awww this story was cute...at first i was alil confused but when you ended with him havin it all been a dream i got it....it was really good and cant wait to read more.... LUV YAH :P
Loved the story. Your a great writer, and I absolutely appreciate you using your talents for fan fictions of stories you obviously passionately adore.
I only have one question: In chapter 15 (To the Past), you mention Kouga as being the eastern lord, but on later chapters, the eastern lord is a bear youkai named Shouta (chapter 25: mating & meeting with the lords). Was that an error on ur part, as in forgetting you mentioned Kouga as the eastern lord early on? Or was that intentional?
I went through the reviews, and it seems nobody has mentioned that yet.
I know errors happen, so no biggy. lol.
Once again, I really enjoyed this one, and I'm bookmarking it for a good read in the future.
Don't stop the good work. Adios!
...p.s... you can write back to me personally, my email is on my profile...
Liking it alot
MidCat (Chapter 31) - Thu 04 Jun 2009
What an amazing story!! A true gem!! And I am so happy to have founded it! I read it non stop from beginning to end and I can assure you that it has become one of my favorite stories out there!!
You have an amazing talent to tell stories and I am am just so thrilled to have found you!! I look forward to read more stories from you!!
Thank you for sharing your great gift with us the readers!!
Best wishes:
MC
Akumi99 (Chapter 31) - Sat 07 Feb 2009
I'm too lazy to sign in. I think I'm the only one that wasn't confused. I don't see what was so confusing about any of this. It flowed together well, and it was a very powerful piece. I fell in love with it. The horror and pain that Sess went through...he suffered it alone the first time around. He was broken because he never had someone there for him, never had someone eot help him through it. So, when he met Kagome in the future at his job, of course he would just watch her. He didn't know if she really cared, and if she did, he wanted her to work as hard for him, almost...feel part of his pain. He had just spent hundred's of years away from her, waiting for her. As to why people think it's weird that he would wait for her...read the damn story. He loved her. It doesn't matter if they had a love affair before anything. It showed throughout the story, not fully, but it showed that he had been growing closer to her before Naraku. I like how it wasn't about how they fell in love, it wasn't a corny story about her trying to figure out if she loves him, of her trying to leave inuyasha. She loved him, he loved her. That was it. You don't need a long past with someone to love them. Love...cannot be controled. Also! She had no problem working so much...because she wanted to forget everything. Her pain of abandoning the past burned in her, and after four years of trying to forget, of losing hope, it didn't matter once she found what she was looking for. That habit of working hard and throwing yourself into work would stay. Also...I can buy that Kagome would be that good of a secretary. It might have been a little stretched, but not too much. Like you said, the point was to show the great side of human nature. I also have to say...I LOVED the fact that she and Sess got into a fight. Hahaha. Also...mind blowing sex is not all that hard to see either. How long has he lived? Really? He's sure to have picked up a few things that will curl your toes. I also liked that...you didn't extend any one thing longer than it needed to be. You didn't make a huge deal about catching the southern lord, although...I didn't enjoy how fast you skipped over the miscarriage. It felt like it held no impact. One small scene..and it was done. With Kagome's love of Children..I would have figured it would have at least stayed. However, how the story ended was wonderful. How since she went into the well again...she re-wrote history. whether she knew it or not, she did save the man she loved. This was a story about love, about getting through the trials and holding onto each other and still staying pure throughout. Sadly, when things go wrong, people lost their good side. Very well done. I loved the meaning and I love the way you told the tale. It was fun, sad, and heart breaking. Just because people can't keep up with the story, don't mean it's bad. Don't listen to them. Also, people really don't tend to think of humans when they write much anymore. It's all fake and what they think sommeone would do, not what someone would actually do. In life, each step, each choice,a nd each memory decides how you react and behave to any given situation. Everything makes you who you are...and it's not as simple as just being there. Pain stays, love grows, and it makes you act in crazy ways. I love that your characters...had the hearts of humans. and the struggle of the human mind. I'd read this story any day. Now..this got REALLY long. I just got angry at the bad reveiw you got. No excuse for that. - Love Akumi
| i was so confused, so sesshomaru was dreaming all along about him and kagome parting in feudal japan when her and shippo left, then he found her, and then they became lovers and maybe even more, and then they actually became mates when kagome returned to the past....i was wondering what happened to the sesshomaru in the future but now i see..i thought this was a very good story i absolutely loved it...i wish you would make a sequel or something though PLEASE
| I have to say that was great. It was hard to understand there for a while, then it all came together at the end. That was awsome, I find it kinda funny, I was working on something smiular. ~Agurlofangels~
Jessica (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 Oct 2008
| I'm so confused. Prior to Kagome returning to her era, she and Sesshoumaru had no intimate relationship. She had been yearning all of those years for him?? For what? And he for her?? Seems a bit far fetched...there was no previous inclination that they shared much of anything for him to wait 504 years for only her. Then upon their reunion, he watches her (someone he has loved or been in love with for 504 years) from afar, wants her to prove herself to be a hardworking individual again, when she does he moves her up the ladder quicker. He creates this ridiculous work schedule, which she has no problem with...ha! She impresses him with her ability to organize and color code... I'm sorry but the scenario of her being some grand secretary earning him one million dollars extra in a week, please! Then the admitting of the feelings part which leads to her world shattering sex (better than that one time with the guy from the bar), I'm sorry but that was way over the top of unbelievable. Its not that it is so bad, it just doesn't flow together and some parts are way too exaggerated.
| lmao i love that she started a snowball fight and all, this was adorable!
| I'm so confused by the end. So every thing in like the first half was a dream right? or at least Inu dinging and what not? Other than the ending i loved this fic. Im just a bit confused on the end. Sry.
Nyuka (Chapter 30) - Sat 04 Oct 2008
| My Brain....it Hurts!!! O.o+......Gosh that was a great story but I brain it hurts sooooo bad....time traveling it just is to screwy....the pain......hehehe...but seirouly that is some confusing stuff...I first I figure you just desided to change plots right in the middle from moder Tokyo to feudal Tokyo...and what you said "its all a dream" it could have been a dream because Kagome would have shown up 150 years after the time she originaly when back in time.....the time flucs continueum should be in wack as alternat realities combine.....Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa the pain.....ohhhhhhhhhh but it soooooooooooo worth the pain it really was a great story I spent the beter part of my day reading it....XD.....hard to tell where the climax lies exactly but I don't really care the story was great and it didn't have to meny of the things that I can't stand (thoughs thing usely are thing that creat wrong acusations between our favorit lovie dovie duo...XD.....ya know its been a loooooooooooooong time since I got to read a finished story thankyou it was very refreshing...XD........Nyuka
| “Desist in your struggling, onna.” The sleepy baritone voice boomed. this line had me giggling, so far i'm really loving this story, i hope you get many reviews telling you so!
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