Another beautiful exquisite chapter. My heart is breaking. I'm a sucker for these. Cheers!
Ohhh......That was so beautiful good job you are very good and i cant wait for the next update.♥
PS:you know 4 languages......damn!!:)
genesis (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 May 2017
It was a very captivating moment~
Thank you so much for this story I look forward to reading more :D
You write BEAUTIFULLY. If you had not mentioned it,I would never have known that English was not your first language. I am excited to see more.
Ah, typical Dokugan love triangle... Hopefully Sesshomaru can arouse her to her senses!
Awww, this is so sweet! A silent and aloof admirer?... That's our Sesshomaru alright!
Bittersweet. But perhaps Kagome isn't as clueless about his feelings as it may appear. Lovely chapter. Thanks so much.
Wonderful chapter. I feel for both Sessho and Kagme. But his love for her will prevail. Looking forward for future updates. Nicely written also.
Can I just??!!! I'm DYING!! Imagining Sesshomaru deciding that he wants Kagome to smile so he unfortunately had to go to the one tree that could TALK and TEASE him!! I'm dying. One can only imagine Bakuseno's initial reaction >_<
Thanks for sharing ^^
Ahhh so wonderful! I am so very excited to read more!
You did a wonderful job on this chapter. Your English is also wonderful considering it is not your language, I think this will be a lovely story and I am looking forward to more chapters to come. Great job on the writing.
Welcome! That was lovely and you did a very good job of editing your story. Especially since it's not your first language. Good for you. Looking forward to more of your stories.
Evellin (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Apr 2017
This was very sweet!! Having only 200 words to tell a story is so very hard. You did well!
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