Reviews for Deny Me by Demetria Reignart

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amy (Chapter 14) - Mon 06 Jun 2011

New charater, friend or foe? please say she is an ally!


Ashley (Chapter 13) - Mon 06 Jun 2011

10 stars out of 5 i love this story so much i just had to leave a review. OKease update soon. I love what you have done with Sesshomeru's and Kagomes characters. And the plot thickens now i cant wait to see how it pans out. I love love love teh fluff between Sesshomeru and Kagome its almost sweet <3


justafangurl (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

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dats sumt'n else


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 13) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

another AWESOME chapter! This fic just makes me so happy to see in my inbox! i get giddy! I went back and looked it was kagome curling up in her sleeping bag. for some reason when i first read it i thought it said inuyasha was. my bad! I really do adore this fic, more people should read it! :3 wonderful update as always!


Nyuka (Chapter 12) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

Oh thank God almighty for your gracious update...XD (not being sarcastic) I am an Inu_fanfiction addict but only to the stories that are GOOD!  and your is GREAT...BETTER THEN GREAT...do you think I'm laying it on too think I'm try to thankyou for your resent regular updates...XD...I love that there relationship has progressed a bit on the emotional side...though I do agree with their thoughts that it is a mystory when it really started...I like the new demon character Seyerna was it?  I think she will be a great asset to Kagome...already she has unlocked something in Kagome...XD...ty again for updating...

 

Nyuka


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 12) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

D: Why is she letting him get in her sleeping bag!!!!Oh i'd so pull his ears for thta, HARD like a TUG! b/c that's jsut so wrong! sleep with that clay THING and then come lay with her? WTF >:l *does not like hanyou!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 11) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

i love this! nice plot added to all of it!

I wonder if they'd(Seyerna's people) would be willing or wanting to fight naraku. As a people that thrive on fighting, i cant help but think it would be a good match! i love this! Though i do hope you saw my quick message bout the An's, Dokuga doenst allow any over 300 words now, and the review replies either. A lots changed since you started posting this but i still cant wait wait read the next chapter!


Nyuka (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Jun 2011

enought to take over the World....Bwhahahaha..their pinky and the brain....oh sorry about that....so there is going to be more story telling hmm?  If its at least half as good as what you have already written it'll be worth reading twice...XD  if not more....Looking forward to updates....and the progression of this shikon tale...XD.....Nyuka


lara (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Jun 2011

I have to say I do like this story.I don't get the virginity thing.The way its seen,in this story,as once a person has sex their smell's altered forever.It seems odd that if he has sex with a female & cums inside her,it changes her scent but,if he has anal sex,as he did with Kags & came in her a--,wouldn't it have the same affect?Why would cuming in the front be different then cuming in her back or her mouth?...all 3 holes would send the cum into her body & should affect her scent the same.As long as the story sticks to the logic that once you lose your virginty via sex thats it. Which means Kagome & Sessh will never have sex & their relationship won't change or grow.Kags wants to have sex with Sessh & is wondering why he doesn't seem to want to have sex with her, imagine her reaction to the fact that he never plans to have sex with her. That to him shes just a toy & if he wants to have sex he'll have sex with someone else. As I personally enjoy a Sessh/Kag where they've a real relationship.I don't care for the idea that Sessh can have sex with numerous beings..I'd prefer Sessh/Kag only with a loophole like that Kags being such a powerful Miko that once she has sex her immense purification power makes it so she always retains the scent of only herself as if she's still a virgin. 

I like the demoness Seyerna that knew Midoriko & had part of her soul taken to be put into the jewel.But when Seyerna said to Kagome let me tell you, having your soul torn is not a pleasant feeling, you’ve known no such pain until you’ve had your soul torn apart.”  I could only wonder that as Seyerna was already aware of Kags & who/what she was & wanted & could actually read minds & know so much ,then she should know- That Kagome Does know the pain of having HER SOUL torn apart & HAS had her SOUL torn apart .

The way Seyerna approached & acted towards Kagome gave the impression she felt drawn to her. It seemed from the moment they arrived & Seyerna started speaking, it was like she was just talking to Kagome.When it was mentioned she was blind & deaf,& she came to Kagome it seemed she was saying although she's deaf-she could hear thoughts & if thats so,then it'd seem reasonable that although she's blind..perhaps she can see auras or power & if so,she may see Kagome's enormous power & her enormous purity,she may be aware that Kagome (is a powerful or the most powerful priestess ever) was never taught to hate anyone regardless of whether they are youkai,human,hanyou,royalty or peasant. As Kagome seems to see all beings as equal but is unable to accept those who abuse power,condone rape or understand beings who are cruel or evil. 

It seems the story of the jewel in this story is different but its not been explained,I also don't understand if Naraku is still alive & I didn't quite understand what meeting Seyerna & when she gave Kags the jewel was it just a shard or the entire jewel & why did she give it to kags & what was seeing her about or why Sessh brought them to Seyerna & if Sessh was aware that Inu,Miroku,Sango & Shippo were going to be there.


Alexandra (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Jun 2011

Interesting. Please update soon.


SashaMarie (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Jun 2011

Please update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next. I think Kagome and Sesshoumaru are in love and that they just have not figured it out for themselves. Anyways I absolutly love this story. Thanks and please update soon. 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Jun 2011

oh interseting! but kagome has felt her soul being ripped from her body when kikyo was brought back to life! again OMG you updated! i'm so freaking happy for that! i cant wait to see more!

one suggestion if at all possibly, in the future can you put a devider of some kidna between the POV changes, while it's not hard to get it after a second or so, it'd be nice not to be confused for a line or so when the "I" changes from Sesshomaru to Kagome, etc...


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 10) - Thu 02 Jun 2011

Wonderful work, I love it.  I praise you on the plot and the details are absolutely ravishing!  I have to admit this story has had me drawn in from the beginning and I love it!  You've given me quite a few thoughts that I'd like to "try out" with my boyfriend hehe :) lol and your story is so kinky and well thought out its amazing I wish I could write like you do! You're a talented writer and you should keep up the fabulous work I'm absolutely obsessed with this fanfiction!  Please if you don't mind me saying this age old line but... Update soon I can not wait for the next chapter!  Keep up the great work you ROCK!


Lexy217 (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Jun 2011

I must admit. I was not expecting you to update that fast, but I am very glad that you did. Love the new twist beginning in your story!


maelew (Chapter 9) - Wed 01 Jun 2011

Every now and then I look into this story and see if you've updated and when I opened up my email and I saw this brand new chapter I was so excited.Please continue I really and I mean really like this story.Good job!


amy (Chapter 9) - Wed 01 Jun 2011

Thank you, I am so glad that this will have a wonderful adventure and ending. Thank you for continuing this fic, andb"MOre Updates Please" YOU made my day!


Lexy217 (Chapter 9) - Wed 01 Jun 2011

I'm so glad that after 3 years you have decided to return to finish your story. Most authors never return and leave them unfinished. Hope your next update does not take quite as long :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 9) - Wed 01 Jun 2011

i had all but given up that you were ever come back and finish this fic. seriously.

 

that being said this was totally hot. i do wonder if they'll ever compeltely have sex and if he'll claim her at that point. i hope we see more! and thank you for coming back!


amy (Chapter 8) - Mon 09 May 2011

When will you finish this fan fic? When did Inuyasha finally turn up? what was his reaction to kagome being his elder brother's?


Amy (Chapter 8) - Tue 18 May 2010

I LOVE THIS STORY.MORE UPDATES!


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