wow
that was wonderfully sinful
>:DDD

That was..wow!! I feel kind of sinful after reading that, but I must say that if I were one of Sesshomaru's disciples, I would beat Jaken in my worship. Every minute you be a good time to pray!! That was amazing. Excellent. Oh, I can't wait for the next update of Breeding School either!!

I'm assuming there isn't going to be more? Why of why not? Can't you see that it is aching to be more than just a one shot? I hope you consider making this into an ongoing story.

dear kiba,
it's a great plot can you please make into more than a one shot. i would like to read any story that contiunes from the ending i would love to see a fight between gods and if the lord of death rules thanks have a great day!!

i really liked this chapter and i hope you write more soon like....tomorrow lol and i also thought your lemon was just fine

Very good! The idea is an interesting one, I look forward to reading more.