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Clean & Clear by punkrockartist91

The Brilliant Idea

Story: Clean & Clear

Theme: M for Mature Audiences only

Plot: Four girls, Rin, Ayame, Sango and Kagome; The four ugliest geeks in school choose to take revenge by becoming 'beautiful,' they decide to use their new looks to get back at Kagome's former ex and to get the sweetest revenge. But, will their obsession of their bodies become too much? Or, can they discover the truth about themselves?

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Inuyasha characters or any of the characters that may be said during the making of this story. Therefore, it's not my show. Thank you. Have a nice day.

Author: Nanashi-san

Notes: In this chapter, you are introduced to most of the characters and how they think and they life style they live in.

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Four girls sat alone at a lunch table at the end of the lunch tables outside. They each had bagged lunches and each had a different sandwich and contents inside.

A girl, with mid back, black hair and cheek bone length bangs that covered her eyes stuck a carrot into her mouth and munched on it. She wasn't over weight, or too thin, she was in her normal range of weight.

The girl wore knee length white socks with grusty and faded black clogs on her feet. Her legs were perfectly shaped, but no one noticed those little things about her. Like everyone else, she was wearing the school uniform. School policy said that you didn't have to wear the uniform everyday. But, Friday's you must wear them for visitants reasons only.

The booger green skirt, the white blouse and the red scarf, it was the school uniform. Though most people didn't like wearing theirs, it saved people, like this girl, the money to buy more important things than clothes and makeup.

Her face however....wasn't what the school would call the 'prettiest or popular'. Her eyes were hidden away by thick bangs and glasses that made her eyes to big and bug eyed you couldn't help but look at her. And for emphasis, the middle of her glasses at the bridge of the nose was taped. She had little acne, maybe a little here and there, but mostly her skin was clear. But, she did just have her braces removed and is now wearing a retainer which caused her to talk a little abnormally and spit her words out just a little.

"Kagome? Are you okay? You were fine in Calculus. What? Did some bully pick on you again?!" Another girl from across the table blurted out.

The girl lifted up her face to look at her out spoken friend. "No, Sango. Nothing's wrong. It's okay. It's just...." Kagome blushed and looked down at her half eaten PB&J sandwich, she looked back up at her friend, a saddened expression written all over her face. "I seen Inu with Kikyo again..."

Sango sighed and muched angerly on a slice of celery with peanutbutter on it. "Kagome, he's just a big jerk. Everything he did to you, you don't deserve. Breaking up with you and then dating someone a day later and pretending you don't exist. Then taking you out of class and saying that he was only with you for a bet...It's pathetic. He's pathetic. That dog is like the protozac scum on the bottom of my shoe.

Sango had been friends with Kagome for a long time. Ever since before they entered Preschool, they were inseperable. Sango was always outspoken and verbal. Unlike Kagome. She was just...Kagome. Shy and barely talked. Even the word 'kiss' made her blush.

Sango Taishi was a little more tanned than Kagome was, with brown hair that almost reached to her buttocks and light brown honey warm eyes. The slightly old girl was born into a long line of Demon Slayers. She was taught how to fight and to battle, but, the battling part she really didn't need because of police and people like that to take care of situations.

But, unlike Kagome, Sango didn't wear glasses. But she wore braces and she had acne a lot more worse than Kagome had. Though she wasn't as bad as their other friend Ayame.

Ayame, was a wolf demoness. Her hair was a reddish color and was alway up into two ponytails. Her bright green eyes were covered by glasses that always fell from the bridge of her nose and the acne on her face was pretty bad. She wore no make up and her teeth weren't close together nor where they straight. Straight enough, but there was still a little turn in them, except for her canine teeth.

Ayame looked at Sango and nodded. "She's right, Kags. You don't need him. He's a loser jerk. You won't get over him if you don't try."

Rin smiled and nodded quickly. "Ay's right too. You've got us and that's all that matters." She gave a large, yet assuring smile and took a sip of her water bottle.

