I love the direction this is going, keeping me on the edge of my seat to see whats gonna happen next! Can't wait for the update!!!

I've been reading this story for awhile and love it!  You need no help at all, this was a great chapter.  I loved how you had Sess stumble a bit over his words to Kagome and that he is being honorable to Inuyasha in this situation.  I have nothing bad to say about your story it's unique and wonderful and very enjoyable I look forward to new chapters constantly checking for your updates!  I think Sess would be better for  Kagome Inu has to much going on concerning a past love no girl deserves that.  It would be hard to chose both brothers have "lovely" qualities! LOL.  Lucky girl!  You are doing an awesome job with this story. (Something to stir your muse on getting them to realize their feelings) Sometimes for someone to realize and admit their true feelings to another is to have to miss them for awhile or almost lose them, it's true you don't know what you have until it's gone, when it returnes or you recieve it back than you cherish it all the more if it was something you wanted in the first place.  I was hoping Kagome would find away to go home before the trip to hell, or it would suck to be in hell with one tampon hell that is hell!  LOL.  I love her reaction to the guys statement I saw it coming either her passing out, running away or just panicking!  Perfect, this is your story you need no help just some confidence you are doing great keeping the characters close to their original personalities not changing them to much but love changes people.  I like your version of the characters.  What can I say your doing great!  Just gather your confidence, look around you for muse inspiring events in others lives and form your story, believe in yourself and you will be fine!  This is your story taking to much advice from others will take that away from you.  Your excellent! Like you need anyone to tell you any of this! Until next time.  Write on!

Much Love

InuAngel

I am enjoying this story so much!  You are keeping the characters IC and the story has such great twists.  I can't wait to see more!

Well, what can I say? I love this story, I love your sarcasm, I absolutely love your sense of humor! I think you express very well Sesshomaru's feelings and emotions, he is very much in character and I enjoy his shows of affection towards Kagome.

Kagome in the other hand is a bit harder to figure out, it is not as clear what goes on in her heart because her brain is obviously so confused, the poor thing is just a mumbling mess! It is funny to see what goes on inside that pretty head, but love is a very serious emotion, and I feel that she has skirted around the issue by letting her brain take over. I think that she needs a moment of deep reflection, with a clear mind, without the silliness of the poor addled brain, to balance her emotions and figure out which way does the balance tilt towards. I think that there is NOT One Single Woman out there who hasn't done some soul searching at one point in their lives with regards to a man, and has put together a list of the pros and cons of being with that person. I believe that if her sarcastic, overworked, and sometimes batty brain was to become a bit more cognizant, instead of lost to the loony thoughts that seem to run pandemic all around, she may be more easy to understand. As it is right now, I feel she has gotten away by just escaping into -at sometimes- more puerile thoughts and panic episodes where instead of taking a moment to seriously consider the issue at hand, she just allows her brain to distract her with some inane thought.

Again, this is just one opinion, which in the great scheme of things may be absolutely and completely wrong, but while reading the story, is what comes to mind.

Please forgive the lack of previous reviews; I know reviews are the only way we can repay the writers for their amazing imagination, the time and effort taken to create a well crafted story, and for giving their creationto us. Sometimes we the readers become lazy and forget to say Thank you.

Updates are always embraced with joy, so please update soon!

-LG

<333 Don't be worried I love the direction this fic is taking and I can understand how dificult it could be to figure out a way to get them two to admit their feelings. Your doing great so far so just take as much time as needed to get things the way you want them to be <3

Oh and If I was kagome I think I'd have a mental break down to >.< and on her period poor girl!!

I'd have a panic attack too, if too SessHawtie decided to fall for me. I mean...psh...he's gorgeous...

and from what you've written, a very good kisser as well ^_^

This just keeps getting better and better, and pretty soon this EPIC rainbow of a fanfiction will explode and rain skittles, and I'll eat every.last.one.

Did that make sense?? lol. But yea...this has definitely been added to my faves, because it's THAT fantastical. 

Much love,

Shawtyonfiya

Hahaha srsly, that was awesome and boy oh boy did you stick Kagome in one hell of a sticky situation. IIII LIKE IT!!!! Srsly i can't wait to see what happens next and i think you're doing a great job with is, Sesshomaru strikes me as the type of demon to go full boar once he's made up his mind, so obviously his next step would be to declare himself. And of course Inuyasha is not to be outdone, poor puppy he doesn't realize he has no chance whatsoever... anywho I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work and srsly... 'You look pretty.' PURE EPICNESS!!!!!!!

