Chapter 98) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

omgoosh him who???? and 2 chapters left!!!! cant wait for the grand finale!!!!!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 98) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

Forth! You tease! *froths*
I absolutely love this story. I can't believe it's almost over. ;A;
But I'm glad Kagome is finally coming around to Sesshoumaru and reciprocating his affections a little - or at least showing that she's somewhat attracted to him.
But I'm truly enjoying this story and I can't wait to read the next installment. <3

- CA


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 98) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

The boy gazed up into the taiyoukai’s face and asked, “She’s yours?”

“Yes.”

Then, Jun flashed a grin that was pure Rin, right down to a missing tooth. Besotted with his adorableness, Kagome gave Inuyasha a melting look that must have translated to, ‘Can I keep him?’

With a chuckle, the hanyou said, “Get yer own, Kagome.”

 

CUTE!


Luna (Chapter 98) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

This was cute :)


Selenay (Chapter 98) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

Wow... Only two more chapters now, and this will be done. I'm so happy, so excited, for this outcome. This has been one of the most beautiful things I've read on here. But, I will be fair, there are several others that are also beautiful, and I enjoy them, too. But....I love this one. I really do.

 

Selenay.


papitas (Chapter 98) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

I love this fic and wow I can't believe that there are only two more chaps are left. I would beg but I now that the plan was of ending it there and there is a reason. but unspoiled has became a part of my life, I can’t believe that I won’t be waiting every Friday for updates! But anyway I love this fic and only hope that I can find another one that gets close to being this good. I hope I made sense.


Selenay (Chapter 97) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

Yay! The water! They go back to the water! And things will get better, now! ^.^


Loveyaa (Chapter 97) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

I like this chapter. It was quite light and somehow carefree. Even though Kagome seems to be worrying bout lots of stuff. So does Inuyasha over Kagome and Sesshoumaru too know that I think bout it. and then Shippou and INuyasha (and prob Hisoka) are worrying over Kagome being herself. hmm...

Well it seems the fun at the lake was a much needed break and rest. I love that Sesshoumaru realizes that the times may be harder than before and reads into everything (like the teasing). I wonder that now she and everyone has remember the past and the "good times" how long it will take to move forward from that and into their new roles in each other's lives. I still love the interaction that they have with each other and that Sesshoumaru is still Alpha but defers to Hisoka. I can't wait to see how you bring Sesshoumaru and Kagome together. I think I just realized how young Kagome was during this chapter. I wonder how that will affect everything. I can't wait to see what adventures are next for our great heroes :)


Paige (Chapter 97) - Sat 23 Apr 2011

Yay! Thank you for updating!

Things are getting heated up in this story!

I can't wait to see Sesshomaru "play for keeps". :D

 


WildcatYST (Chapter 97) - Sat 23 Apr 2011

Lovely chapter! The character interactions are great and I just love Kagome bringing out Sesshoumaru's playful side! :)


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