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Golden Beauty by Unokitsune

Prologue

Evil comes to those in many ways

Taking different forms

And can go many days

Unseen and uniformed

It will attack the unwary

With it's deceiving tricks

Especially when it pretends to be holy

While playing down its pricks.

Remember this young one

As your destined journey begins...

Opening her heavenly white-golden eyes, the young teenage upcoming goddess, Eclypsia, arose from sitting on her rose colored legs for nearly and hour deep in thought.

Standing, she stretched and looked up into the moon. "I wonder what mother meant when she said that." Eclypsia thought aloud.

Feeling startled by the disturbing thought, she spread her golden-feathered wings and allowed her Sun-Gold mane and tail flow in the change of wind current.

Her long hair extended just beyond her elbow length. Her bushy-like tail was her hair's length and a half. She wore a simple gray yukata tied only to her strong yet frail body by a silken-blue sash. Similar fabric was used in decorating the collar of her gown that, even though was a little low of her collar-bone, didn't give much cleavage.

Because she walked across the water to a small island made of sand dunes and big boulders emerging from underneath the hidden lake, her yukata was pulled up to her knees, allowing her light rose colored skin to glow under the 1st quarter moonlight.

Still pondering on what her mother meant when she spoke telepathically through Eclypsia's mind and vision, she stared absent-mindedly at the beautiful moon. Her eyes could not be mistaken for showing worry, as this deeply got to her. Out of normal feminine habit, Eclypsia pulled back her hair revealing long pointed demon-like ears.

She began singing a song, just like she always did when something bothered her or if the mood just kicked in. She was vaguely aware of the familiar presence that appeared from the brush behind her near shore. This presence would be the cause of unforgivable pain. It would also be her first taste of betrayal, and the start of her destiny.

When she stopped singing in her harmony tune, a voice she knew called out to her.

"Singing and staring never solves anything but more confusion," Eclypsia turned to see the face of her sensei and long friend, who was a practicing monk, "I should know, every time I do that, my sensei always pounds me, or leaves me bewildered, either way, it's still pointless." He smiled, hiding a mischievous and lustful face behind his mask.

"Lucious, you know how I feel whenever you do that. Please, for simple modesty, don't do that again."

He only smirked and sat down by the bank, picking up stray wood as he did so. Using some flint he got from one of his many pockets, he began to make a fire.

Look for the signs that conceal

The true face behind the mask

Only then will the true self be shown

Be wary of Red.

'Mother, you make no sense to me sometimes.' Eclypsia spoke through her mind.

Your journey begins with the fallen angel.

Hurry child, you must flee him unseen.

Lest he bends your soul,

And makes you do his bidding.

Her next unspoken reply was cut short when Lucious spoke, "Still talking to yourself, heh, as always. Come here, I want to show you something."

Since she couldn't think of anything to say to him for being so rude, Eclypsia flew rather than walk, to were he was sitting.

When she got there, Lucious stared absent mindedly into the fire rather than look at her.

"Isn't it beautiful?" he asked, almost to himself, "What is?" she asked. "Red the color red." He said.

'Red, beware of Red.' Eclypsia remembered, although the last word she had asked out loud.

"Uh hmm... Red." Lucious said almost in a whisper.

Hurry, my child

You must flee

He is evilly wild

And won't set you free

He favors Red

And smells of death

Hurry chant the spell

And do it well

You must flee

His evil glee

Without thinking about it, she began to cant words in her head, which was when she discovered that Lucious was on top of her with lust filled eyes, slashing at her thick yukata.

Betrayal filled her eyes when she looked at the evil monk.

Not a moment to soon did she finish the spell, the spell that would separate her soul from her body, her only means of escape, did she watch from above as the monk she once knew, raped her body. Anger caused by a series of emotions couldn't clog her vision as the monk ravaged her body. He continued to stick his shaft in and out of the empty shell, oblivious that the real Eclypsia floated a good distance above him, raping the body for what it was worth.

"Lucious," Eclypsia stated from above, "By the time my powers recover, I will make you regret this, for there will be nowhere to run or hide, I'll make sure of it, TRAITOR!" with that, she sprinted away from the oblivious ravaging monk.

~*~*~*~

He played with her breast while raping her, unknowing that she was just an empty shell.

Because of his lust filled mood, he did not see that her true form, her soul, had escaped, leaving him with a lifeless shell underneath him of what she once was. "At long last," he said between grinding and pumping, "Your power will be mine!" he laughed an evil laugh unaware that he was being watched by a hanyou in a white baboon pelt surrounded by demon bees.

"Kuu kuu kuu," Naraku laughed to himself, "So, I find myself starring at a traitorous monk, hmm... I may have use for him yet." With that, Naraku left to devise an evil plan.

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
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