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L-desu (Chapter 6) - Fri 09 Jul 2010

argh... need more waffiness!  loving this story too!


Mishikaiya (Chapter 6) - Tue 06 Jul 2010

Cuuuuute.


His Lady (Chapter 6) - Sun 25 Apr 2010

this was sooo cute....loved it =]


Sandreline Moon (Chapter 6) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

LOVE IT!!! Love it love it love it!

 

~Sandreline


Angela (Chapter 6) - Fri 23 Apr 2010

hahaha! man sesshoumaru is acting like a love struck teen! ^ ^ hahaha soo sweet and cute! and the thing about kagome fAntasizing being 'taisho kagome' wah! that was soo cute! ^ ^ hahaha i soo love all this fluffiness! talk to the fluff man! ^ ^ XD!


Madison (Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

HONEY YOU ALMOST KILLED ME!

Well first of all, the beginning was sweet, except I felt really sad that Sesshomaru had to eat alone, but that poor Jaken, I mean if anything goes wrong, he always gets the bad end of the stick, the poor little toad, lmao. I mean come on he didn't hurt anyone. But still, Sesshomaru was hurt that he had to eat alone, I get it.

Nonetheless, I loved how Kagome came to work there because she couldn't do it at home, and in my head, I went like BULLSHIT, lmao, she could she just wanted to be with Sesshomaru, it's so obvious, but since I'm rooting for them, I won't push the subject any further. Sesshomaru fell right for it though.

AND OMG COOKIES AND MILK, surely hun you remember our milk conversation? I burst out laughing, and I couldn't stop for like 5 minutes, honestly, I went red, and all this pink filled my mind, and all I could think was like, oh yeah you'd like to dip your cookie in that milk. LMAO Oh my god, I am so bad. Maybe its the head pain? LMAO, its getting to me my love!

But it was sweet that she stayed even though she was done, but obviously she did that because she wanted to be with Sesshomaru right. Nobody at the office, it's the perfect time to be together for a little while, especially since apparently it's been a while since they have been able to do that. Stupid OTHER people, lmao.

AND OMG! HOW SWEET IS SESSHOMARU? He went all the way to get her her food. Gosh I want that man all for myself. And then I thought about your kinky ramen fic, lmao, and I was like THIS BETTER TURN OUT THE SAME LMAO! Can you tell I want to read some pink lmao? I'm sorry my love, my mind is dirty.


All that to say, I loved the chapter, and I'm so happy I'm caught up, this is a lovely story!

And now, if my head allows me, I'll move on to The Third Parties, so I can then answer your lovely post on my wall.


Madison (Chapter 5) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

Alright, I'm back!

Sooo on to that review.

I must say this was hilarious. I wasn't expecting Miroku to be the gossiping type, but now that I read it, it makes perfect sense, lmao. He does have that love guru evilness about him. I'm sure Sango won't feel like Kagome kept anything from her, I mean it just happened, lmao. Plus Miroku has a big mouth, she'll understand.

Her reaction to this though was hilarious. Her and Sesshomaru are about to become the talk of the office, lmao.

Sesshomaru eavesdropping had to be the best part of the chapter, lmao. He's so after Kagome that he would actually do something like this just to try and collect some information. It is both adorable, and creepy in a weird way, lmao. But don't worry, it's Sesshomaru so he can get away with creepy.

And the sexual tension. Gosh, Miroku couldn't have been more right about that.

And Sesshomaru save with the coffee just didn't work, lmao. Well, maybe it did but only because Kagome was pre-occupied with how she was going to get Miroku killed. It if hadn't been for that, she would have seen right through him, but I don't think she would have mind. Now Sesshy Baby needs to come up with a plan soon, to swoop that girl.

Excellent as always, now I'm off to hop to the latest chapter :3


Madison (Chapter 4) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

Blushes!

Honey you write fluff too good... for you own good. I love the way Kagome eats, which is more than women these days. And perhaps I love it because I eat the same way, lmao.

Her trick with the fruit parfait was perfect (AH AH frenchie joke, le fruit parfait etait parfait). Oh my god, forgive me, it's my head, lol. I think it's cute that he read her intentions, and followed with it. Kami knows I'd share one with him any day. I'd kill her to do so. O.o Then I was like, what, where's the rest of the parfait moment? *And I'm craving a fruit parfait by the way... lol*

Miroku flirting with women, what's new, lmao. Good thing Kagome was there to set him straight. Im sure living with the two sisters is not hell, he's just a playa, lmao. And cutsy Kagome, all wanting to be early for work.. shss I wonder why, lmao.

AND THEN OMG ELEVATOR SCENE HELLO! I was so nervous when they met up with Sesshomaru. And poor Miroku not understanding Sesshy making conversation. I think he almost got scared, lmao. But it was cute that he's all trying even with Kagome.

I must say I think I was expecting her to fall in his arms like that, but nonetheless, it made my heart skip a beat, it was so darn cute. I mean gosh I want to be in his arms as well, so safe, and so secure, AND OF COURSE Miroku noticed, lmao. How he could he not? They are too obvious lmao.