While I have found this story to be a complete and utter delight.

I must admit, the last line of yours...

"Kagome is a wacko, she's crazier than me

And Sesshoumaru learned about the birds and the bees"

Had me rolling on the floor. Shit, that was funny and a laugh I really needed.

Seriously, though? I have absolutely enjoyed this story and the twists and turns of Sesshomaru caught up in something he simply has no way to handle.

It is a joy to read and I always look forward to updates.

Thank you for the joy!

Here I am, laying on my bed

My mom came in, "Eat your dinner," she said

But I'd much rather read this insted.

Yeah, I know it was lame. But you inspired me and all, so... I have a question for you. Are you a sadist? Because, you turning me into a masochist. I'm aughing so hard it hurts. Ouch. But anyways- Great story and fantastic chapter! Kagome's sure going crazy, but not crazier than me. yet. I mean doesn't everybody talk to themselves? No? Well, I do. Poor Kagome. I'm sure every girl who's ever experienced that 'Time of the Month' thing has wished for a penis at least once. But poor Sesshomaru for havig to hear about it! I bet after his mother explained it he had nightmares for weeks.Ah, well I'l quit my rambling now, but you make me happy.In a non-creepy way. Please Update Soon!

JA NE!

XDDD I loved that poem at the end of the chapter. I cackled so loudly at that. I LOVE this story. I spent the past three days rereading it so I could remember what it was about when you updated. Yay for good stories being updated!! :D Eagerly awaiting more,

FL

These last two chapters were awesome.  Some of the lines just completely cracked me up.  Poor Sesshoumaru.  Poor Kagome.  They're complete bumbling fools when it comes to their feelings for each other, lol.  But it makes for some very juicy, thrilling and hilarious situations. I love it.  Keep up the good work!

And the truth comes out. In more than one way too. I don't know if it is a good thing that everybody has gotten what they wanted to say off their chest or not although I am pumped to see the fallout of this. I mean nothing like going into battle in HELL with the tension of a supposedly unrequited love on your shoulders. I wonder how you will get Kagome to come to her realization for I really enjoyed the way that you got Sesshoumaru to open up. I just feel like we are heading into the thick of things again and can't wait for more storytelling where I feel invested and amazed :)

I love this Fanfic! keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter

Yay! Another update!

I kind of feel bad for Sesshomaru, he has put his heart out there for Kagome and she is acting a bit insensitive towards him, I hope she gets to show him some sugar b4 they start their new adventure!

A drunken kagome sounds just so funny! LOL! Ah, to be a fly on the wall!

I'm so glad to see you back! I love your story and was about to lose hope, but you have come back, so welcome back! (opens arms to give TWLOAP a big hug) Please stick around! We missed you tons! LG

OMG Dude srsly... you are teh awesome, i am still laughing my butt off. You pulled all of that off without making it seem horribly awkward (even though it kind of was at the same time lol). Coulda done without the drool and snoring though, oh and Sessho declaring his love to a girl he'd rather dunk in a lake a million times than touch right at that point in time... PRICELESS!!!! On another note YAY YOU UPDATED TWICE!!! In a month... *sniffles* I'm so proud of you, your a shining example of an updating author to slackers all over the world >.> Namely me... but I don't think i'm quite ready to live up to your updating prowess LOL. Anywho GREAT JOB and i srsly can't wait for the next chapter... so yeah... update again...soon...please???? *gives you puppy dog sad face* @_@

YAY!!!! PROCREATION!

very nice ending poem :P I just sat and read this all in one go and I'd like to say *squee* ^.^ hilarity has insued! bravo! Can't wait for the next update :D

Yay!!!!!!!!!Sooo happy you updated again.  I'm glad Sesshoumaru finally recognized his true feelings for Kagome.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Please update soon.

I am officially addicited to this fic! no really I am. I read 28 chapters in 2days on a cell phone lol XP but seriously; it's a very well written peice and can't wait to see it to the end <3<3<3

I quite enjoyed this chapter even though it was long in coming. I think that Kagome's reaction to it was hilarious but we do forget that she is just a teenage girl that gets scared. I love the internal ramblings of everybody. I can't wait to see what happens next and hopefully it won't take as long this time around :)