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Leahchan13 (Chapter 19) - Fri 24 Mar 2017

That gosh darn turd Naraku! Oh I'm so mad at him! How dare you do this to Kagome! Ooooh what will happen now!?


Treece (Chapter 19) - Mon 20 Mar 2017

Oh wow!  This was really good angst!  Poor foolish Kagome.  Everything she worked for is under siege. It's going to be a hard row to hoe for her. Yikes!  I partially blame Sesshoumaru for bringing her to Onigumo's attention.  The Spider doesn't follow anyone's orders.  It could look like Sesshoumaru set her up with Naraku.  Or even Kouga!  This could threaten her parenting status with her child. Everything.  I bet he took nude pictures of her and is using them.


This was really a good update.  Fantastic!  It has me thinking :-)


Crimson Rose (Chapter 19) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

this last chapter brought a lot of disappointment. I can see where you're heading with it especially with kagome signing over 60% of the shares and then possibly naraku having incriminating photos of her naked or videos. But I just feel like with the flow of the story and how Kaede appointed Kagome as CEO then she'd be smarter than this. I'm not sure if I'd continue reading until this story is finished. 


vhfluffy (Chapter 19) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

Wow I love this story! It has the right amount of tension, humor and anticipation. I like how you captured Sesshomaru's character, except for the last chapter. He seems way too understanding and Compassionate, almost makes me wonder if he had a hand in any of it. OMG, the whole concept of getting drugged with no memory is so scary to begin with.  Kagome really did blunder this time, even though all her friends and even the stoic Sesshomaru warned her about Naraku, she still fell for it. And if Sesshomaru found her naked, then that means pictures for blackmail are coming next. I really hope she can dig her way out if this. I feel really bad for her character, but that's what makes a good story. It can't all be flowers and unicorns! Love it. Please update soon.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 19) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

I have really enjoyed your story up until last chapter, I'm going to try and continue to read it, but I'm very dissapoineed with how the party went. If she hadn't had so many warnings about Naraku, including from his wife, and the fact that Sessh took away her wine, for an obvious reason (I'm sorry, it would be pretty clear to anyone if their drink was taken away at a party it shouldn't be trusted), I could see her doing something dumb around him, but the fact that she went privately around his house including the bedrooms, which I don't see any business tycoon showing his guests his bedrooms, with all those warnings, why would she even go off alone with him. I know she's not some super genious but she was smart enough to be appointed to a CEO position. It's just way to ridiculous in my mind. But I do hope that your story doesn't stay down this path for to long, it was so very nice until she became a complete idiot.


Zyren (Chapter 19) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

My goodness I don't think I've ever been so stressed out over a fic. Please update soon so I can see how shes going to get out of this mess. 


natalia (Chapter 19) - Sat 18 Mar 2017

Well i am disappointed and sad.... And the whole chapter was so damn confusing. I get that you wanted to depict kagome's confusion but it left a bad taste......I see no light at the end...And it's so hard reading when it's like this....Thx for updating! Will eagerly wait for more even if it's depressing! Hope to see some light soon!


LaDonna (Chapter 19) - Sat 18 Mar 2017

Okay now this is getting good. I need the updatr asap please.


Sarah (Chapter 13) - Sun 12 Mar 2017

This is such a great story! It's very well written and thought out. I appreciate the subtle build up of Sessomaru and Kagome's relationship. So many authors just throw them into a relationship, but you took your time with it and it's very refreshing. I hope you update this story soon!(:


Tenno-chan (Chapter 17) - Wed 08 Mar 2017

I'm a little behind on the story but I had to thank you for both making Kagome's character they way you did and explaining why. I feel like like a breath of fresh air that she is neither too confident nor perfect at everything. I appreciate that she has to work so hard to reach her goals. Tbh JK kinda bored of the stories where she's too timid to try to get what she wants and she's more or less dragged across the finish line and praised for it. This way Kagome's accomplishments and victories (no matter how small) are that much more appealing. Long story short, keep it up! I love reading your work!


