There is so much more that could have been done with this. It's really good, though you have a few continuty errors.
TKNA (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 May 2012
You need to re-read your work. There was a lot of grammar error in your work. Also some of the paragraphs made no sense.
swift death (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Jul 2010
aaaaaaaawwwww!!!! people do deserve second chances. i'm glad sesshomaru and kagome got theirs, though inuyasha and kikyo im not so sure :)
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| Lots of love to you(r story). Great story I want to see more of what happened with Sess and Kagome.
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