I have read A Sentinel Mother, and while I did not appreciate the dark theme of your story, I felt I should at least leave a review to congratulate you on your writing skills. I recently read Choices & Consequences and cannot wait for you to finish it. Your skills are truly awesome, to be able to create stories so different. You have a new fan, be sure of that. Thank you for taking your time and patience to write such beautiful stories to people like me, who cannot write but are avid readers.
....horrible cliffhangers of doom
mari (Chapter 29) - Sat 08 Mar 2014
this story is awesome thanks please update soon.
Inuyuki (Chapter 29) - Fri 07 Mar 2014
I really like this story and chek out for update every day
Please don't abondon it and update soon
good luck!
oo please update this. I hope Inuyasha friends can forgive him. I hope Kagome beat both Kagura and Kikyo
ika (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Feb 2014
i love the story so far, but i am wondering if it is still being continoued or if it has been abandoned?
This story is simply wonderful. I wait with great anticipation for the next chapter.
I really hope you will continue with this story someday, but for now i can only keep hoping and dreaming that one day, i will visit this story and it will have another chapter for me to read and enjoy. But for now see ya, and thank you.
Ana (Chapter 29) - Sun 08 Dec 2013
I keap hoping that you will update this story *-*
candy (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 Nov 2013
I really like your story a lot please write more of it i am finding more pics for your story that gives more of a insight. Please write more I cant get enough of it.
tess (Chapter 1) - Fri 22 Nov 2013
wow what a great stroy cant wait to read more good luck
| Thank you for your warning in Chapter 1, because I'm currently patting myself on the back for good judgement. This most certainly would not have been my cup o' tea. Dear "The Breeder" Sesshomaru with little enough honor to force a woman to bear you a child: you cannot just "take back" words, especially words like "breeding whore", and especially not after you've repeatedly raped the person you said it to and tortured/shamed/beat them. Even if this story is about Kagome's capacity to forgive and whatnot, a woman who falls in love with or willingly stays in the company of her rapist/torturer is not the epitome of goodness, she is mentally unstable and/or insane. I sincerely hope no YIMs have come upon this story and ignored the warnings only to be influenced by the contents. Rape is not okay. Torture, mental or physical, is not okay. To intentionally harm another being repeatedly in any of these manners is unforgivable. Whelp.
That being ranted, I think I'll try one of your other stories now, since I did enjoy the lack of typoss and grammar mistakes in your writing
| Ex-ahh-cu-yuuuse me?! My inner feminist is raising hell and cursing Sesshomaru better than any sailor ever could over here. Wow. Kagome's "immense" power better give her some backbone and defense against this chauvinistic misogynist or I may have to stop reading fo rthe sake of my own sanity despite the wonderfully good writing. Ugh.
Please update I just found this story and I'm dying here
Sesshy: she will soon learn to love this sesshonaru....
Kags: we'll just see about that...
This story is absoluteley gorgeous!!! I'm so excited for the next chapter, I can't wait!! <3 I haven't been on Dokuga in a long time, but this story drew me back to it.
-Dawn
Please update soon!
i love your story when will you be writting the next chapter; please continue to write this story i am enjoying it emminsly. Thank you sincerly waterwomen1414
aiko (Chapter 29) - Mon 23 Sep 2013
update...Yay...*happy dance make*.... i don't know where to start... it's sad to see kags so bitter, and now kikyo and kagura are after her.... ohoho and sesshs second will shadowing her, my.. can'T wait to see his reaction
thank you sooooo much for the chapter...... love, maple86/aiko
Ai (Chapter 29) - Sat 21 Sep 2013
plzzz update and i feel really bad 4 sesshomaru the one he loves hates him and would take his family and flee if she could. Inuyasha, Kikyo, and Kagura deserve what they get. Hopefully sesshy will remove the collar so tht they could establish a healthy bond and protect her pup. He should make it so she can't actually leave the grounds like a barrier meant only for her and wat not
P.S I found the perfect song for your story its called
I Fell In Love by Ask Embla
There's a nightcored version so plzz check that out.
I have to say, this story is just brilliant. I myself am a HUGE romantic and I admit I did not think I would enjoy this story with reading your intent for it to be dark and emotional, however I am completely hooked and now that I am caught up with the story, I will be eagerly awaiting the next many chapters to come. Thank you for putting your time and effort into this story.
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