Reviews for Stronger by Caedes

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mah (Chapter 10) - Thu 14 Apr 2016

You !!!!! I blame you for feeling so excited every  time you update i now need to look every  other day if you updated  !!!!!!!ahhhhhhhh i need more  !!!!!!!!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 10) - Thu 14 Apr 2016

Awesome chapter. Back in chapter 8 you had mentioned that Kagome will only mate with Sesshomaru so does that means that none of the males in the pack will be able to touch her, but only the females will be allowed? I wonder how Sessho will feel about that and the other pack mates will feel about that?  Maybe he will change her mind later on in the story. Also, do any of the pack members that are mated have any pups? I don't think that I heard anyone talk about any pups except Eito when his mate died during a battle she was pupped at the time.

I had a hard time reading through the sex scene with Sessho and Raidon. This is the first time I have read something like this involving the pack dynamics. It is something different and since Sessho is my favourite character, I just can't wrap my head around him having sex with another man. It is the same way with Kagome having sex with another woman. I know there are quite a few stories out there with those types of storylines involving my favourite couple but I avoid reading them. You got me through my first without me getting a nose bleed. lol

I like your story and I look forward to reading more. You have a nice writing style, keep up the good work.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 10) - Wed 13 Apr 2016

Ah so ge finally accepts shes his mate (: now to convince her lol (;

Nice chapter (:


MythMagykFae (Chapter 10) - Wed 13 Apr 2016

Ah so ge finally accepts shes his mate (: now to convince her lol (;

Nice chapter (:


Lauren (Chapter 10) - Tue 12 Apr 2016

Smexy time! That was sweet, in an unconventional way. It's great that Sesshoumaru has his second and the rest of the pack there to help and care for him (as he does for them). I wish he got to see more of the supposed teasing they subjected Kagome to. That'd be funny. You can't make us wait an entire week for the next update though. Don't be mean~ ???? Update on Fridaaaaaaaay.

 

Animefreak242 

aka

Kawaii Girl 


Eva (Chapter 10) - Tue 12 Apr 2016

That was beautiful. It's all about love and giving those that you love pleasure. Hopefully Kouga won't do something boneheaded and make Sesshoumaru tear him apart. Ayame would be put out. Or maybe secretly grateful at this point.


Leaora (Chapter 10) - Tue 12 Apr 2016

La la la lala love... lala love...makes the world go round!!! This was a scrumptious chapter.


Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Apr 2016

 

WOW!!!!

Really HOTT! 

Thank You for the update. Was expecting this to be updated Monday. After reading this I REALLY hope that you update again ASAP.....like TOMORROW....

Yeah, I'm addicted

;-) 


Wid0w (Chapter 10) - Tue 12 Apr 2016

I actually really like the pack dynamics you have in this story and not just for the lemon/lime portions. I think you are depicting what would happen if youkai were a bit more bestial than humanoid. A lot of authors write about youkai having a heat, a mate, a beast, instincts, and a beast form so in my opinion, having pack mates be intimate with each other is just another side of the same coin. This is a great story!


Brittany (Chapter 10) - Mon 11 Apr 2016

I LOVE this story. It's well written and keeps me wanting more. This chapter was fantastic, I can't wait to see Kagome training and Sesshomaru just waiting. Can't wait for an update.


Mona (Chapter 10) - Mon 11 Apr 2016

Sorry but I just cannot continue to read, this sharing business does not sit well with me.  Good luck though.


sesshouscat (Chapter 10) - Mon 11 Apr 2016

Wow ( blushes) wowthat's all I can say wow 

I'm loving this story  more and more 


Lea (Chapter 10) - Mon 11 Apr 2016

glad that kagome didn't have to deal too much with kouga's bullshit, but i have a feeling he's going to come back. especially if sessho is dead set on having her as a mate. hopefully his "session" with raiden shed some light on that situation and his feelings for her since he's emotionally invalid -.- eargerly waiting for when kagome finally becomes part of the pack! thanks for updating!


julia (Chapter 10) - Mon 11 Apr 2016

Thank you for another amazing chapter


Kiara (Chapter 10) - Mon 11 Apr 2016

That was incredibly hot.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Fri 08 Apr 2016

What a wonderful chapter! She gets to be pack (: Kinda detesting Izayoi now though...


Katrina Kee (Chapter 9) - Thu 07 Apr 2016

So if I get this then Kagome has a choice on wether she is sexually active with all members of the pack or not. She could have all, none, or a select few as a lover in a large group or in a private location. She could even take a lover outside of pack. She has a choice in this. That's good. I don't think that Kagome is ready for a "free for all", with the entire pack, even if she is goods friends with them.

I think that is what Izayoi doesn't understand about the youkai culture. From a human standpoint she probably believes that Touga would be cheating on her and that she just isn't woman enough for her, etc. and that she doesn't want to be with any male but Touga. It is also taboo in human culture, but not youkai culture in this case. She is clearly thinkg only about the sexual aspects of pack dynamics. She has totally missed the train concerning anything else. Poor Touga. He is truely whipped I guess. Of course, he is trying to make her happy but at what cost to himself and towards his pack? I don't think that Izayoi either realizes how he is suffering by denying his instincts or maybe she just doesn't care.

Of course once I see Kags and Sess getting together, I just see Sess getting a bit possessive and not wanting any other male to touch her, etc. but I will wait, read and see what happens next. In the meantime, I hope that Kagome kicks some seriou a** when it comes to Kouga and double for the wolf girl Ayame, for thinking that he is just sowing some wild oats or something by being married to Kagome. What a double standard! Youkai expect humans to respect their pack values, beliefs, etc. and then turn around and think that human marriage is nothing more than a side-trip! While other humans want their youkai mates to drop their instincts and, in essence, adopt human values because they are the only values they believe are worth having. Seesh!!! Kagome has her work cut out for her!!! I wonder how this has shaped Inuyasha since Izayoi made the comment that he was more dog than she thought. A bit ugly if you ask me. I can't wait to see how this story progresses!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Wed 06 Apr 2016

Liking the chapters, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter!


Eva (Chapter 9) - Tue 05 Apr 2016

I actually feel that Izayoi would in cannon be exactly what you had made of her here. I can't wait to see Kagome get even.


Lauren (Chapter 9) - Tue 05 Apr 2016

This fic is fantastic. I apologize for not reviewing at the end of every chapter.

 

...That was... disturbing. I feel so bad for InuPapa. He seems like such a great father, and a caring leader, and his wife is such an ignoramus and is so unwilling to accept him as he (and their son) will be, that she'd hurt him like this for the next fifty years. "I thought I could have Inuyasha with me—but it turned out he had a little more inu in him than I thought" - heinous bitch. I really hope you aren't going to include Inuyasha's fallout from discovering his mother is a bigot in this fic. That'd be so horrible... :(

 

OHOHOHO~ Apparently, Izayö being there requires an edge to be taken off. Dirty. *giggles* Well, I am glad that Sesshoumaru finally proposed and Kagome accepted. At least she'll have the pack to support and to support her. Looking forward to the legal castration that is no doubt coming. Maybe you'll be kind and make him so difficult that they kill him. That would be satisfying.

 

*throws confetti because you updated on a Monday*

 

Have a great week!

~Animefreak242

aka

Kawaii Girl 


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