Oh and the flashbacks of the fruit parfait scene... I FELT A LITTLE PINKISH, lmao.

Alright, head throbbing. I probably need a break before I keep going, ;(




jane (Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

i really love your story! its really light and fun and i think it shows sesshoumaru in a different light. i do hope you continue this :)


Madison (Chapter 3) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

If I thought the last chapter was funny, this one is even better.

GOD HONEY! You had me believing for a second that Miroku and Kagome were married. When Sesshomaru went crazy with his thoughts, I did the same exact thing, lol. I was replaying everything in my mind, and I was like wait - wait - this can't make sense. She wouldn't be crazy over Sesshomaru if she was married, lol.

But, Kagome pulled a good prank on him. AND me. Lmao. I think it's cute that Sango is her sister, and Miroku her brother in law. I see a good "sibling-ish" relationship between Miroku and Kagome, it's cute. And I loved the teasing at the end between Kagome, and Sesshomaru. Very Adorable.

Also, I think now their attraction for each other is pretty much out there, they just need to ... get it on? Lmao. For lack of better words.

And zoom.


Madison (Chapter 2) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

Slowly dying of laughter.

Omg, honey, you're too funny for your own good. Sesshomaru's conversations with himself had me on the ground, in two, laughing. Thank you, I needed that. The poor thing is so nervous, and like you said, he's acting like a teenager in love, not that its not absolutely adorable of course. But funny.

Then, the poor Kagome walks in, all nervous, thinking it was a prank. I think she's got it as bad as he does! And those heels are dangerous my love. THEY ARE! But she's was cute, and I want her clothes, lmao. GIVE THEM TO ME *puppy eyes*

Once again his jealousy over Miroku was funny aka she forgot her cellphone in his car.

Then the restaurant. So cute that he never went there, and all his thoughts about her were adorable. And poor Kagome would never failed to notice where he ate, and what he ate. You know she's obsess as well. Oh did I forget their little boyfriend-girlfriend/wife conversation. GIRL WAS JEALOUS, lmao.

And Sesshomaru, he reached a new level, lmao. He might as well I've admitted he was green of envy, and I can't wait until Kagome explains.

You see me, now you don't. :3


Madison (Chapter 1) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

I was reading the post you left on my wall, and before I could answer you my dear, I had to come see this story.

I intend on reviewing every chapter, because your writing skills deserve it, my love.

Honestly, I didn't know what to expect when I began reading this, except that it would be great like everything else you write. H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S is also another word for it, gosh honey, that was fantastic. First I love the Coco, lmao. Second of all, the way she is so innocently attracting everyone is perfect.

And poor Sesshomaru, drinking horrible coffee just to be able to say good morning, lol. The poor little thing, I just want to hug him. [Although I ALWAYS wanna do that, lol] Anywho, I thought it was adorable when he got jealous of Miroku. I'm pretty sure there's an explanation, so I'm not worried. But Sesshy jealous is cute.

I'm glad he got the guts to ask her for lunch. He should know she cannot resist him! And her reaction is so cute!

Well, I'm off to the next chapter, then third parties, and I have to reply to you my love.

BUSY HEADACHY BEE is on the move.


RayRay (Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

Nyaaah! Soooo kawaii! I loved that ending to the chapter. It was so sweet of him to actually go out and buy her the ramen, such a romantic. He's so cute when he's seeming to be shy considering he's such an intimidating person. I felt bad for him because all her admirers were flocking around her. Silly Cupid, it's a good thing he made things right ;D Haha. Loved it though <3 Can't wait to read more. Much love to you!


Darcy (Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

Awww!!! Sessh is so sweet...I love it!


Sena (Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

This is a super cute story! Now you'll have me waiting for this story's and wisteria's updates! <3


Ambra (Chapter 5) - Fri 18 Dec 2009

Congratulation for outlining Sesshomaru as a walking oxymoron: a shy Lord of the Western Lands? Cute!

PS I like Kagome's outfit description: it seems to pop out of "the Devil wears prada"...


nursalina ng, malaysia (Chapter 5) - Mon 09 Nov 2009

Dear Miss Teak, Your subtle romance will definitely literally sweep any ladies off their feet. It is comforting to know creative unsatiable imaginative subtlety to true romance exists in fanfiction. It will be divine to have regular updates to this fiction. Thank you. My warmest regards.


redoxide (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 Nov 2009

This is sooo cute! I love stories where Sesshoumaru is hopelessly inept with the opposite sex :D It's a reasonable interpretation of his stoicism and its just so funny to see them stumbling and flirting their way around each other. The lunch scene had me squeeing like crazy.


silverchan89 (Chapter 5) - Sat 15 Aug 2009
i thought this was only going to be 5 chapters, not that i'm complaining. soooooooooooooooooooooo when does the next chapter come out?

WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 5) - Wed 12 Aug 2009
That was amusing... I wonder when Sesshou will sweep Kagome off her feet? Would u do a scene where both Kagome and Sango both beat the crap out of Miroku? I would find it highly amusing. Keep up the good work and update soon :P

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