Sayuri (Chapter 3) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

kyaaa!! i love it!! i was laughing the entire time and yes, Shippo, teach those idiots!! <3


Jamie (Chapter 3) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

Ohmygoodness.... the cuteness of Shippou-sensei!!  If only more males could learn from him... so needed to read this cuteness, today! 


jk (Chapter 3) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

Awwwwww. Crafty fellow and and how right are shippou sensei's lessons ;).If only the men in the real world would follow those lessons, the world for women would be so beautiful.


Natalia (Chapter 3) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

That was brilliant  I laughed so hard  Shippo sensei is amazing  I am so sad it ended though ... Refreshing and cute fic Thx for sharing! 


Shelaughed (Chapter 2) - Fri 12 Oct 2018

Oh, my poor vocal cords.  I'm not used to so much involuntary, girly squealing.  So funny.  It's wonderful that you made Sesshoumaru so clueless.  And Shippou seeing himself as alpha and wanting to train Sesshoumaru on how to be a suitable mate is greatness.  I look forward to the epic miscommunication that will undoubtedly occur.


Jamie (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Oct 2018

I just had to say it:  Rin is so stinkin adorable in chapter 1!! And Sesshy's subtle response was perfect! 

 

Chapter 2:  ok, that one actually posted- my mobile browser decided to eat my first review. 


Jamie (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 Oct 2018

Ok... that was too cute! Ya gotta keep it going!! What happens next? 


Natalia (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 Oct 2018

Lovely chapter! I loved Shippo's witty attitude  He is so cute! Thx for sharing this little fluffy tale! I love it! 


Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 Sep 2018

So cute! I love this one shot, but you really can’t stop here. Sessh?maru‘s on a mission, and so the story can’t be finished ???? ;-)


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Sep 2018

This was absolutely adorable. Thanks for writing and sharing!


Shelaughed (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Sep 2018

Wow!  Great job on your first one.  So, I do hope you will write more.  Because this one just reawakened my sweet tooth.  Should you decide to extend this with more chapters, I would definitely read it.


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Sep 2018

Oh I want more of this! And I can clearly see the premise for another chapter! 

Compliments! Good first try at writing ! 


Chie (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Sep 2018

This was super sweet! Well done, VS! Such a lovely first foray into writing for you! I can't tell you how happy I am that the prompt inspired you to create this, thank you!

I especially love the ending and its symmetry with the fics opening, it had a great impact. Great job!


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