This OC is incredibly annoying. His character wasn't needed to prgoress the story.
I started reading this, and while grammatical errors arise I read a few more chapters. I won't say your ideas are stolen, but I wonder if years ago you read Chained To You by Moonchild on A Single Spark and the idea stuck with you. Again, not saying intentionally here, just influenced subcounciously. I went back and read the fix again and found many parallels between them. Again, not plagurism, just an annoyance on my own part. I wondered when I looked over your description and you stated you'd been playing with the ideas for years, if you had read the fic, a goodie ten years ago, nowadays ehhh. So just because it bugs me A LOT if you did happen to take influence, perhaps stating that in your description would not be a bad idea. Moonchild in no way owns the troup, and you've clearly got your own spin to it. It just rubs me the wrong way to think just maybe someone else ideas influenced your own and the received no credit, as I had caught plagiarism on A Single Spark many years ago. That case was blatant plagirsm though. Yours shares similar battle and use of Kagome's powers, the chains abilities, to extend, shrink, grow invisible, Their meeting with that which caused the chain. At least similar in the first few. So again take it where you will. Just conceded the O.G. gets a nod if nessasary. Also as a critique, your misspellings, and wired wording is little to much for me. I'd say get a beta and repost an edited version. Have a nice day, and thanks for taking the time to read this.
Kidan (Chapter 40) - Mon 06 Jun 2016
i recently found Dokuga and the first fanfiction i read here was this one. I allready have read many on fanfiction net ect. but this one took me in. it is the first that i ever reviewed on!
I read it litteraly in one go, i just couldn't stop! You have a beautyfull writing stile and a talent for capturing the audience...at least you captured me allright^^
I will look for morr fiction from you now and just saying: also i love your fanfiction, I think i wouldn't mind reading even an origional of you.
I read manny books in several languages and you are up to par with all thos writers!
So i hope you won't stop writing and that you will have fun with what ever story will inspre you, I will deffinitivly read it.
I absolutely love how you ended this! It was a fantastic story which i very much enjoyed reading. (:
Moon (Chapter 40) - Sun 10 Apr 2016
This was absolutely amazing.
Peach (Chapter 2) - Mon 19 Oct 2015
Lol I love kagomes sass
littlest peach (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Oct 2015
I'm so excited to read the rest of this fic!!!!
(Chapter 40) - Wed 01 Jul 2015
Fantistic. I had started it this back in 2009 when it was on fanfiction.net, I'm glad I found it again.
(Chapter 40) - Thu 21 May 2015
this is one of the sweetest story i had ever read. well written and in detail. conti ue with yourr vivid imagination. tnank you for this lovely story.:::
(Chapter 40) - Thu 27 Nov 2014
This is my second time reading this fic and I have to say certain parts still bring tears to my eyes! Beautifully written... I wish there were more fics out there written as well as this one!
I suddenly had the urge to reread this fic and I was not disappointed. Still one of my favorites!
(Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Sep 2014
This chapter is hilarious... especially when Kagome jumped on his pelt and started to crawl up on his back whlie spitting out the fur. I crack up laughing ever time I think about it. I had the read that paragraph a few times.
|I have to say, thanks a billion! I've always wanted a situation where kag takes sessh to the future and then everyone is jealous and all that stuff!
(Chapter 40) - Thu 23 Jan 2014
Love the story! Thank your for sharing this fantastic piece of work, it was very well written.
(Chapter 40) - Tue 01 Oct 2013
I just wanted to let you know that this story has been added to a very exclusive list that only consists of 4 stories (including yours) that represents the best of the best strories I have ever read. And thats alot considering that I have been reading inuyasha fanfics of a little more than 3 and 1/2 years. Thanks for writting this amazing story.
(Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Jul 2013
You are indeed a very talented writer, I adore your story.
His story is fantastic, one of the best novels I've ever read, honestly it was lovely to read. You never were obvious and worked beautifully and realistically the graduation of feelings for each other. We also managed to break my heart and made me want to cry more than anything, I even had to pause in my reading, simply because I had to control my emotions. And that means a lot, there are so many times that I'm deeply emotional when I read a story, then congratulations for this masterpiece! And touch me so deeply, with a perfect ending to a wonderful story.
Ps.: Sorry for my bad English or any confusion in my text, but this is not my language, so use Google translator to write.
(Chapter 40) - Fri 12 Apr 2013
This story made me laugh, and cry and just about everything else! I'm very glad that I found it and must say that you are an exceptional writer :)
(Chapter 40) - Mon 21 Jan 2013
All good things must come to an end, but I am sad to see this one go. It has been quite the ride, but I think you navigated it wonderfully. All roads have bumps and obstacles and I think you stayed true to what emotions would arise along the way. I love happy endings (when everything works out and is worth it in the end). I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
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