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Perfection by Kiba

Hidden

Longer Summary: Kagome has been hidden because her scent, her looks, and almost everything about her is perfect. Her sister and mother hate her for it and they hide her away. Her only friends are ones she's not suppose to have from the village near by.

One day Kagome snuck out just so she could get some fresh air. Though Kagome is beautiful she's also intelligent. She knows what she is a White Inu and she knows that she's nearly perfect.

Now though she's sitting under the moon and looking up at the stars. A shooting star goes by and Kagome wishes for what she's always wished for and that is to be free. Free from this life, and free from family. To have to someone to love her for and not her looks; that's what she truly wants and Kagome falls asleep like she told herself not to do.

During that night Lord Sesshoumaru, Rin, Jaken, and AhUn had been traveling by when a breeze floats by Sesshoumaru's nose. He turns toward the scent he smells wanting to know what could ever smell so... so perfect.

He finds himself in a meadow opened up to the stars. Looking towards the middle he sees an angel in his eyes. He's drawn to her and finds himself sitting beside her. He could smell the tears she's shed and wonders why someone would make such a beautiful creature cry at all?

Instantly he knows she is apart of his clan but not his pack or family line. He decides he won't leave her alone and brings his own 'group' to where she is. He waits and when she awakens he knows he most have her, forever and for always....

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Chapter 1- Hidden

Kagome sat staring up at the stars above her mother's large estate. Today was her 16th birthday and unlike most people Kagome wished she wasn't with her family.

Well she couldn't exactly call them family, more like the people who hate her the most. She sighed thinking about it. She understood why her sister didn't like her because there were many reason but her mother... well she never understood.

Kagome's mother Lady Yukena of high blood and class was rich and they didn't get along very well. Though her mother wasn't apart of the Youkai Four, which ruled the north, south, east, and west she was just one step under.

Her father had died many years ago and she missed him. That was understandable since when her father was alive Kagome was free. Not anymore since her mother hated that her younger daughter was... prefect as she called it. Her mother for some dumb reason wanted Kikyo to be better then her and she loved her more.

Her sister Kikyo was mainly jealous that her younger sister was more beautiful then she. Plus they had always fought and never got along so she understood why her sister didn't like her.

Kagome's a full-blooded Shiro-Inu and from others she's met they say she has a beautiful scent. She is prefect when it comes to looks and she's intelligent. Well of course she; she spent most of her time in the library instead of anywhere else.

She sighed again and looked back into her room. How she longed to leave this place and never return. Kagome didn't want to leave her friends but she didn't like leaving here. She wished every night that someone would take her away and love her but since she turned 16 she wasn't sure if that would ever happen.

Her mother had kept her hidden from the word ever since her father passed away. When she did go out her had to wear a dark colored cloak with a hood that covered her face. She wasn't allowed to be seen and her mother always said she'd think about giving her away to a noble men after Kikyo was mated.

She didn't want to just be bought like some pet. She growled low in her throat thinking about it her aura shone with rage. She wanted to be loved not given to someone who would treat her like some prize.

Calming herself Kagome walked into her room. It wasn't that big but it fit her perfectly and she liked it. It was made in different reds and she felt like she was swimming in blood. Mmmm blood how she longed to kill something with her claws.

She would go out tomorrow and make sure got to kill something. Her mother never said she couldn't go into the forest as long as she stayed away from people. Her mother never did want her to have friends or companions but she had got past that.

A few years ago she had met a taijiya and monk in the village just west of the estate. They had been traveling together and stopped in town for a short visit, which turned into living there.

A laugh escaped her lips when she thought of all the times Sango had hit the monk with her boomerang like weapon. Miroku who was a lecherous monk seemed to fancy fondling her backside in public.

Kagome had also met a kitsune who lived with his own family in a cave to the south. He wasn't hiding or being hidden but he liked to play and always made her laugh. Little Shippo was just so cute and she longed to have a family like his. They loved each other unlike hers. Shippo had always asked her why he couldn't see her face and she would change the subject because she didn't want him to know she was hidden from the world around her.

She turned and looked into a mirror on her wall. She didn't understand why someone would think her prefect but who cared. As long as she did as her mother asked she would be fine and be able to live without a beating.

Her cheekbones were high, her face the shape of a delicate oval, and what some called a endearingly pointed chin, though not too much. Her nose that used to be childish was now pert, her lips full but not pouting, her eyes azure, and her eyelashes were like sooty fans against her skin when she closed them. Her hair was let down and fan out over her shoulders. Unlike her mother and sister her hair was like ocean waves, and held a healthy glow to it. The black with silver wisps went perfectly with her kimono.

Looking closer you could make out two straight but gently curving silver markings on each cheek. A small but bold, creamy yet pale cross upon her forehead, and if you were looking close enough you'd see the small blue flames lapping at the edges. Her fangs were prefect as well and she smiled at her reflection.

Looking down she looked at the outfit she was wearing. It fit her curves but was loose enough to walk without complications. It was a black color but shone like ivory. The hems were silver and the sleeves long. She lifted her hand and looked at the beautifully shaped claws and up toward the markings on her wrist. She had them on her ankles and around her waist as well.

Eyes twinkling as she went to climb into her not large but not to small bed. It fit into her room just nicely without touching any other object. Well with the exception of her bedside table.

She turned one last time looking out of her window toward the stars. She closed her eyes and waited for sleep to take her. When it didn't she sighed and got out of bed. Her silky outfit flowed behind her as she went back out onto her balcony.

Her mind just wouldn't sleep tonight and that was fine she didn't need to sleep anyways. No not as much as she did at least. A breeze floated by licking at her ivory skin and she inhaled as much as she could.

Letting the air out of her lungs Kagome looked up at the moon. It seemed to haunt her and yet made her want to leapt from her balcony and run far away. She shivered when the wind picked up but giggled when thinking of Sango and Miroku.

Tomorrow well today she would go to the village and see them. At least she'd have something to do. Her gaze landed on the eastern horizon hoping that it didn't take to long for the sun to rise today.

Her eyes closed as she wished once again that she could leave from this life. She crossed her fingers unconsciously and wished with all of her heart.

She didn't see the figure standing in the corner of her room. He was tall and held a warming smile. He was like smoke watching her and nodded when she wished to be free, and live a life away from her mother and sister.

For now though Kagome would have to wait before she got her wish and for now she would still be hidden away. When she left the balcony to return to her room the figure vanished.

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Kiba:

Well where to begin ok first this is a new story and I have another one in the making.

Another thing for people who liked Dragons of the Underworld I deleted it because of a few reasons so its gone.

Ok hope you liked this and it will get better I promise and thx for reading it

Kiba

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