His story is fantastic, one of the best novels I've ever read, honestly it was lovely to read. You never were obvious and worked beautifully and realistically the graduation of feelings for each other. We also managed to break my heart and made me want to cry more than anything, I even had to pause in my reading, simply because I had to control my emotions. And that means a lot, there are so many times that I'm deeply emotional when I read a story, then congratulations for this masterpiece! And touch me so deeply, with a perfect ending to a wonderful story.
Ps.: Sorry for my bad English or any confusion in my text, but this is not my language, so use Google translator to write.
(Chapter 40) - Fri 12 Apr 2013
This story made me laugh, and cry and just about everything else! I'm very glad that I found it and must say that you are an exceptional writer :)
(Chapter 40) - Mon 21 Jan 2013
All good things must come to an end, but I am sad to see this one go. It has been quite the ride, but I think you navigated it wonderfully. All roads have bumps and obstacles and I think you stayed true to what emotions would arise along the way. I love happy endings (when everything works out and is worth it in the end). I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
This was one amazing and beautiful story. Thank you for sharing.
seleina (Chapter 32) - Sat 05 Jan 2013
officaily pissed this story was long and well written but what the hell?? i only kept reading because of the pup but now she aint keeping it? i love you but i feel like i have been wasting my time. the sex scene sucked and then they both took forver to say i love you so there was no other sex scene. what a bummer this has turned out to be. i mean most of the time it felt like u kept repaeting yourself i just hope it gets better here out. long read for nothing smh
AngelHeart2122 (Chapter 40) - Sun 30 Dec 2012
This was a great story! You did a wonderful job of keeping everyone in character even as they changed thoughout the story. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Nini3773 (Chapter 40) - Sat 22 Dec 2012
Absolutely an amazing story I enjoyed reading it greatly. Now to be one of my top favorites. Thanks for the priviledge. I would like to read whatever else you have written.
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(Chapter 40) - Mon 17 Dec 2012
You did an amazing job on this story!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!
megs (Chapter 40) - Sun 16 Dec 2012
:( Incredibly sad to see this awesome fanfiction come to an end!!! I loved the ending though and can not wait for a new story!!
This was amazing, beautiful and I enjoyed it!
Herbal~Tea (Chapter 40) - Sun 16 Dec 2012
|Thank you for this beautiful piece of written art. You really did an excellent job with this tale, it is odd that when it was still incomplete I found myself waiting impatiently for the next chapter and now that it has been completed I realise I won't be able to eagerly anticipate any further chapters. However, all tales must come to an end and I will most definately look out for more of you work as well as recommend you to others. Well written! :)
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