Alashia (Chapter 8) - Thu 03 May 2018

I'm loving this story!

van (Chapter 8) - Mon 30 Apr 2018

Hi, thank you for the stories.

Gotta say, i prefer your single paragraph than that chunky paragraph :)

KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Apr 2018

This was some good information about her getting around and meeting others. Why did you go with this very choppy way of writing? Reading one sentence at a time makes the story jumpy instead of letting it flow. You could blend the areas that are similar together. The scene at breakfast, the one with Kaede and then the one in the kitchen. They can be discriptive help the story flow. Writing is hard work. I’m sure you will find your way the more you write. Good job. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Apr 2018

Very nice update. i like how you did the dream with the tree and her father. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Apr 2018

Kagome left???to go where? She doesn’t know her way around. Finish the thought.Have Sessh or a servant guide her to the garden. She has a whole new world to explore. How exciting for her. Nice update. Thanks. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Sat 28 Apr 2018

This is moving along fair well. Just a few things. The last chapter has Sessh catching her, then we find her in the hot spring with no explanation how she got there. You could have added a few lines from Kagomes POV of how she got away. Also, hot springs don’t cool. They are kept warm constantly, usually by volcanically supplied steam sources. You are doing well. Don’t rush the story. It’s a journey. Good luck. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Sat 28 Apr 2018

Hmmm...this has promise. A twist on an old favorite. 

Himawari (Chapter 7) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

did you post chapter 7 and then remove it? i have an alert for it... i'm confused lol

Ree-san (Chapter 7) - Mon 23 Apr 2018

A little hard to follow at end there. 

Sessygurl (Chapter 6) - Mon 23 Apr 2018

I read it twice.  So good. No lip kissing yet. Does that have to do with the mating? Thanks for the update.

JeniNeji (Chapter 5) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

Kagome is already making friends.

JeniNeji (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

Hm. The Tree of Ages.

JeniNeji (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

All seems well.

JeniNeji (Chapter 2) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

Oh wow. Such stubborn hatred.

JeniNeji (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Mar 2018

Oh very interest beginning!

princess of the western lands (Chapter 4) - Thu 22 Mar 2018

Great story so far. Will Kagome realize that it wasn't a dream? I wonder what her mothers punishment will be. Kikyou seems to have been tricked by her mother into believing she's the heir but then again she also blamed Kagome for the death of father.


Update soon onegai


Ja ne

Minime (Chapter 3) - Thu 22 Mar 2018

Very interesting story.  I'm excited to see how the story flows.  Just favorited your work.

Can't wait for the next chapters.

SammyJams (Chapter 2) - Wed 21 Mar 2018

Can’t wait for more!

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