Awesome!!!!  I'm looking forward to reading more.
Hi! 
I like your story so far, it's an interesting concept. However, there were a few times that I encountered the wrong tense of a word, such as 'fught' when it should have been 'fought' to keep in with the past tense of the dtory. So I would have a beta check over your story first to fix any mistakes you may have missed. 
  
Good luck! 
      
ryoko (Chapter 3) -  Wed 17 Feb 2016 
u have a good story going 
update soon please 
      
Mona (Chapter 3) -  Wed 17 Feb 2016 
Great!!!  Looking forward to reading more. 
      
Tarajah (Chapter 3) -  Wed 17 Feb 2016 
Really interested to see where this story goes 
      
Please keep up with regular updates. I am loving where this story is going. Awesome idea!!! 
      
Lady T (Chapter 1) -  Wed 17 Feb 2016 
Like the story idea excited to get the next chapter, so update soon. 
      
ryoko (Chapter 2) -  Wed 17 Feb 2016 
interesting, has promise 
how old is kagome now? 
if you her remmember when she is 8 or 9 in chap 1 
in chap 2, you have act like she is younger then 8 or 9 
      
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