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Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Thu 02 Feb 2017

I just realized that my reviews are too long and I talk too much. I guess I have a lot to say.  lol  :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Thu 02 Feb 2017

The only thing I can say about this chapter is again absolutly brilliant. I loved it and you did the mating scenes, including the dance, magical and fantastic.

I liked how Kogome kicked Kagura's ass and then took pity on her and purified her so she wouldn't feel the incineration of her flames. Besides, whodid Kagura think she was, acting like she was some high ranking demoness with a pedigree when she was nothing but a cast from Naraku. She was definitely delusional if she thought that she could get Sessho from Kagome. lol

I was wondering if Sess and Kagome have babies, would they be full blood inuyoukai with the powers of the miko phoenix or would they be part phoenix and part inuyoukai. That would be interesting. I think I read in another fic that kind of made sense, that when an inuyoukai mates with a demoness that was another kind of youkai that the pup they had would be a full blood inuyoukai because like in Sessho's case he is more powerful therefore it would be an inu pup with some of it's mother's powers if the mother was a strong demoness on par with Sessho. So in this case, both are very powerful and I thinkit would be a beautiful inu pup with some colorings of Kagome and of course some of, if not all, her power too. A new breed of inuyoukai.

Looking forward to future chapters. Brilliant writing. I can't wait until they come across Inuyasha and his crew. Let the fireworks begin.

 


Violla (Chapter 7) - Wed 01 Feb 2017

Wow Sessomaru che balla molto divertente ,aggiorni al piu presto .


FireDragon (Chapter 7) - Tue 31 Jan 2017

WoW.  and can I just say I LOVE the detail of Sesshoumaru dancing for her.  the firelight would make it extremily sexy.  Looking forward to more.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 7) - Tue 31 Jan 2017

YAY! Together forever! I adore the treehouse/nest by the way, how incredibly sweet!


cassandra (Chapter 7) - Mon 30 Jan 2017

Now that was a hot and spicy love scene! I love your story so far and can't wait to see what happens next! 


maria (Chapter 6) - Wed 25 Jan 2017

 Hola! Excelentes capítulo, me encanta el desarrollo del personaje, como va evolucionando a través de su transformación a fénix! Espero llegar al final! 

Muy buena maniobra los fragmentos de kouga!


FireDragon (Chapter 6) - Wed 25 Jan 2017

I am really enjoying this story and hope you will continue it through to the end. I like the Idea of Kagome as a Phoenix. LOoking forward to seeing some of the things Sess is going to do to Court her.  OH and the war fan is called a Tessin.  Just a little FYI for you looking forward to more.


Violla (Chapter 6) - Tue 24 Jan 2017

Un capitolo davvero lungo molto bene non vedo l'ora per il prossimo capitolo. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Tue 24 Jan 2017

This chapter was brilliant. It was excellently written and was very informative. I enjoyed reading it immensely  and it was nice and long...thank you for that. It must have been very rough on you pumping out a long chapter this size but it is very much appreciative and shows much dedication and loads of work that you put it in to it. I loved every part of it. It explained and answered a lot of questions that were floating around in my head and I am sure in some of the other reader's heads also.

I love the development of Kagome's character as she goes through  and accepting her changes. I am also excited about the progresstion of Sessho and Kagome's affection and eventually love for one another. It is at the right pace and not rushed because obviously they had an attraction for one another before the betrayal.

It seems as though regardless of how things turn out, Kagome has no intensions of ever forgiving Sango and Miroku which is sad, but there had seemed to be a bit of animosity between those so called friends and Kagome because of her perceived weaknesses slowing them down.  Now they see how valuable she really was to the group as a whole even though she may not have had the fighting skills they had.

Well keep going on this fantastic story I love. Looking forward to more chapters as RL permits you.


tonya (Chapter 6) - Tue 24 Jan 2017

excellent chapter! looking forward to the next one


tonya (Chapter 6) - Tue 24 Jan 2017

excellent chapter! looking forward to the next one


TeaAngel (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Jan 2017

This chapter was soo freaking awesome!!! I could actually feel Kagome's pain from the betrayal of her mother and Brother???????? I cried and was like I hope grandpa really believed her. Dude I soo want Grandfather to kick Souta and kagome's mom off the shrine or at least speak his disappointment and disapproval to them both!! To make them hurt like they hurt her, but I don't wanna sound mean lol. 

 

I can't wait til the next chapter(s) come out.

 A devoted fan

TeaAngel


TeaAngel (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Jan 2017

This chapter was soo freaking awesome!!! I could actually feel Kagome's pain from the betrayal of her mother and Brother???????? I cried and was like I hope grandpa really believed her. Dude I stop want Grandfather to kick Souta and kagome's mom off the shrine or at least speak his disappointment and disapproval to them both!! To make them hurt like they hurt her, but I don't wanna sound mean lol. 

 

I can't wait til the next chapter(s) come out.

 A devoted fan

TeaAngel


MythMagykFae (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Jan 2017

Go Jii-Chan! I'm glad at least one of them got it! Sesshomaru is great in this chapter, and the changes in Kagome are cool to see. (:


cassandra (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

Wow. I can't believe most of kagomes family doesn't believe her. At least her grandpa is still there for her so far. I can't wait to see what happens next! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

I loved this chapter, very nicely written. I thought it was awesome that Kagome could still go through the well and bring anyone and all her pack to the future with her. To bad Ah-Un and Jaken will not be with them or will they? lol

So Sango and Miroku betrayed her too, that is sad. Here I was thinking that they were in the dark about the situation with Inuyasha and Kikyou. Well I don't feel anything for them now. And I cannot believe Kagome's mom and brother would say such things to her and side with a traitor. I wonder how they will feel when they finally realize the truth.

I am so enthralled with this story and cannot wait for the next fascinating chapter. Excellent job!


Cherryhair (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

I loved this chapter I enjoyed watching the progress that was made between the two. I'm really disappointed in the way the family acted but it make sense with how attached they were and how they feel that kagome has a temper. I'm really looking forward to when they see the group again.


snow (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

I like the way you are going with the story. Everyone always paints her mother and brother so saintly but they are very attached to Inuyasha so I figure they would do something like that.  good story so far cant wait to read more keep up the fantastic work!


Ree-san (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

Really love this cha9and the plot!


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