Toni (Chapter 18) - Tue 07 Mar 2017

can't wait till the next chapter


Angela (Chapter 18) - Mon 06 Mar 2017

It's good to know that Kagome's not being portrayed as a genius business woman and I just really like how she has her faults and is learning from her mistakes but ugh this chapter made me frustrated haha coz i mean inu and kouga already warned her about naraku and even kagura warned her! But she still wasn't wary enough of naraku and now she ended up drugged -.-" >_< hopefully sess can get to her in time and i really hope she'll learn to be more cautious next time. 


Crimson Rose (Chapter 18) - Mon 06 Mar 2017

I fell like Kagome would be more cautious after getting Koga's warninf especially because recently she has been proven wrong (by Sesshomaru) about the business world and her own business. But besides that, I love your story! Hope you update more.


Inudemoness (Chapter 18) - Mon 06 Mar 2017

Gr8 story so far!!! I understand how you are trying to show Kagome as a more real person with her being a bit naive, having her faults and finding her way though the corporate world which is new to her.  Her detremination remains true to her character but i don't like how despite getting repeated warnings she walks right into Naraku's trap! She seems stupid there to not heed to all those warnings and getting carried away so easily by Naruku despite her wish to not attract attention in the 1st place! I understand that this has to happen to steer the story in the direction of bringing Kagome and Sesshomaru closer, but Kagome just seems plain ignorant here. I still love everything else!!! So plzzz update soon!!!


LaDonna (Chapter 16) - Sun 05 Mar 2017

As of right now I really don't know how to feel about this story. I agree with other people kagome is coming across negative and sesshomaro too harsh. You need to start to change the dynamics of your story because it's a weird setting for a couple now. Looking forward to the next chapter.


Jennn (Chapter 18) - Sun 05 Mar 2017

I really enjoy the story line you have going and I like that Kagome is flawed and realzing her mistakes and fixing them. However, I dont like that she didn't heed the multiple warnings against Naraku. I think she is smarter than that. I like Sesshomaru in these chapters as he's warming up to Kagome and such a good dad!! I cannot wait until the next chapter! Update soon please (:


Treece (Chapter 18) - Sun 05 Mar 2017

Wowza!  That is some cliff-hanger.  Of course, Kagome didn't heed the warning (given twice!) and now she is in a situation.  Uh oh.  This was worth the wait.  Enjoyed it!  Looking forward to more.


Treece (Chapter 17) - Sun 05 Mar 2017

This update was worth waiting for.  I like the fact Kagome and Sesshoumaru are both flawed.  It is almost like Corporate Pride and Prejudice at times!

Kagome has to find her way and the advice that she was given to become "great" is suited.  I like the way the two families are merging and blending whether they like it or not (Corporate Parent Trap!).  This is great and I am looking forward to the lethal Spider's entry and party.  Kagome will be tested and this will help her as well to grow.  Both parents are growing as they face it challenge.  Wonderful job!


Ree-san (Chapter 17) - Sun 05 Mar 2017

My perception of Kagome is very negative, I know that this wasn't how you built her character to come across.  I think one of the issues that creates a discrepancy in my mind is the strong attempt for Sesshoumaru to be this villain, but he's not.  Kagome, Inuyasha and Kouga's responses to Sesshoumaru seems over the top?  I think it contributes to me liking her less?  Pulling out their bias against him, there's nothing about Sesshoumaru that makes him a villian, just a Type A personality that works very hard to achieve what he has and looks for others to prove themselves just as he did.  Of course, that's not for everyone but it doesn't make him a villain.  This is one of the few stories where I think that they shouldn't be a romantic couple, maybe just weird friends. Even at this point where she knows that he was right in his decision, somehow he was the one that was wrong.  It just seems like if they did get together he would have to be the one that made all the changes while she would stay the same.  I'll be looking out for the next update!


Koree (Chapter 15) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

Amazing chap ! Lol idk why but i after i read Sessh saying " come let's meet the children at home so we can talk " i had a smirk on my face lol it's like they are already a couple


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