This was a wonderful story! It was very well written and well constructed. Please coninue writting because you are a great author!
Hola! recién termino el capítulo! me encanta!
Me pareció muy acertada la idea de devolver a su pedestal la espada y que, de alguna manera, Inu tiene un comienzo limpio, si bien se quedo solo nuevamente, acompaño a Kikyo en sus últimos momentos y tiene la posibilidad de madurar y encontrar un camino para recorrer con mucho menos peso emocional.
Por otro lado, me gusta que cortes la historia aca, muchas historias terminan alargadas en el eterno relato del embarazo e hijos o despues de 500 años y eso me lo imagino sola, me explico? Me acuerdo en un fic, terminaba, 500 años despues con una cena con cientos de hijos y nietos por el pasar de los años y la verdad no lo termine de leer porque estaba tan confuso entre los dialogos intentando incluir a tantos personajes, explicando quien era quien en forma apurada que deje la historia por completo (tenia un par mas de capitulos)
It was very complicated for me do this in english, i'm out of practice
I'll keep following you for more
Oh and by the way it was excellent. I really enjoyed it all. Thanks for sharing.
Too bad Sess killed him or it sounds that way. He never learned from his mistakes to become a better um hanyo. I wonder if Kirara will go to Kagome when sango dies or if she will stay with Sango's children?
(Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Feb 2017
Really enjoyed! You're very inventive and I love putting the sword back! Kagome was strong, but not obnoxious and holier than thou. Perfect blend! Your Sesshoumaru was awesome too! Great work!
Yay for the update! also glad that Miroku and Sango now know the truth and are leaving Inuyasha. Will they try to find Shippo? if they do will Kagome forgive them? excellent update it was nice and long but there was one problem...I ran out of update to read. LOL
(Chapter 8) - Tue 07 Feb 2017
Bad move Naraku... also kudos for recognizing with Kagome gone so went your other main issue... saldy for the spider she isnt actually dead. (: Great chapter!
(Chapter 8) - Mon 06 Feb 2017
Love how this story is going!!! My only wish is that it would be updated faster seeing as I hate waiting for new chapters lol
(Chapter 7) - Sun 05 Feb 2017
Hey! Absolutely love this story! !
Perdón pero es más fácil escribir en español, me encantó la idea del baile, le da un giro muy original a la historia, más aún en el contexto que ella ahora el un fénix! Junto con el nido, otra genialidad!
Me pregunto que estará pasando en el grupo en este tiempo, pasan semanas en este capítulo!
I just realized that my reviews are too long and I talk too much. I guess I have a lot to say. lol :)
The only thing I can say about this chapter is again absolutly brilliant. I loved it and you did the mating scenes, including the dance, magical and fantastic.
I liked how Kogome kicked Kagura's ass and then took pity on her and purified her so she wouldn't feel the incineration of her flames. Besides, whodid Kagura think she was, acting like she was some high ranking demoness with a pedigree when she was nothing but a cast from Naraku. She was definitely delusional if she thought that she could get Sessho from Kagome. lol
I was wondering if Sess and Kagome have babies, would they be full blood inuyoukai with the powers of the miko phoenix or would they be part phoenix and part inuyoukai. That would be interesting. I think I read in another fic that kind of made sense, that when an inuyoukai mates with a demoness that was another kind of youkai that the pup they had would be a full blood inuyoukai because like in Sessho's case he is more powerful therefore it would be an inu pup with some of it's mother's powers if the mother was a strong demoness on par with Sessho. So in this case, both are very powerful and I thinkit would be a beautiful inu pup with some colorings of Kagome and of course some of, if not all, her power too. A new breed of inuyoukai.
Looking forward to future chapters. Brilliant writing. I can't wait until they come across Inuyasha and his crew. Let the fireworks begin.
(Chapter 7) - Wed 01 Feb 2017
Wow Sessomaru che balla molto divertente ,aggiorni al piu presto .
WoW. and can I just say I LOVE the detail of Sesshoumaru dancing for her. the firelight would make it extremily sexy. Looking forward to more.
YAY! Together forever! I adore the treehouse/nest by the way, how incredibly sweet!
Now that was a hot and spicy love scene! I love your story so far and can't wait to see what happens next!
(Chapter 6) - Wed 25 Jan 2017
Hola! Excelentes capítulo, me encanta el desarrollo del personaje, como va evolucionando a través de su transformación a fénix! Espero llegar al final!
Muy buena maniobra los fragmentos de kouga!
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