He admits it... XD
This was a fantastic chapter. It was not rushed and it was perfectly tempered to what they have been through. You were right that it would just be stupid and break the believability of the story should they just fall on each other three days after they are forced to traver together.
I am truly enjoying the character development. I love how Sess is slowly bonding to Kag, and that it makes him uncomfortable and he does not like it... but then somewhere along the way, he stops thinking that he does not like it, and just thinks of the things that displease him about things affecting Kagome. :D
Very pleased with what I have read.
I am going to read some more.
Today has been a marathon FanFic day for me. :D
hehehehehe... your end notes always crack me up... THIS IS SPARTAAAA!!! heheheh
hehehe... I don't know what I find more entertaining... the story, or your comments at the end of each chapter. hehehe... that hooligan...
hehehe... so far, I am finding this vastly entertaining. I love the characterizations.
WAHHHH
LOVE THIS STORY
Lol, and we haven't even finished Izangi's quest yet.lolol
Oh I can't wait for the next update!!
Kylie (Chapter 30) - Sat 21 May 2011
BESt STORY EVER!!
I have re read this sotry 3 times and it needs to be UPDATED!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
Please we need more.
It's on such a cliff hanger!!!
I love the humor in this story! So weird, and yet, so true.... And the plot is exellent, along with the grammar.
Poor Kaggers! Her 'gift' a trip to hell and TWO guys vying for her attetion!
And rocking horse people eating marshmellow pies...
LOVE IT! Read all 30 chapters today, can't wait for the next one!
Giselily (Chapter 30) - Tue 03 May 2011
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE this story!!! i read it in two days!! haha OMG i can't wait for you to update again!! i really hope that this writing block (or whatever it is called :P) pass and you can finish this story because it's WONDERFUL :D
Kahochan (Chapter 30) - Thu 28 Apr 2011
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am simply in love with your story and the way you portaryed the characters!! They are growing so nicely, without it being too fast, nor too slow!!
I started to read this fic thinking it would be a good read, but, boy was I ever wrong! Your fic isn't good, it's AMAZING, AWESOME & STUPENDOUS. I read the whole thing in one sitting!
Do keep up the good work!I Look forward to your next update!
:):)
I demand you update this now. Really.
Just kidding. Actually not really, but more like.... I urgently request that you update this now, because it is such a wonderful, lovely, epic fic that I am about to go into withdrawal without another update. PLEASE?
Seriously, absolutely great. Kagome is --Bleep--ing HILARIOUS, and Sesshomaru, oh Sesshomaru...How did you manage to keep him Sesshomaru while simultaneously making him --bleep--ing ADROABLE.
Seriouslly, I need more- now. Otherwise I'm billing you my hospital bills.
Kiara (Chapter 30) - Tue 05 Apr 2011
Your doing great. keep it up, i cant't wait to read what happens next
jynkers (Chapter 30) - Thu 24 Mar 2011
I actually really, really liked the last few chapters! I've found that I laugh a lot at the characters' antics, and I love the way you're developing their personalities.
As for Kagome -- I think every girl needs to talk to her Mom after basically getting two proposals in one day.
You're Izanagi reminds me of the Cheshire cat. He's appears when he wants, gives you a cryptic message, and then is gone again!
...I don't review often, and I'm generally be more precise about what I like when I do; but I'm pretty tired right now. And I won't remember to review later, so unfortunately you're stuck with this (it's actually pretty bizarre that I can still type at all). Any-when, hopefully I'm making some semblance of sense and you've understood this review >_>;
But yeah, the basic message I'm trying to get across is that I adore you're story and am eager to see where it heads next.
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