Rin Toisho wasn't the ugliest of the group. She didn't have acne, or braces, or retainers. She did have glasses, but she was the smartest person in school. And that's what made her a geek. Everynow and again, Rin would be picked on for being smart and shoved around.

After today, they were free for 10 whole days. It was Spring Break and Kami knows the four girls really needed it. A week and three days away from homework, stress, drama and more stress.

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After class was over and the last bell rang:

Kagome, Sango, Rin, and Ayame stopped at Rin's locker so she could grab her books for homework purposes because the teachers were evil and they gave a lot of homework Rin would be pounded for the next 7 days.

Meanwhile, Inuyasha was a little ways down from Rin's locker. Turning the combonation lock, he opened his locker and set his books inside. A pair of pale, thin arms moved around his waist and a scent filled the Inu Half demon's nostrils.

"Hey Kikyo." He stated in a bored tone.

"Hey Yashie. Are you busy tonight?" She asked in one of those annoying lingering voices.

Before he could open his mouth Sesshoumaru, Shippo, Miroku and Koga soon arrived at his locker.

Inuyasha never really got along with Sesshoumaru, even though they lived under the same roof since Inuyasha was born. Even though Sesshoumaru wasn't the kind of person to show affections, Sesshoumaru was still there for him.

There was a time long ago when Sesshoumaru was kind to Inuyasha. But, that was ancient history.

"Because I was wondering...Would you like to go to that new teen club across town? The first 100 people get in free and it's a new club...so..." She lingered on and her ranting was getting on his nerves. Rubbing his forehead, he looked at her. "Fine, I don't care."

This caused her to squeal in happiness and room to her friends to tell them.

Sesshoumaru watched Kikyo and her friends walk off before he said anything. "You know, little brother, she's not a trust worthy person." He stated as Inuyasha closed his locker.

Inuyasha growled and turned toward his brother. "What does it matter who I choose to date or not, Sesshoumaru?" He snarled at his brother and the only reply he got back was a cold stare and a scoff as his older brother walked off. Passing Kagome and her group of friends along the way.

Taking a small glance at Kagome, he remembered her from when she was with Inuyasha. Poor human girl, if she knew at the beginning that Inuyasha was a player, she might not be in the predicament she was in. Nor would she be in pain...

After Rin had closed her locker and recrieved the books and papers she needed, they headed out back to the parking lot to get a ride home from Sango. The girls were all going to stay at Sango's house for the night and all they needed to do was drop Kagome off at home so she could get her wallet.

Jumping into Sango's car, they closed the doors and buckled their seat belts. Sango backed out of the parking lot and an idea struck Kagome. As if a lightening bolt hit a telephone pole.

"Oh my Kami..." She whispered and all the girls turned to her. "What is it, Kagome?" Rin asked from the back seat behind Sango. "I just got the most brilliant idea..."

Now they were interested, their heads propped up in anticipation. "What is it, Kagome?" They asked in unison.

"Okay, guys..." She paused and turned in her passenger seat chair, "What if I told you I have the perfect way to get revenge on the whole school and more." A sly grin fromed itself on her lips.

The girls looked at eachother as Sango stopped at a red light. "And, what is your idea?" Ayame asked with one eyebrow raised.

"Well, you know...Since Spring is the time of change...And well...It's Spring Break. And it's senior year...I think we should have real, acutal make overs." She staggered to say.

The girls looked at her and Rin squealed. "I'm so in." She stated with a bright smile on her face. Kagome eyed her other two friends. Sango smiled. "I'm so in." Ayame smiled. "I think it'd be fun."

The traffic light turned green and Sango high tailed it to Kagome's house.

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Chapter End.

A/N: Muhahaha. How was that? Pretty good I think. A new chapter should be on tonight. I'm obsessed with this story. Okay, starting new one. Chow! ~.^

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