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AceofSpades096 (Chapter 17) - Mon 05 Dec 2016

Agh! So good!!!! Your writing is fantastic and your story is absolutely enthralling. Keep up the good work! :)


Violla (Chapter 17) - Mon 05 Dec 2016

Un capitolo interessante non vedo l'ora per il prossimo . 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 16) - Mon 28 Nov 2016

Wonderful as always! It was great to see Rin, and the family bonding going on is adorable. (:


Valasaurus (Chapter 16) - Sun 27 Nov 2016

Loving your story! too bad for kags always throwing up :( i know that has to be a drag!!!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 16) - Thu 24 Nov 2016

This update was lovely and of course very well written.  I liked that Rin made an appearance and that she is all grown up with a family of her own. She is still cute though and very intuitive.  I think I said this before but I hope that Kagome has a full blooded pup. I think Sessho is going to be good for her and I think that they will be a lovely couple together. It would be nice if he showed a little affection to his son but that would be asking too much since Katai is his heir and he must not show weakness but still let the boy feel a little love; who knows it maymake him stronger but he has Kagome now to show him that love he never received. 

I have mixed feelings about Inuyasha and his circumstances. He and Kagome should never had gotten together because he was still so immature. He needed to mature a lot more before deciding to settle down with a family. He couldn't seem to handle being a responsible  and caring husband.

Looking forward to the next chapter.  Excellent writing.


WolfGirl21 (Chapter 16) - Thu 24 Nov 2016

I'm finding myself to be enjoying this story immensely.  the character development is good with enough back story to understand why certain people are making certain decisions. I can't wait for the next chapter.


Elizabeth (Chapter 16) - Thu 24 Nov 2016

What a great update! It's nice to see Rin and have a bit of her perspective. I look forward to seeing the growth of Inuyasha's character now that he's a father ready to take responsibility. I also hope to see some more development with Katai, because I can still tell he's hurt about Kagome's last attempt of suicide. Anyway, i can't wait for your next update. 


Toni (Chapter 16) - Thu 24 Nov 2016

Violla (Chapter 16) - Thu 24 Nov 2016

Un altro capitolo che mi piace ,sono curiosa come procedera . 


Lorena (Chapter 16) - Thu 24 Nov 2016

Very nice!  I have mixed feelings about Inuyasha though~ Its not that I don't want him to live on and be happy, because I guess I do,  but I suppose that until I feel Kagome's better off he shouldn't find his official happy ending... ignore my  shadiness and hope to read more soon :)


Rose (Chapter 14) - Tue 22 Nov 2016

It's time Inuyasha learned a few hard lessons like he can't keep screwing up every time and expect to be forgiven. He needs to grow up. By-the-way, what happened to RiIn? Kagome does not have her purifying powers anymore? I wondered why she didn't use it on that crow demon.


Rose (Chapter 13) - Mon 21 Nov 2016

I am enjoying reading your story. That Kaito is something else. I have a question, were Kagome and Inuyasha mated.


Puneeti bhomia (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Nov 2016

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly


Koree (Chapter 15) - Sat 19 Nov 2016

Despite everything i feel bad for Inuyasha , i know he didn't do everythung that he did with bad intentions he just made horrible choices & now has to pay for it but i know they'll come to a better place with each other in the future . Anywhooo great chap :) Sessh , Kags , & Katai are slowly becoming a family 


Marie (Chapter 15) - Sun 13 Nov 2016

Good chappie. This story is going fast but slow, will you make it a long story. Anyway,love the chapter. Im a little jelous though, evem thou inu messed up he still got a baby. And kagome still seems scared of herself. Sesshomaru is still sesshomaru

 


candy (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Nov 2016

Will Sesshomaru Mark her as his mate? Or will he let death take her at old age?


Elizabeth (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Nov 2016

Their confrontation went a lit better than I thought it would. I think this was a great update as we see some emotional development of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. I had a warm fuzzy feeling when it said that sesshoumaru was looking forward to spending the years with Kagome. Looking forward to the next update! Gambate!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Nov 2016

Nice chapter. Yasha got what he deserved. It's over between him and Kagome, now he has a chance to start a new family with his daughter and more than likely he will start to like and then maybe fall in love with Aya.

Hmm, the situation between Sessho and Kagome is becoming more than what he started out to be. He admits to himself that he likes having Kagome around and may keep her until she grows old and die but I think he may fall in love with her and ending up mating her to extend her life and end up maybe having more pups with her. Maybe their pups will be full blooded daughters and sons the Katai will have all the siblings he wants a mother to boot. I thought the scene with the three of them sleeping and cuddling together was very sweet. Katai is so adorable when he mimics his father's mannerisms. I will hate to see him go out on his own at such a young age. That's like kicking a kid out of the house at age 6, how sad and cruel but I guess that is their custom..survival of the fitess sort of thing.

I forgot to review chapter 14 and that was awesome. Both chapters were beautifully written. Can't wait to see what happens next.


Koree (Chapter 14) - Thu 10 Nov 2016

Lol Sessh loves him some Kagome wink wink , amazing chap :)


Lorena (Chapter 14) - Tue 08 Nov 2016

Oh man! I will tell you that I love reading these two be intimate,  there's something so ... it's just great. I wonder what kind I'd baby they'll have, each story varies on the type of baby a miko*demon will be so I'm hoping we'll have a mix or a SUPERBABY!


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