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My Dark Deed. by Ticoflute2006

CHapter One: My Love

"Kagome, I said run!" Inuyasha's desparate raspy voice cuts into my thoughts. "NO!" I scream back, "I'm not leaving without you!" Inuyasha dodges a blast sent by Naraku and turns to me again, "Don't be stupid! You'll get yourself killed." he yells. I stand my ground, 'No way I'm leaving without you, I'm tired of running, tired of hiding, I'm going to fight,' looking around, I manage to find an arrow lodged in a tree. Running to it, with my good arm, I grab the shaft and pull it out with all my might.

Setting the arrow on my bow, I focus my blurring eyes at Naraku's heart, pain is shooting up and down my bad arm, "Please, kami, hit your mark!" I plead, pulling the string back, I release it and watch as the arrow glows a bright pink, "No!" I yell, Naraku has seen the arrow, with one of his branches, me picke Inuyasha up and used him as a shield, with all my might, I focus my thoughts on the arrow, "MOVE!" I yell, the arrow glows blue and turns to the direction I willed it, missing Inuyasha by cenimeters. I sigh and fall to my knees, 'NO KAGOME GET UP!' my mind screams, "h-how did I do that?" I wonder, shaking it from my head, I get up.

Naraku has a thick branch around Inuyasha's neck, "I will take great pleasure in wringing the life out of you!" he yelled, I watch as Naraku laughs at the dying look on Inuyasha's face, "NO!" I yell, Naraku shoots his head towards me, "You troublesome miko, I'll kill you as well," he sneered. With a massive branch he knocks me aside, I lfeel the air getting knocked out of me, "K...k..." Inuiyasha tries to call my name, but is losing conciousness fast. I breath deeply as me lungs regain their air. 'That bastard, that fucking bastard, he has hurt many, killed many, raped many, I will not forgive him. HE HAS TO DIE!' a warm feeling errupts from my hands, I look down to see them glowing, 'Now, YOU HAVE TO KILL HIM NOW, WHILE YOU HAVE THE POWER!!!' I ball my hands into fists, anger and love is surging through me.

"NARAKU!!!!" My voice finds power as I scream. Running abnormally fast I dash straight at Naraku's heart, the hanyou barely has time to scream as my fist punches through his ribcage and into his black heart. "Biiiitttttchhhhhhhhhhh!" he snarls, I watch as his body dissintagrates into maisma. Inuyasha kneels on the ground hand to his throat, "Kagome...how did you do that?" he asks. The warm feeling leaves my hands, I feel so cold. I turn to the hanyou, "I....I don't know..." I whisper, Inuyasha staggeres up, gashes and blood all over his body, a grin comes to his face, "We've killed him...WE'VE FINALLY KILLED HIM!!!!" I realize this and run to him, "WE DID!!!" I run into his arms and laugh, his hug is tight and loving, "Oh Kagome," he whisperes. I smile and look up at him, "Yes, Inuyasha?" I ask, the habyou looks down at me with soft eyes, "Now that this is all over...will...w-wil you stay?" he asks timidly, tear form at the corners of my eyes, "Yes, oh yes Inuyasha, I will,"

We stay in a tight embrace, finally breaking free, he turns, "Lets look for the others," he says, I nod and begin my search, it doesn't take long though, I gasp and begin to cry...

THERE I DID IT YAAYYYY!! IM A BIG KID NOW!!! LOL

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
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