Ah, and at last Naraku makes his appearance. Outstanding. Thank you for the most excellent portrayal of his character you've started building upon in this chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing how he intends to use Seyerna or make his presence felt in this story. However; why have him appear in the baboon pelt? It would seem to make more sense to have him appear in his post Mt. Hakurei form. Since Seyerna is such a powerful demoness, Naraku wouldn't stand much of a chance against her with the level of power he held before reconstructing himself inside Mt. Hakurei. Were I in your position determining how to utilize Naraku in this story, I would have him at a form at which its' level of power would equal Seyerna's, which from what I can gather from your descriptions of Seyerna would correspond to at least Naraku's post Mt. Hakurei form. Just a suggestion.

Have you tried fetlife.com? They have a fetish list with loads of ideas. Hmm you could do water torture or cuting/needle play.

Payback is a b*%@^ and I hope that Sess is ready for it!! lol! I am in love with the way that you are writing this story and I do like this change from how your original chapters of 16 and 17 (I think). The way you wrote it now, shows so much more depth to Seyerna and that she's not made of stone. I also, love how you gave Kagome strong/tough in this last chapter and how its a believable type of strength! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

*wooppwoodooo. . .

point one for kaqs!!!!*

*omq..  what is wronq with you!??

why are you soo qood??lols .

at first it was all about fluff and lemon and whatnot and to be honest, i was koinda. . 

koinda qettinq sick of it. . but then as you read on, the story just keeps qettinq better and better. . 

i love how sess and kaqs relationship proqress fo=rom hate to love. . 

meen. . i can effin feeelll the love. . 

pat on the back for you. . 

well done. .

thanks for the story*

*cackles madly* lovely, simply lovely. I will read more.

Absolutely Smuttastic!! Delicious.

I love this ...alot. I'm SO stalking this story until completion. You have a fan my friend. An absolute fan.

D.O.D

Amazing story which presents a different, deeper side of InuYasha I've never even considered could exist before. The character Seyerna is very intriguing indeed. However, I'm curious as to whether Naraku will have a major role in the remainder of this story. You've mentioned him occasionally throughout the course of the chapters so far, but he has yet to make an appearance. Perhaps a meeting/confrontation between him and Seyerna could be in the works somewhere down the line? I hope so.

OMG omg omg omg...

My face was burning FOR her.  Like a worst nightmare come true.  But how you made it to be something that gave her the slightest turn on is just..woah. 

Wow.

Omg, Sessho is such a perv!!  I can't help but like this. 

i like this! it humanizes kagome, though i think it's unfair that the demoness can hear her every thought, there's a great deal that shouldnt be able to be seen by other's, i hope kagome learns to block her thoughts. it's unfair that she's so open and Seyerna has open season on anything she thinks.

interesting!

omg that was too funny..Picturing Kags skinning a rabbit and saying all of those things was just hillarious...loved the chapter.

Seyerna really took Kagome's thoughts hard i think, Kagome really did have cause for worry but I do like what she has done in order to teach her what she needs to know.  Kagome can only become stronger from the efforts survival training will teacher...and I'm glad for it Kagome need to get stronger especially if she wants to be with Sesshomaru...thats what I think anyway...yup...and Sesshomaru too he needs to get stronger if he fears Seyerna.  He isn't suppose to fear anyone....its just too weird...XP Ty for the updates

Nyuka

She is learning to survive without him!

Awe kagome that wasnt so awesome to blame her :[ you really kinda suck for that kagome! but this was an interesting update! i loved the idea that though kagome's not trained b/c she now has some control it offsets her balance, and makes it so she has to work harder! she should really hafta work for it now!

I was just thinking about this story and what might happen next. Wow! Totally unexpected but extremely effective. I love your story. I've always had a hard time reading stories written in the 1st person but from the first paragraph I read, I was hooked. Can't wait for more.....so evil of you to make us wait for sesshy and Kagome to have sex after everything they have done already.....I love it!

Podt post post im dying to kno what will happen

oh i liked this chpater a great deal! ^_^

totally in love with this! :3