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megan (Chapter 30) - Wed 17 Jul 2019

i like the ending that was well done.


SmilingFool (Chapter 31) - Tue 07 Aug 2018

This story rocks....  I loved and had fun reading it...  I hope you write other stories...  Thanks for completig this one.  

Truly a great fic....


Seluna Maru (Chapter 30) - Sun 30 Oct 2016

Ooop there it is lol


Seluna Maru (Chapter 27) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

See this tale is all over, Shippos has liked 3 diff people none seem to stay anything more than a thought


Seluna Maru (Chapter 26) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

Ok I have been wondering whats up with this story? Nothing got solved with the Sessh from the future! I mean did the future now change? I mean fainted a few chpts back and the writer never addressed that. There is also the fact thag the future Sesshomaru had been waiting so long for Kags but he never said he mated her in th past. And what happened to that mate he had and daughter there are no mentions of them with Kags now in the past. Even if I can kinda guess what happens as a writer one must never assume their readers get it.  Its kimda feels like the writer was tired of where the story was going and changed it but didn't find a good way to do so. Stories do change but it needs to make sense. I mean how the heck did Shippo push them in the well in the first place? Then they didn't try to get back? Seriously strange! Needs explaining. Hopefully it is explained later 


Seluna Maru (Chapter 20) - Sat 29 Oct 2016

Still reading! And men this story has taken some serious twist and turns. I usually don't like Sesshomaru too "smiley" but idk you found a way to make it just the right amount. It's subtle, this portrayal of him is wonderful! My heart skips a beat and I get those butterflies! At first there were some parts that made me roll my eyes but Im honestly glad I kept reading. I love this! The plot twist smh I'm having a hard time figuring what will happen next uuirrggghh I freaking love it!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 4) - Tue 25 Oct 2016

Ok no way in hell Sesshomaru waits a whole 4 more years then they barely even speak of the others and the past after the story made it clear that she was desperate to find anything on the others?! You would think thay would be the first they speak on, even shippo would want to know and ask Sesshomaru. This kinda makes little to no sense at the moment. The writing is excellent despite my previous statement


marisel (Chapter 31) - Wed 08 Jun 2016

This is a really really nice story to read.  I never expected for them to go back k an change the history.  Really good twist.


candace peaches (Chapter 30) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

this story is the best the second time around. very good. i had no problem with the time traveling plot. i loved this story. good writing. keep it up. bye


maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 31) - Wed 15 Apr 2015

i read your story from beginning to end. I loved every word of it. you did a great job writing this story. i always wondered what would have happened if kagome and sesshomaru got together. i have a great fondness for the elder brother(even if he isn't real). i also enjoyed the love-making scenes too. not to graphic and not to boring. write more stories like this and i'll read them. GREAT work. 


DeathDagger (Chapter 5) - Fri 19 Dec 2014

Well Damn....


Nancy (Chapter 31) - Thu 15 Aug 2013

I loved this story!!! Very well written and had me entertained the entire time! I was sad at some parts...(You know what parts) and happy at others... Great read!!!


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StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 31) - Sat 25 Feb 2012

I would really like to read what would have happend if she did not fall back down the well. I liked both parts of the story, but I couldn't shake the feeling that they were two different stories.I know, I know, it's the way it was meant to be, and trust me I really think your writing wonderful and enjoyable; however, I would still love love love to read what would have happened if she didn't fall down the well again.

I love Inuyasha, but the ending to the anime...I can not stand it, mainly because well... you know Sesshomaru and Kagome forever! And if you go by the ending of the anime series, if you are sticking to all the fact in the series, then it makes it kinda annoying to have to manuever around.

That being said I loved the series still and just because I didn't really like the ending I understand why it happened that way and that it was meant that way. I find your story leaves me feeling the same way, I really enjoyed reading it but for me it seemed to not fit.

After I fell in love with the beggining and the relationship Sesshomaru and Kagome shared, the whole idea wonderfully played out addictivly so, the split in the story threw me off balance. My brain wants to take the begining and put it with a new ending and take the ending and put it with a new begining and then love both stories... =D

 

(please don't hate me) yeah I feel like I'm being a pain... I'm sorry, I just hate this feeling of non-completedness I'm kind of OCD about reading. -.-

 

Thank you for taking the time to write and I look forward to reading some of your other stories as well. =)


Kreyana (Chapter 31) - Wed 07 Sep 2011

I enjoyed this immensely, especially after the last story I read where the whole thing was going great then it seemed like the author randomly killed off Sesshoumaru. >:/ evil of evils.

 

I love your writing, your detail and characterizations. I didn't think there was anything wrong with it at all - I'm sorry that at least one person disagreed. The idea that she takes Shippou with her is wonderful, I think it is unique and a big element of the beginning. The only thing I would say that irkes me is a fact that was absolutely necessary to change in order for the time flow to work out, and that was the children growing up so fast. No biggie, and obviously absolutely no way to not have it shortened.

 

The wish-that-isn't-a-wish was awesome, I've read a lot and I don't believe I've come across anything that deals with the jewel in that way. That was a great idea.

 

The only thing I have to wonder now... is "did Sesshoumaru create his Robot Inc. in that timeline?" That would be quite interesting :D

 

It was a great read, I thank you very deeply for sharing it with us.

 

Oh yes, and as for people being confused as to the very ending, with Sesshoumaru remembering the beginning and thinking/knowing it to be a dream... I have one easy explination for people!!

In the words of The Doctor, "Wibbly-Wobbly Timey-Wimey...*vague hand gestures*"


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 31) - Tue 25 Jan 2011

Cute story! I really like it! =)

Have a great week!

~~Mizuko~~


Scarlet (Chapter 30) - Tue 31 Aug 2010

I loved the story!!! One of my favorite parts was the ending where he thinks everything was just a dream!


SashaMarie (Chapter 30) - Wed 28 Jul 2010

I loved this story. It was AWESOME. I cant wait to read more of your stories. Thanks.


swift death (Chapter 30) - Wed 21 Jul 2010

oh my gosh! that last chapter totaly cleared things. while reading through the story i was wondering what the hell sessomaru is doing in the future and what happened to him and struff like that. him dreaming totally explanes everything. thanks for a good story :)


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